| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 11:30 EST
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Wah! What a place to stop! YOu better update next week! Nice 2+5 interaction, I love the verbal sparring, I hope you give us more!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 22, 2003 02:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry this is so short but I'm not fealing well so I'm doing this in a hurry ... This chapter is great and I want to read more so please update soon .. Thanks for the update.. TTFN
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 14:55 EST
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*pant pant drool drool* yummy..lemmony fresh@@ thankyou!
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 13:28 EST
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Sorry I haven't reviewed this story yet, I've read all the chapters so far and I love them all, they're really great, i meant to put a review up last month but my computer kinda just went on me so yeah I'm writing my review right now, oh yeah you'll be hearing from me again when I read your next chapter after u put it up, ne ways... I love this story and it is a great one! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 21:08 EST
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^_____________^ HEEEE. Nice job. That was very sweet. Can't wait to see what Sally finds out. ~Wanders away skipping and humming~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 12:09 EST
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Aw sweet :) and hot :P but I wonder what the medical exam will turn up!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 18, 2003 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was great and so is this story... And I look forward to reading more...I can't wait until your next update so please update soon so I can read more.. Thanks for the update TTFN
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 17:55 EST
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O.o !!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!!!! LOL! I know, I know! I'm a hentai, wat can I say? I throughly enjoyed this chapter. I can't WAIT too see wat'll happen after the medical exams. I hate to say it, cuz ur one of my fav authors, but it's just dat ya kinda struck a nerve this time. Maybe it's juts that I'm anal bout this. But, I was a tad disappointed in that one little aspect of this chapter. I dunno how to 'splain it. But anyway, overall it was another successful chapter. Sooooo, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! ^.^ AND FINISH WAT U START!! LOL! I think u know wat I mean . . . ^____^ Hee! Hee! ~Wanders away thinking Hentai 1x2 thoughts~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 12:42 EST
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Hahaha, still loving the interaction with Wufei, this is gonna be fun! It was interesting to see a realistic 'first day', it certainly rings true. Wonder what the medical will turn up though...Keep it up, still lovin' it, still readin' it!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 00:48 EST
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Yeay...lemmony fresh!! thankyou...keep going girlfriend
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 11, 2003 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was sweet ...Wufei will get revenge LOL... This story just keeps geting better and better and I can't wait till your next update.. so until then TTFN
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Title: Beautifull chapter
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: December 11, 2003 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love to read your fics... you way to write is so fluid... the plot is so original... ahhh it was so hot and sweet how they explore each other... let me tell you... i cant wait for the lemon... jejeje im hentai ne?... i love this fic... you are a great author
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 13:26 EST
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Ahh, the interaction with FeiFei is just as I thought it would be :) Pleeeease put more of that in, I love seeing him get teased! And finally getting a little serious! You sure like teasing us, ne? But that's okay, it's more believable to make them take their time, and we get to enjoy a longer fic!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 12:24 EST
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^.^ Hee! Hee! Good Chapter. I love the ending. That was so sweet. *Huggles G-boys* More action next time!! **Grins manically** Take it to da next level, u know? ^___^ I wanna see Duo with child!! Update soon!! ~Wanders off waiting for the big news~
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 11:37 EST
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AAAWWWWWW!! How adorable!! **Huggles Duo & Heero immensely** That was sooooo sweet. *Sniffles* Hee! Hee! Perfect portrayal of Fei-chan!! Update soon! ~Wanders quickly away from katana wielding Wufei~ ^.^
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