| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: May 15, 2004 16:56 CDT
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A hell of a convienents I'd say lol. So, the problem with Kagomes mom will get resolved huh? Hmm....lol, I can't wait!! But then again it'll be like one problem after another I guess, when Rin gets home I mean. ooooo I can't wait for the next update. I really like how Sess was talking back to Kagome's mom. So....hot....*drools*. For not having any modivation this was a really great chapter. The lemon was really great, and the emotions were totally awesome.
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Reviewed By: Soul Bled Dry On: May 10, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Exclent writei kinda expected it but not so soon great anyway.. Good luck ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 08, 2004 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. The fact that she ran away, interesting. I can't wait for Rin to find out. Even if I was Rin, and my dad was a total hotty like Sess I'd be kind of upset at first, but then I'd probably get over it. Another kick ass chapter. I hope you feel better. Believe I know school is hell, studying and what not, believe me, I signed up for spring and summer classes as well, so I understand. well by for now, huggles and goldfish, BirkysSpy
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (i thought i was signed in) On: May 08, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool chappy! i told my friend about kagome's mom walking in on her and sesshy and she was like "you have to give me the link for that story!" and so i did! hope you feel better!! oh and if you IMed me on yahoo i didnt get it bcuz i closed the message window by accident. anyways until your next chappy...JA NE! P.S. i usually dont read fanfics off of mm.org, but i love your story so much your is one of the few that i read off of it!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 08, 2004 09:29 CDT
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i loved the chapter and i can't wait until your next one.
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Title: stuipid mm missing info
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 21:25 CDT
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*drools* Sesshomaru in boxers....Well, now that that necessity is out of the way *eh heh heh* Yay chapter!! Boo sickness! Aww you like me reviews *gets huge anime eyes* You love me, you really love me! Ok Jim Carrey does it better but oh well. So, a few days with no Rin huh? What better time to run away lol. I'm still scared to think about what will happen when Rin finds out. I hope you feel better soon! take care
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 20:54 CDT
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I missed a chapters of this story, the previous one to this. But now I won't now that I have it on favs.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 01:50 CDT
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Evil Mommy..must not interfier with Kagome and Seshy's love!! *atackes Kagome's Mom with Mistical Magical Enchanted Cast Iron Frying Pan of DOOM!!!(trademark)* MWAHAHAHHAHHAAA YE SHALL DIE!!!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK for some strange reason i thought that chapter was....funny...yes it was, with kagome's mom walking in on them and everything...*starts laughing* ok well update again soon!! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, this story sure has me hooked! Absolutely awesome! Please write more as soon as you can!
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Title: sexual frustration
Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH......that sucks. i would be so embarrased if that happened. kagomes mom is a b*tch, although id probably react the same way, lol. thats so sad though! i agree with the diva, she should move in with him after this happened. i mean, shes 18, shes allowed to move out by now! or maybe they could alope to las vegas! lol, i just spent the weekend there, hehe. anyways, cant wait to see what you decide to do with this. ;) ~*~*~*~*~*SUTEKI~*~*~*~*~*
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 03, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! I love it! The story wouldn't be real if they had the perfect romance and everything was all nice and sweet! There has to be a few obsticals! I'm giddy to read what will happen next! I was sooooo shocked! The mom coming home! that is perfect!! Kick ass chapter! you rock! can't wait till the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: May 03, 2004 13:13 CDT
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wonderful chapter but totally sad...*pouts* but no too sad, I don't think you should change it at all it's great the way it is ::DON'T CONFORM:: lol sorry well anyway... Good luck ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 03, 2004 07:16 CDT
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i loved this chapter as well. do you think kagome's mom will ever accept what sesshy and kag have? i can't wait until your next chapter! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Orb (I thought I was online) On: May 02, 2004 22:10 CDT
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drama-rama or what!! Holy crapola with Kag's mom. I read this other story ('A Simple Question'), I thinkwhere Kag and Inu mated and her mom walked in on it. She TOTALLY freaked out and sealed the well with cement! But Kagome got pregnant and stuff, oh my it was crazy. But hoi-baloi this story it getting wild. What will Sess and KAgome do now. I was scared before, but now I'm REALLY scared. I mean what if Kagome runs away or something? Or gets thrown out?! She can't very well go to Sesshomaru, cuz of Rin....Or could she? *DUN DUN DUN!!!lol* I dunno, whatever you write, we'll love!
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