| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 19, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting... her mom just gave in... hmmmm... if I was Kagome I'd be shocked. If my mother was mad about somthing then all of sudden said she understood, I'd go and hide in a bomb shelter! But I can't wait for Rin to find out! I hope they can salvage some sort of friendship, but not too quickly. Great chapter!! love it as usual ^_^
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (i keep forgetting to sign in!!) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:56 CDT
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OK i just got an idea for the next chapter! what if while they were at the mall they ran into Rin? hm that would be interesting!! ok i put up chapter one for my newer fanfic. i think its called Different Dimensions kinda forgot ^.^;; great chapter and yay for Kagome's mom!! ok yea update again soon!!! Ja Ne!
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Title: stupid title....
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:14 CDT
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aww yay, Kagome's mom it ok with it...maybe not totally, but she's not being a bitch about it lol. This is so bittersweet, I mean I'm sooo happy that their together, and heading to the beach *wink wink*, but that ominus cloud of Rin hanging over their heads....I'm so scared!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 19, 2004 16:56 CDT
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i loved this chapter and i'm glad that you had kagome's mom accept their relationship. i can't wait until your next one!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: May 19, 2004 16:47 CDT
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yay! :::does little victory dance::: lol. her moving into the beach house was an awesome idea. god, if my boyfriend offered to put me up in my very own beautiful beach house, i dont know what id do...probably personalize every single room with him, lol...to bad im single again. darn! lol. alrighty, wow, sesshie picking out a swim suit, thats got disaster written all over it, lol. update soon! ;l ~*~*~*~*SUTEKI~*~*~*~
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Title: crap
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 02:43 CDT
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erg. you are totally unfair!! what a nasty cliffy! please update soon! and i'm super happy that you made sesshy do sweet things for kag. arigatou~! and impressive job, please please continue! oh, by the way. your description of sesshy is... is... just... *screams* eyegasm or mindgasm. same thing. *drool*
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 17, 2004 17:48 CDT
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I'm happy that you feel better. This chapter was great,nice lemon!!!! I can't wait for the drama w/kagome's mom!!!! you rock!!!!
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: May 17, 2004 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Soul Bled Dry On: May 16, 2004 21:09 CDT
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hehehe Kogame's Crazy mom again hehehe.. she's a very upset person so... I'm taking a stab at this sometime in the next 2-3 chapters Rin's gonna find out.. well keep up the good work. Good luck ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (4got i didnt sign in) On: May 15, 2004 19:49 CDT
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awesome chappie!! ok i was talkin to my friend after she read it and she said she loved it and you needed to update soon! she tried to review it but her computer is crap and wont let her review! but during the summer i dont think she'll be able to read cuz she is goin to China! so yea..im gonna miss her...*cries* anyways...i think that was kinda a cliffly....*sniffle sniffle* oh well gives me time to think about whats going to happen next and to work on my fanfic! when there was a knock at the door when they were on the couch i thought it was Rin who knocked on the door for some strange reason... UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 15, 2004 18:30 CDT
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this one is better than the last one! i can't wait until you update!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (not online) On: May 15, 2004 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, loved it! i as hoping she would retaliate against her mom, go kagome! how convenient that rin was gone, lol. dun dun dunnn, the wrath of a mother 'saving' her daughter is not something to mess with...unless ur sesshoumaru, hehe. update soon!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 17:10 CDT
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Oops! I meant to say I probably wouldn't stand for it. Well maybe just in the beginning, but if she truly made my dad happy then I wouldn't want him to throw it away just because I couldn't handle it.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 17:07 CDT
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Whoa! Kagome's mother sure had a lot of guts barging into Sesshomaru's house like that! How exactly did she know where Sesshomaru lived? Looks like you to my suggestion as having Sesshomaru wanting Kagome to move in with him. Yeah, besides she is 18 and her mom couldn't say anything about it. But, they would still have to consider Rin. Which I don't think she'll take very well. I know if I were in Rin's position I wouldn't take it graciously either, I wouldn't even stand for it. Hopefully I'll never have to go through that.
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Reviewed By: hrc On: May 15, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love this atory please please please update soon!!!
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