| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: April 13, 2004 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I just finished reading all of it. Amazing, I love the fact that Kagome doesn't just automatically forgive him, but I do feel bad for him. Can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 13, 2004 17:47 CDT
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I'm with Nagasaki I think t needs some time ya know, she should take her time to heal and not give into him so soon. ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 17:06 CDT
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lol. dont worry i was awake enough to know wat was going on in the last chapter! and i was totally awake in this chapter cuz it is... 6:04 pm. This chapter was good! i feel so bad for sesshy though...kind of, but i probably would of said almost the same thing kagome said...if that ever happened. i've read fanfics where sesshy cries and then im always sitting at the computer saying "awww" lol. ok anyways until the next chapter....Ja Ne!!!
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Title: brittany
Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 13, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears* that was a beautiful chapter!!!! i loved it!!!! thanks for the dedication...hope i didn't make anyone mad because you used it. i really can't wait until your next chapter! i espeacially loved this one because sesshy went to inuyasha for advise...that was a suprise...a good one but a suprise nonetheless!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 15:20 CDT
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auwww, that was sad! i almost cried, but im at work so, the customers would have looked at me wierd, lol. great chapter, poor sesshie-sama :*(. alright, till next time~ =) ~*~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~~*~
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Title: i should be online more...
Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: April 13, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as always this was an uber gr8 chappie ^__^. Poro sess-chan, its reallyl shitty when you like someone so much but they dont even see you. lkike you're dying, i have that right now. it suxxors so bit time.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 21:03 CDT
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aww thank you sooo much. ive never had a chapter dedicated to me before *blushes* This chapter so made my day (after 7 stop overs on a 7 hours train ride! lol)This chapter was really funny. Poor Kagome, and a thong to?!?! Aww man I'd just die if that were me lol. Can't wait till tuesday!
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Title: brittany
Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 12, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter....but...DON'T LET HER FORGIVE HIM YET!!!!!!!!!!!! please don't do it...it would have been to easy. make sesshy work for it. i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: soul bled dry On: April 12, 2004 13:18 CDT
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great story today but yet another cliffy, twists and turns and I'm glad to hear you are inspired once more. ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Kix(notLogged on) On: April 12, 2004 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drolls and pants* more please?
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cliffy...oh well!! *yawns* im really tired cuz its...7:25 am and i got up like 10 15 mins ago...so um yea...just that chapter to wake me up!!! ^.^ cant wait til the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon_Gazer On: April 12, 2004 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must write more ^_^ Sess/kag fanfic's rule
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 01:53 CDT
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great chapt! it never gets boring watching your best friend shivering outside on the cold grass in her 'almost' birthday suit, lol. these cliffys are killing me!! cant wait for the next chapter ;) ~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~*~*
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Reviewed By: Orb (Not online) On: April 11, 2004 20:41 CDT
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oh man i just know the next chapter wil be hilarious. i hope you can update soon, i just had the worst family weekend :(. What will Inuyasha do, I hate to say it but I hope she picks Inu, even tho we all know she wont, so sad. Well can't wait for the next one....wait i said that already.....ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: sessome On: April 11, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is..WOW! im really liking this fic and i hope you update soon. i just really got into it today...although my only concern is how are kagome and sesshou gonna work things out wid da age difference and all and rin being one of kagome's friends...dats weird...but i still like it...awww..poor inu-chan, he seems sad...o well...please update soon!!! great great fic! ja ne
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