| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: July 03, 2004 20:27 CDT
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I cannot believe Kagome's mother! It's one thing to want to hurt the man who took your daughter away (not literally), but to hurt innocent people, that's crossing the line. She probably doesn't even know this, but she'll be the cause of her daughters pain. If she and Sesshomaru have to call it quits because of Rin.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 19:59 CDT
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that was not the way i expected rin to find out! awesome! ok uhhh...update again soon! great chapters!
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Reviewed By: StartDust1219 (i kno i signed in i just kno it!) On: July 03, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel so much better! i finally can breath through my nose! it was stuffed up for the longest time! yea i have my sessh/kag fanfic up so check it out!!! i'm kinda stuck on the second chapter, but it should be out soon, my uncle is visiting and its hard to write fanfics when you have visiters. so the second chap should be out soon! and your so much welcome for my support!!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: July 03, 2004 14:12 CDT
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I thought the dream was real. I was like, Sesshomaru what are you doing? There are other students in the room, stop holding her right now! Your friend is a great writer, just as yourself.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:41 CDT
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ok i was searching on ff.net looking for a sessh/kag fanfic to read and i saw "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" and i was like i didnt kno she had that on here... ok anyways great chapter and my fanfic is going a little slow especially since i got sick yesterday and i couldnt write or even keep my eyes open i was so tired. but i'm feeling MUCH better today. and yesterday (this was b4 i got really tired) i thought of a sessh/kag fanfic idea so i'm working on that too!! cant wait til the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: little miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 20:07 CDT
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Hey this is a GOOD story keep going I like it!! Sesshy rocks!! I really enjoy this so far, update soon cuz it's...awesome!! I mean it!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon its a great story. You can't just stop reading it. I feel sorry for InuYasha he never gets a break w/ anything i hope it turns out good for him. Update it soon i love it.
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o) On: June 15, 2004 20:09 CDT
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how would I not review? You take the time to write fantastic chapter, its the least we as readers can do. Poor InuYasha, he just cant catch a break. I have a feeling he might tryand screw things up for Sessho and KAgome, but I hope he doesnt. I love Fluffy so much lol, I can just picture a little dandy bristle scurrying around everywhere. I cant wait for the next update, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its 1 of the BEST story i read!!!!!!GREAT JOB on it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: June 14, 2004 21:29 CDT
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i think inuyasha and sesshomaru should put everything behond them and act like brothers and not enemies. loved the chapter!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 19:55 CDT
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I think the way Sesshomaru acted towards InuYasha is quite reasonable, if I had the ability to smell arousal from other girls I would definitely keep my man (if I had one) at my side. Of course girls act differently around guys or at least some do. I think it would be funny if Sesshomaru was having a conversation with Fluffy and that's how Kagome found out he was a demon. Telling Fluffy that he can't always be around Kagome since he (Sesshomaru) needs time alone with her too. LOL I'm crazy, I know! LOL
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: June 09, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooooooooo sorry, my computer crashed! but these two chapters were. Great. Sess is very overprotective. I like that. The part of him being demon! great! I like that. I hope you write more. You rock.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 10:46 CDT
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ok either i got the email saying you updated and deleted by accident or...i have no idea...but i cant believe i toally missed this chapter...but now i've read it and it was awesome! and im not cold anymore! yay!! i'm back in florida!! *does a dance* i updated my story not that long ago. and i should have the third up really soon this week! and i got over my writers block i have a HUGE idea for my story!! uhh thats all i really have to say..oh and it turns out my friend IS going to China! but just not right away like next week or something.
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Reviewed By: Soul Bled Dry On: June 06, 2004 17:40 CDT
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I'm soo sorry for 1) my lack of Reviews 2) being a crappy reviewer...You spin a wonderful tale and it was a great Idea to throw in the demon part.. I must say I was surprized i didn't think you were going to use that . great write and keep up the good work! Jes
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: June 05, 2004 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats some hot stuff, lol, poor kagome. woo hoo! sesshies a youkai! that caught me by surprise to say the least, lol. ::does little dance::: i love the A/Us where theyre still youkai/hanyou/miko/houshi watever. i dont think its getting boring, im sorry about ur # of reviews, its never encouraging when u start losing people. i doubt thats wats happening, maybe theyre still reading AND enjoying, but dont feel the need to review over and over. a lot of people are like that ive noticed, unlike me. i review on every chapter to stories i like, just cause i know it makes the authors feel all the more better. well, just remember that the fics still awesome! so dont slow down ;) alrighty, with that in mind, update soon!!!!!! ~*~*~*~suteki~*~*~*~*~
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