| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 15:57 CDT
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Cliffies, annoying? yes. Could we live without them? Unfortunatly, no. I hope hope hope you update soon. I foresee a lemon in the near (hopefully near near NEAR) future. I'm so happy they made up. The puppy kinda seems like Inuyasha, or SHippo. Always craving Kagomes affection, and interrupting her when she's with someone else lol. I think they're "hook up" at a reasonable pace. If its so fast or two slow I can't tell, alls I know is it's grrrr8!! But what's gonna happen when Rin and her friends find out? Im scared it will get really dramatic and everyone will hate Kag :
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Reviewed By: me On: April 30, 2004 23:32 CDT
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i would realy like to see a sequal like about how they hide they're relationship and such
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww I think this fanfic is really sweet even though at first they were broken up there back together so happy ^_^
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Reviewed By: FLUFFYFOREVER On: April 30, 2004 17:18 CDT
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I have a question, did Inuyasha and Kagome suceeded in making out?, I hope not. Please make it not!
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Reviewed By: SESSFOREVER On: April 30, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO FAR I LIKE IT AND MOST OF ALL, I LOVE SESS AND KAGOME PAIRING, THERE MY FAV. I'M GLAD YOU CHOSE THEM AS A PAIRING IN YOUR STORY.
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Reviewed By: SesshyLove On: April 30, 2004 15:53 CDT
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I like how you made Rin Sesshy's daughter. I think they are perfect at that role. Sesshy as a father and Rin as a daughter, how cute!!!
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: April 30, 2004 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, the puppy was adorable and sweet, but the ring was great! I'm glad she finally forgave him. Should they hook up? I have no clue. I just like to be surprised. Another great chapter. Keep going can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was adorable, hehe. im surprised sesshie didnt slit the dogs throat right then and there, lol. thats gotta be annoying, kinda like the phone ringing or a knock at the front door ya know? lol. yes, i dont see anything wrong with them hooking up so soon, its classic make up sex. i think it would be cute if the got like engaged or something...but then theres always rin...maybe you could like kill her off or something, lol.JK!! dont hurt me *ducks behind chair* or maybe rin wont have a problem with it, shes always so happy and carefree anyways, maybe shell just view it as the perfect plan...i dont know. im at work so im not really able to think straight, lol. okay, good luck with that though, hope others have better suggestions, heh. ~*~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~*~*~*
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 14:54 CDT
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What exactly did you revise on this chapter? And after carefully reading your A/N, I think it's a little too soon for Kagome and Sesshomaru to be "hooking" up. After all, Sesshomaru did think that life was good, but whenever someone thinks that in a story something tends to go wrong. At least that's what I always seem to find. As for an idea, Kagome could become pregnant, since she and Sesshomaru didn't use protection and she doesn't know how to deal with that. And Sesshomaru would start pressuring Kagome to move in with him or something. But she doesn't want to, because of Rin. Or you could have Kagome and Sesshomaru tell Rin the truth together and have her not accept it. So Sesshomaru and Kagome have to make the ultimate sacrifice. Which Rin notices that her dad and her best friend are miserable without each other, so she plays "Cupid". What do you think?
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 13:53 CDT
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I'm so happy Sesshomaru and Kagome are back together. I loved how Kagome said that Sesshomaru was her puppy and Sesshomaru said he needed more than a belly rub. That was very sweet and erotic. I wonder how they will break the news to Rin, and how she'll react.
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Title: Sugestion!
Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 30, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have an Idea!!! yay for me... Sorry I'm a lil hyper!! Well anyway you should have Kagome's mom find out... or maybe have Rin find out or something of that nature.... I still say you could build more on the plot but I'm not sure how...Sorry my mind's a blank and I have to get to work b/c i'm in a class... well anyway good luck ~Jessica
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Title: Luv it
Reviewed By: Spica [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 20:39 CDT
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I love your story, though this is the first time I have reviewed. It's stupid I know, I never review that much and I need to read more of something for actually decide if it was good. I like your idea and all but I wish you wouldn't make Sesshoumaru such a player. He's actually sweet. REALLY Sweet. Okay, I'm taliking a bout nothing so, later and please up date soon. I give you a Rin plushie for your hard work.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 16:21 CDT
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OK when i was reading this and they kissed i got this awesom idea! Sometime in the later chapters Rin should walk in on Kag and Sesshy kissing! So yea...ok ummm awesome chapter! i was so happy when i saw the email saying this was updated!!! ^.^ update again soon. Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: *Nagasaki On: April 29, 2004 15:57 CDT
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yup... i loved this one and i can't wait until your next chapter. when is rin going to find out? and will some one interrupt them while they are trying to 'get busy'? will it be kagome's mom?
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: April 26, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW a puppy! how cute. I love that idea, can't wait till the next chapter. sooooo cute. Plus I love cliff hangers.
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