| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Title: title?
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 22:36 CDT
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Oh course I'll continue to love the story. I love that Sessho is a demon, I can't wait to see where you take it. I really can't wait for the next update. I know it will rawk. **p.s. the change room scene sounds like something my b/f nd I would do lol**
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Reviewed By: MidnightTimberWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering if you were going to show his demonic form, I have to tell you ever since I read the begining of the story I didn't care much about Sesshy just using people for pleasure. I got over it and continued to read each update. I'm not sure if I have reviewed before, it really doesn't matter as long as you get the hits. That tells you more than anything that the story is great. As for Rin she is adopted, I was wondering what would happen if Inu Yasha makes an unanounced visit to Sesshy's house only to find Rin and procedes to tell her about Kagome and Sesshy. Or her mother wanting to bring something Kagome forgot what would Rin do or say to that, its a theory and a suggestion in one. As for the bathing suit chapter, I liked it. To bad it didn't have more effect. Now Miroku knows Inu boy and Sango in this right? What a reaction he would get from them... Please hurry with the next chapter I just can't wait....
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 13:21 CDT
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I had a feeling Sesshomaru was a demon. Especially when he and InuYasha were fighting and Kagome heard gowling. I was like, hmm... could he be a demon? I'm actually glad he's one, maybe you could have Rin be a demon as well. And since you want Kikyo in the story, she could be Rin's mother. So she's half demon or full. Just a suggestion. No your story is not getting boring or predictable, I just think some people don't like to review all the time.
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Reviewed By: Ookami_Kanshisha On: June 02, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I love this story, I may not review every chapter but I do enjoy each one. I just wish they were longer.... I know others feel the same when I say reviewing sucks, but one must make the decision and post one up... Keep up the good work. Oh and make Sesshou-maru show Kagome his true form, I bet she'd love the boa or is it his tail, oh well goes to show you everyone has a different opinion.... Until the next chapter....
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: June 02, 2004 21:54 CDT
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i loved the chapter and i'm glad that you put the demon thing in! it clears everything up as you said. i can't wait until your next one.
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Title: thanks so much!
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh my gosh! you used it! thanks so much :) i just can't wait till the next chapter... but see, i can't update my fic yet cause i'm studying for finals... ugh. the pain! anyway, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Orb (offline) On: May 25, 2004 15:37 CDT
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oh man that Miroku bit was so grewat!! and so character like. Poor Kagome freaking out about Sessho. She seems like such a cry-baby, but thats just what her characters like. I cant wait for the next chapter, I know it will be too hilarious, with the bathing suits and everything.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: May 25, 2004 06:28 CDT
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i can't figure out something...are they demons? and if they are...do they not know it? because sesshy was acting a little confused there. but all in all..i loved the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: May 25, 2004 02:04 CDT
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lol, poor Miroku! Ugh, i hate that store! it should be called "everything but money in your wallet when you leave" seriously, its like $40 a PIECE for a bikini, lol. its nice to look around though, as you said, we're all entitled to our dreams ;) oh, i like MsDiva's thought on Rins mom, that would be wierd. what if she was like...hmmm...Kikyou or something oua hte blue like that. hehe, that would be pretty stinkin interesting. but, if you think that would just complicate things for you, i wouldnt be disappointed if u didnt add it. nonetheless, i cant wait to see how this is all gonna go down with rin. alrighty, update soon!! ~*~*~suteki~*~*~
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (didnt sign in) On: May 24, 2004 18:01 CDT
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ok first i was wrong about my friend going to China! ^.^;; the last email i got she said she was in Washington D.C.! ummm...oh yea i 4got that Rin was at her grandmothers!! i would of totally forgotten and put her in probaly!! im so stupid sumtimes! i found out i can get to a comp and read fanfics but i cant type mine up since its on my comp in Florida, and im like...24 hours away from it. *sighs* MY HANDS ARE COLD! awesome chapter cant wait til the next and hopefully my hands wont be as cold as they are now when its up! so until then...Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 16:41 CDT
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I felt so sorry for Miroku, but on the other hand I also had to laugh too. Especially when he took of to run and hide from Sesshomaru. I can just picture it. LOL I truly wish I were Kagome in this story, since Sesshomaru is so crazy about her.
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Title: updated! update again!
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'm such a sessxkag fan. i mean they're like the best together!! okay, well i thought kag's mom was really nice. i mean if i were to be in bed with some much older guy, not to mention BEAUTIFUL, my mom would go hysterical. but see, age does not matter!! *cries* how touching... CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! *hums* it'd be super funny if miroku was one of the lingerie or swimsuit salesman and sessh gets pissed off *laughs* okay, sorry for the long review. haha. PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Kix (not Logged In) On: May 20, 2004 13:50 CDT
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Yeay!! Kagome is gona live with Seshypoo!! Wheeee!!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 21:13 CDT
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Oh, that's all right that you didn't say anything about my suggestion in the previous chapter. I really didn't think anything about it. Wow, I thought Kagome's mother would've put up more of a fight, but I guess Kagome put her in her place about following her heart. Otherwise she would've been a hypocrite. Do you think Rin's mother would make an appearance in the story? Anyway, that was an excellent chapter.
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Reviewed By: hrc On: May 19, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i love this stury so u have to update very soon got that thats 4 writing laters!!!!!!
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