| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Title: Two Lives Turned Upside Down
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 21, 2004 21:08 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Two Lives Turned Upside Down
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 04, 2004 00:18 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Soul Bled Dry On: October 18, 2004 10:54 CDT
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Exclent chapter...completly Worth the wait keep up the good work -Jessica
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Wow, I haven't read this story in a while and because of that I kept wondering to myself if I missed certain chapters. But, no I didn't. Eww... Naraku flirting with Rin is just freaky! If I were Rin I would've been out of there in a heart beat. Poor InuYasha, I feel sad for him since he's in love with Kagome, but she doesn't return his feelings. And now he's comparing every woman he's with to Kagome, that has to be rough. OH MY GOD, Sesshomaru showed his demon side without realizing it, what will Kagome do? Will she think it was her imagination or will she turn away from Sesshomaru? I certainly hope she doesn't turn away from Sesshomaru and their relationship. Anyway, that was an excellent chapter even though you don't think so. You're a very talented writer and I wish I had your talent.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 19:27 CDT
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this fic is hella kewl! keep updating! o & jus 4 the record kikyo iz a bitch... will she b good or evil in this? o & i feel so bad 4 inu, he should find himself a chikkie.
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Title: m
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:51 CDT
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hey it me chii again i love your stories im getting another idea for a story well keep updating (go jaxia go :) yay)
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: October 13, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I was so happy to see that you updated! I thought the new chap was good. Wow! Kagome and Sesshy are mates! How will she take it? EWWWWW Naraku might be cute in the cartoon, but he's still a creep! Ewww hitting on Rin! Does Rin know that Sess is a demon? I can't wait to read the next chapter. You Rock! Welcome back!!!!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Rin left the house. Naraku is just too creepy, even in an A/U. Plus, he's planning something. I think Sesshomaru has a lot of explaining to do with Kagome. I'm actually very pleased that you decided to keep the demons as such.
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Title: chii
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really love your story i hope they all make up again(rin kags mom etc) well your story is going better than the one im trying to type well goodluck!!!!!! and i hope you have a good time typing this as we have fun reading it have fun ne?!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats gotta be the worst way to find out the person your in love with is a demon... glad you updated! my friend kept asking when you were gonna update and if you had. but now that i think of it...she hasnt asked in a while... any ways great chappy even if it DID take a while to get out! ^^ im glad you did! cant wait til the next chapter!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Crystalmaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA omg this chapter was great hehe ooh kagome thinks she's seeing things haha wait until she finds out lol. I know what your going through its not easy balancing things out with school and other things hehe.
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Reviewed By: Cranberry Sauce On: September 14, 2004 21:58 CDT
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I love the story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. So review! Quickly!@_@
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Reviewed By: stargirl3 On: August 15, 2004 13:23 CDT
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hi i REALLY like you story and i hope you do the chapter very fast because i be waiting and i do NOT like to wait much...........please!
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Reviewed By: Starfire27 On: August 12, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW Rin really tok that very seriously. Well i9 know i would if my dad were with my bf. Kags moms a bitch, she aproved but then had to go ruining everything. Oh well bound to happen. I like how you described the Lemons. Keep up the good work. I hate when you up small clffhagers. But UPDATE soon!!!PLZ!!!!
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Title: inulover
Reviewed By: kanome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 18:17 CDT
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plz update i love ur style of writing and the story is great i cant wait to see how it ends!
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