| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 05, 2003 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter ..It is great that there on earth... I hope things go good for them and I can't wait till Duo becomes a mom lol ... update soonplease until next time TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 08:42 EST
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I hope the guys work with Wufei a bit, that could be an amusing trio, their characters are so different.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 22:37 EST
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YAY!! My honnies are joining da Preventers!!! **GLOMPS DUO & HEERO** How wondeful. Dat was so sweet of Heero-- aww!! *squeals* Don't forget!! Heero has to pester Duo bout his "." ^_____^ Hee! Hee! Can't wait for the next chapter! ~Wanders after fleeing Duo and Heero~**GLOMP!!** ^.~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2003 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give you higher than a 10 I would .. Oh sure I can here you go 100% ..This story is that good !!! I love the was you present Heero being sweet and all... And the story line is a good one to so you got it going on ..So know all you need to do is update,update,update and I will be happy ... thanks for the update got to go TTFN
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Reviewed By: leemax^_^ On: December 02, 2003 15:28 EST
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Let me just say "Oh man are you doing real good." keep it up @_@ waiting while wanting sex seens. :)
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 13:04 EST
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I think what said it best was what Heero thought right at the first: The only way he'd leave again would be in a body bag. That was a neat, concice and vivid way of showing the depths of his feelings, it made me all fuzzy :)
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Reviewed By: littlefox1227 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
9th ch. and the storie's still good. like the angst. good work! keep going.
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Reviewed By: Patty 40 On: November 29, 2003 19:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter..And I can't wait to see what comes next Will they take ? I hpoe so ... We please update again soon ..TTFN
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Title: chimera
Reviewed By: ifa On: November 29, 2003 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is PMS'ing poor Heero head off badly. can't believe how much like a hot tempered female you manage to potrayed his character in this fic. you better fix that soon or else!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 11:25 EST
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Excellent chapter, with a lot happening! I hope you update quickly! (And I really like the touches of humour and images you use, they're all the better since they lighten up tense emotional scenes!)
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Reviewed By: littlefox1227 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 20:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! i like that you're not rushing the whole thing. that heero and duo are dating and taking things slow instead of just sleeping together as soon as they admit to having feelings for eachother. i like that. i can't wait for ch. 9! i'll be looking for it. xoxo
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Title: Arigato!
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 09:56 EST
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Just wanted to say a heartfelt thank you to all of you who have read this fic and/or popped in a review to it. Your comments and feed back are very much appreciated and it warms me no end to know that you are enjoying this fic so far. I will try to update it a quickly as I can but RL is also hassling me so unfortunately I don't have as much time to write as I would like. Hopefull after the next week or so things will calm down and I can write more often. Again, thank you all from the bottom of my heart for all your lovely comments so far. I hope you continue to read and enjoy and that the fic will also continue to keep you all sitting on the edge of your seats wondering what is going to happen next. *huggles* ShenLong www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com The home of ShenLong
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 04:06 EST
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aww..poor duo-chan he's going though his period...*snuggles* don worry..i'll explain everything to ay..and then we'll get hee-chan to go to the store and buy all the icecream 20 bucks can afford and we'll pig out watching chick flicks and eating popcorn while we paint our nails...that always helps Rose when she's got bad pms
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 26, 2003 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor Heero, Duo is really bitchy. Although I can sympathize with him. I wonder how Duo will react? Will he let Heero know? Or will Heero find out on his own. Update soon and keep up the GREAT job.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 26, 2003 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo --PMS we all know it Duo needs to go the doctor... this chapter was great I hope you update again soon...TTFN
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