| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: April 06, 2004 15:08 CDT
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I'm so addicted now. As much as I love Inu/Kag, this seems like having Sess-chan and InuYasha "fighting" (as it would seem ) over her is really cool!! PLeasep lease keep it up
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Title: brittanY
Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 05, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the chapter and i can't wait until your next one! sesshy deserves what he gets and so does inuyasha! inuyasha for taking advantage of kagome in her vulnerable state! and sesshy because he shouldn't have played with her heart and he has no fucking claim on her!!!!! what is kagome to do? hmmmmmm...beat the shit out of sesshy and say "You have no FUCKING CLAIM over me after what you did! I'm not yours and i can fuck whoever the fucking hell I want!!!! And you can't do shit about it!!!!" at least that's what i would say! but sesshy and kagome need to make up soon! please!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 20:17 CDT
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well those loops are working for me! and if they arent for anyone else then well...i dont know! again interesting chappy! i love this story, i was thinking about it earlier today wondering if i ever finished reading the chapters you had up. im so forgetfull sometimes! ^.^;; update again soon! oh and one more thing! i would be sooooooo embaressed if someone came into the room while i was doing it with someone! especially the if it was the older brother of the person i was doing it with.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 15:26 CDT
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I read all of this in one sitting and it seems a little werid to have a 32 w/ a 17 yr old, but it seems totally wacked out now. Not in a bad way but in a plot twisting way. It'll be crasy to see what happens next. Cant wait for it! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 22:58 CDT
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Ok, I hope I'm not the only one who wants to hurt Sesshy. As much as I love him and his emotionless ways, talk about mean to Kag-chan! I can't wait to read more soon!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 04, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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devilish kagome... I like that but please don't break sesshoumaru's heart... i know his an ass and a jerk but like you said in the story, for know particular reason your just drown to that cold hearted,fierce eyes demon. (drowling)... please update asap
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Title: ....I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Ariella On: April 04, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love the story!!How did you come up with the idea to write this?Very different from other fics i've read. Please continue with the great story!!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting, very interesting...one of the most interesting fanfics ive ever read. ITS BRILLIANT!! update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 04, 2004 16:42 CDT
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thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I feel honored that you mentioned me. Todays chaper was awsome, you let the story take you where it wants to go. I would have never guessed that that would have happened.. whoa.. i'm dyeing to know what's gonna happen next.. so intreguing.. Good luck and thank you again ~Jess
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Reviewed By: hyperperson On: April 03, 2004 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have got a question is Rin Sesshoumaru's adopted daughter or Sesshoumaru's biological daughter and you are right he sounds like a real ass
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Title: Lease
Reviewed By: Lease242 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep those updates coming!!! Wow, someone who actually updates when they say they are. I knew he was gonna be an ass but talk about dropping a bomb on the poor girl. I still wouldn't kick him out of bed for eating crackers. I love it!!!
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Reviewed By: soul bled dry On: March 31, 2004 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, your updates are so fast I have trouble keeping up. LOL.. today's story was great his true intentions coming out, out of the blue. Good job ~Jess
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Reviewed By: Venus(bulmasecrets) On: March 31, 2004 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it! he is such a mother f.... update soon!
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Reviewed By: AJ On: March 31, 2004 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Fluffy's such a f*ckin' bastard!!! Stupid Stipid Fluffy!!!! Ummmm... Ok my rant's done. 'NEWayz... update soon, I can't wait to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: Amarantha_ On: March 30, 2004 19:27 CST
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Hey, your story is great can't wait until the next chapter. Keep writing
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