| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 11, 2004 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update asap...please...please...can't wait what happens next!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Reviewed By: m a r i [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 23:34 CDT
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this chapter and whole story is just awesome. i can't wait until they get together... i'm a major sessxkag fan ^_^ please continue-!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 09, 2004 19:50 CDT
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i loved this chapter! a little short but still good. i hope she doesn't forgive him yet!!!!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*does a jig* *stops* ok i got that over with... glad to help you!!! =^.^= this is one of my most fav stories so you wont lose me in any of your chapters!!! ^_^ the next chapter is going to be very interesting. *nods head* very..yup...uhh...yea...^_^ well i better go and work on my fanfic!!! until your next chapter...Ja Ne!!! P.S. my enjoyment of this story is like WAY off the scale of what mm.org has up.
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Title: SESSHIE THE CRADDLE ROBBER!! LOL, =)
Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey! this stories getting interesting. although i like the idea of inu/kag thing, its always exciting to see something different. i loved how you just all of a sudden threw inuyasha into the mix, i was starting to wonder if he even existed in this world. im scared for rin though, i would HATE for my best friend to become my mother! that actually almost happened to me (shutters) ewww! lol, alrighty, ive added this to my favs so im following you wherever you take this! thanks for the great entertainment!
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Reviewed By: Killer_edge [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I really love this story. But now you made me feel so sorry for Inu, cause he aint gonna geta chance. I hope you give him something. Hmm. ^0^ Maybe even a three way thing?
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Reviewed By: Dana Daidouji On: April 09, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this a very good if a bit rushed begining. It's funny because I had this set-up planned in my mind for a future SessKag story that I wanted to write but it's okay. I guess I'll sit down and see how this evolves.
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Title: title?
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 15:18 CDT
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You're so right, this was a really sad chapter :
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 08, 2004 13:23 CDT
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I have an idea, I have an idea....Pick me, Pick me!::raises hand and waves it like crazy:: this is just a prototype idea... You could suddenly inject kikyo it to the story... I don't know how.. and have her kidknapp Kagome or something, once again not sure how.... or pull Rin back into the story we havn't seen her in a while....Well good luck please keep updating... ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Ra-Ra On: April 08, 2004 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good...and i was just suggesting that you have them (inu,Sess,Kag) go on with their lives like normal and such, and have sess continue his plan and have inu try to forget kag, while she is still feeling bad, but still goes on, like nothing happened.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: CrystalRaven44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! You have to update soon. This story is good.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is your first fanfic? wow! well i for one love this story! ^.^ hmm....story ideas...oh i kno!! rin can keep trying to get kagome to go over her house and...kagome keeps making up excuses and then finally has no use but to say yes and then well....i dont kno...lol ok well cant wait til you update again!! =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 02:00 CDT
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I really wanna cry for Sesshy-chan. Way to go to Kags for putting him in his place though. I also have to mention Inu-chan. His intentions seem good. I can't wait to read the next chappie. ^_^
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Reviewed By: *Nagasaki On: April 07, 2004 22:56 CDT
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NOW!NOW he figures it out!!!! well it is a little to late and she's a little to gone...sorry my mom is listening to country right now and it kind os fits the saying right now. she should forgive him...but she should also let him stir for awhile if i were her. but i'm not and this is your story...your welcome for the idea by the way. i can't wait until your next chapter and this one was great!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 07, 2004 18:44 CDT
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wow...this chapter is crazy, I really wouldn't have thought she would have screwed around with his brother! Crazyness man. and.... another cliffy..Grr..well keep the updates coming ~Jess
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