| "Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 269 ] |
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: March 29, 2004 01:19 CST
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I think you misunderstood me. *sweat drop* I thought that might happen. I KNOW people make mistakes. (I do it all the time) Didn't I tell you you could kill everyone but give Bakura a happy ending? I mean it. If you lose reviewers because they don't like something you write don't be too worried about it. You can't please EVERYONE. ...Wait a minute... you killed Marik! You ruined Bakura's happy ending! Naughty writer. ^_^ Well I'll be here until the end anyway. PEOPLE NEED TO GROW UP!
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 29, 2004 00:19 CST
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he's going to use Ryou? he's going to USE Ryou to get back at Yami? he's going to.....ok, i'll shut up. but Yaaammiiii!!!!!!! can't you see Ryou's in pain and he really, really, really loves you???? Setooooo..............treat him nicer!!!!!! love ya!!
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 29, 2004 00:10 CST
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weelllllll....................now that they're dead...... WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! NOT MARRRIKKK!!!!! I'm ok with Jounouchi dying, he's not exactly my favourite anyway.... but MARRRRIIIIIIIKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Seto-sama how could you?? The least you could do was treat Ryou nicely so that he would be COAXED away from Yami!!! don't kill Seto-sama, though. please don't. you can make him turn good, but don't kill him. please. i love him!!!
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 29, 2004 00:04 CST
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have i reviewed this chapter before?? no?? yes?? i dunno, but I'll review again! so sad, what happened with Malik and Marik!! but Ryou got GOOD sex this time!! dat's good.... continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 28, 2004 21:08 CST
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alkhdjsfahkjlrweqbjAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYOU CAME WAYWAYWAYWAYWAYWAYWAYWAY TOOTOOTOOTOOTOOT FAST!!! OMG I WAS SERIOUSLY GONNA SCREAM IF I DIDN'T KNOW MYMOM WOULD YELL AT ME! OMG WTF! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG THEY'RE DEAD!DEADEADEADEADEADEADEADEADEADEAD!!! OMG * sticks millenium rod in ur face* REINCARNATE THEM!!!!
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: March 28, 2004 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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You may not remember me, but I reviewed before (110 reviews ago) but I had to say something about this story. Jeez, shouldn't angst like this be at AFF.net? It's pretty decent angst anyway. But I notice while well done and you do update frequently it seems you are rushing the writing abit. Maybe it's just me. Forks? In Egypt? I'm no historian or anything but I pretty sure Egypt didn't have them. I notice other questionable things but again I'm not the person to talk to on them. Interesting plot twists to say the least. The newest one was unexpected. What a sick man you made Seto. And Ryou doesn't even know about it. Ugh I have this feeling I know how this is going to turn out. That is if it has anything to do with the millennium items.
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Reviewed By: Mill On: March 28, 2004 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Millenia) I'm not a fan of sex scenes so thats why the seven, but enjoyed pretty much everything else about it. That last part of the recent chapter was really a sharp turn. Sheesh Seto better get his ass kicked you hear me!?
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Reviewed By: divastarz On: March 28, 2004 11:15 CST
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NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!JOEY!! well this is a good chapter, even though i dont really like the whole beheading thing but its ur fic and u can do wat u want with it. C-ya!
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Title: .... O.O
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 11:03 CST
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O________O" ;-; whhy??
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Title: O.o!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_o OOOOH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WTF! please tell me i read wrong, and that i didnt see marik and jou's heads on a platter, seperated from their bodies ;-; omg omg omg omg omg... im in shock, its hard to write the review.. seriously!!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHH TELL ME IT ISNT TRUE!!!!!! tell me its not true.. *starts crying* ;-; HOW COULD U??! and yami shood git bitch slapped.. as for seto... *eyes glaze over with burning rage* IM GUNNA MURDERIZE HIS TALL ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ... whhhhhhhhhhhy..?? ;-;
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Title: @_@!!!!!
Reviewed By: CiJay On: March 28, 2004 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!! O.O!!!!! Holy Hells!!!!!! *pets Malik and Ryou* Incredible plot twist there....wow.....I'm still a little shaken by that one....@_@ You are an incredible writer...except now everytime I try to actually watch YGO on TV, I hate Seto with a passion...Oh well. Keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: . On: March 28, 2004 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this story is going to turn out where everyone dies eventurally, please tell me so in the next chapter cause I don't wanna read that kinda of Angst
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 07:55 CST
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Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Not Jono and Malik!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but at least the RYou angst is back... I love it! how will Marik react? I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 27, 2004 16:39 CST
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Goood Yami! Good Yami! you're making Ryou happy! Yami: -_________-... WWAAAHHHHH but Malik is so anguishly ssaaaaddd!!!! And Marik too! AWW....Seto is so evil! Kill him!( T_TWhy am I saying this?TT_TT) *shines,plishes millenium rod then looks at it* Maybe I should give him his rod back.... Nope! forget that! I dun wanna ruin your story! Malik: What an excuse... ^_____^ But I love it anyways! Keep it up! And that was really good for a story written at 3:00 in the morning!!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 27, 2004 16:34 CST
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AAWWwww....Poor Bakura! YAmi had better let him go soon and stop caring about his own pleasure! (even though he's making ryou so happy...) but he should make some time where he can free Bakura! Me want Bakura healthy ASAP!!
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