| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 11, 2004 18:12 CDT
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Excellent chapter! In answer to your question. No, we don't think about it. Groups of men standing there having an intellectual conversation (yes, it can happen). Good looking woman appears, instinct takes over and we revert to the level of drooling idiots until they are out of sight. Seems to be one of natures jokes. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 11, 2004 18:03 CDT
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Excellent (and rather strange) chapter. Still going, almost up to the most reccent one now... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 11, 2004 17:48 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Very amusing so far! The comment about pink suiting her...very nicely done. Look forwards to reading more. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza PS. Romantic present for a guy...um...edible underwear.
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Reviewed By: Asako On: July 11, 2004 13:00 CDT
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Update update update!plzzzz update soon!!!!!!!
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Title: update please!
Reviewed By: jen_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and i think it is really good. i like the fact that you have put all the characters in one big fanfic....you don't see a lot of that! PLEASE UP DATE SOON...IAM DYING HERE!!-Jen xoxo
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Reviewed By: a-fan On: June 10, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so please update soon i really like this and if it is possible make some thing bad happen to kikyou i mean really bad other than that you could allways try something like the boys cabin collapassing so they would have to bunk with the girls for thr rest of the story and hobo imean hojo would suffer on the couch muhahahhahahahhahahhahaha
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Reviewed By: U NOE WHO On: June 08, 2004 21:14 CDT
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please make them find out kikyo is a hermafrodite and then have inuyasha puke in a corner and them laughing at her or just make kikyo a hermafrodite
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i love this story so much!!!!!!!your OCs just bring this story alive with how livly and hilarous they are and the IY gang is as funny as ever and the thiny with Hojo you have going is hilarous too up-date soon and i mean soon please^_^
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Reviewed By: Melphina xpg On: June 05, 2004 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story buuuuuuuuuuuuuut hate Kikyou Can tou please put more Inuyasha/Kagome moments in bed and some thing bad to happen to kikyou in the contest she started in archery
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Reviewed By: AP [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:10 CDT
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good, UPDATE SOON PLZ
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: June 02, 2004 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs u so hard that u cant breath* YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (dont ask i'm sugar high at the moment and am really scary. my friends are afraid of me when i'm sugar high) *does the happy dance* (a very scary dance that i do when i'm sugar high. dont ask i bought some hurshies chocolate i ate the whole big bag and it was yummy) ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ SO MAKE SURE YOU UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ ^-^ ^-^
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 18:10 CDT
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lol way to go..
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 18:42 CDT
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.....Lotsa grammar/sp/Japanese/name errors.. One, tis Shippou. two, tis Sesshoumaru. three, tis Kikyou. four, tis yarou. five, tis Houjou. six, tis Kouga. seven, are Tetsusaiga/Toukijin/Tenseiga gonna be used in this story...? And you have a very unique writing style, haven't seen one like your's before...but you might wanna get another beta to go over your grammar/spelling mistakes, they take away from the story cos you have to stop and figure out what you mean. Tis very good otherwise *nods* update soon. Jaa na.
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Reviewed By: yeah... On: May 25, 2004 20:53 CDT
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good
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have no idea why im reviewing twice prbably cuz im sugar-high....oh well, great story update soon! and you're hilarius! -Drakness-
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