| "Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 269 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 29, 2004 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I forgot to mention...in my intensely dangerously mental instability earlier on, that your story's getting really exciting and has been great all along! I can't wait to read on, and I'm glad you intend to update so quickly! This story's my fav and I can't wait for any update to come up, so please update soon! Your story's awesome and I really wanna continue reading!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 29, 2004 18:45 CST
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Ok Choko: You better pay Seto revengethat outshines those plans of the count of Monte-Cristo... She's still mourning Jounouchi's death and won't post her own review...-______-*sweatdrop*...
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Title: YOU KILLED JOUNOUCHI!
Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 29, 2004 18:35 CST
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YOU KILLED JOUNOUCHI!!!!!*traumatized and faints*--*wakes some time later* KILL HIM! KILL SETO!!!! HE is now my sworn enemy! I will tear him limb from limb! put him on the stretching machine and stretched every little part of him until he breaks into pieces that will never be able to be put together again! I will crush his head and stupid peabrain into soup not even dustmites will wanna eat! I will cut off his dick and feed it to the dogs, and let him watch it! I will cut off his head, take a picture of it and blow it up to be displayed on my room so I can throw darts at is! I will crush his 'manhood' and let him live with it! I will wound him permanently and make him live through it longer than sleeping beauty every slept! I WILL MAKE SURE HE SUFFERS FOR ALL HE'S DONE! HE'LL BE MADE MY WHIPPING BOY AND SEE HOW HE LIKES IT! SOO EVILL!! SETO KILLED MY BABY, THEN KILLED MARIK! ATTACKED MALIK AND FRIGGIN' BEAT HIM; ATTACKED BAKURA! TOOK RYOU HOSTAGE AND DoEs THINGS TO HIM! WANTS TO TAKE OVER THE THRONE AND TURN IT INTO A LOVE HOTEL LAND! I HATE HIM! HE'S SO FRIGGIN' SEX-CRAZY HE'D SCREW A BANANA! *pant....pant....(out of)wheeze(BREATH)* YOU'd BETTER MAKE HIM SUFFER IN THE MOST HORRIBLE WAY TILL YOUR TORTURE IS INFAMOUSLY CALLED THE MIROKI METHOD! *huggles Jou plushie and cooes* YoU'rE sAfE wItH mE..........*heart*
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 29, 2004 18:15 CST
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AAWWWww...everyones so sad! And please kill Seto off soon? please? I really am starting...TO LOATHE! HATE! DESPISE! ALL THE OTHER SYNONYMS OF HATE HIM! Aw...poor ryou's already so sad! He's gonna have a heart attack when he finds out that Marik and Jounouchi were beheaded...ok i can't review a lot right now cuz janjans is screaming SHE KILLED HIM! SHE KILLED JONO! right beside me...oy i've gone deaf...
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 29, 2004 18:09 CST
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FUCKING HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FIRST YOU BREAK UP YAMI AND RYOU! NEXT THAT FRIGGIN' BITCH SHIZUKA APPEARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW YOU KILL MY JOUNOUCHI!!!!!!!!!!!! AND MARIK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DOES SETO EXPECT TO TAME MALIK THAT WAY!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW YOU WOULD KILL JOUNOUCHI, BUT I WAS SOOOOO AFRAID!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Me Again!
Reviewed By: CiJay On: March 29, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot twist may have shaken me up, but it was in a good way! Honest! Please keep writing! *glares more at Seto* Seriously, I hate that man now.....*huggles Malik and Bakura and Ryou* I love you three! *tear* Keep writing! I can't wait for the end!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 16:11 CST
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yeah, don quit now, I love the fic! And people, I'd jus like to remind you this is angst! not happy fics! angst!
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: divastarz On: March 29, 2004 15:31 CST
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PLZ DONT QUIT! Ur such a great writer! IT doesnt matter what certain people thing, ur the writer! As long as u have 1 person supporting u, u can finish this. Plus, many people wanna see the end of this. NEVER GIVE UP! TRUST UR INSTINCTS!( that sounds kinda corny dont it)
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Title: WAAAAAA O.O
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DONT U DARE EVEN CONSIDER THE THOUGHT OF NOT UPDATING ANYMORE!!! who cares if no one else likes the plot.. XD, neways, i LOVE it.. still cant believe marik and jou are dead tho .. ;-; MAAAAAAARIK!!!!!! ;-; IM WILL KILL SETO! AND WHERE THE HELL IS YAMI??! neways, PLEASE keep updating, i love this story and the plot is awesome, ur not going too fast either!! lol
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor, Ryou and Malik. It's a great story even though it's sad in parts. Keep at it.
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Title: NO THEY CAN'T BE DEAD!
Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: March 29, 2004 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG!! YOU MADE ME CRY!!! :( This chapter was so sad. WHY?!? OMG!! *sob* Sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I've been busy. But I finaly caught up! *sob* Poor Jou and Marik. *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: WeepingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 14:36 CST
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i hate you.(i just finished CH16)
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, I think you should bring them back, stop killing everyone off. Maybe Set could take pity on some lost souls and restore them maybe? TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 07:02 CST
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OOPS! yeah, wrong names! >_< dang it! well, I love the plot twists! don't let me hear anyone criticize them!
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 29, 2004 04:05 CST
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While I don't agree with you killing of Marik and Jou last chapter, this chapter does have some redeemable qualities. Besides, it would be a shame to stop updating now when you've already put so much work into this. PS: I hope Shadi shows up and uses the millennium scales on Seto...
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