| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im baaaack! sorry i havent reviewed in so long, i lost my internet at home so now i can only access it at work! grrr. wow, a lots happened. yay! you brought in rins mom! and kikyou none the less, hehehe, way to go. i really loved the last...what was it...3 or 4 chapters? and the drama continues to thicken, lol. i hope everything works out ok, and damn kagomes mother! grrr. oh well, wat you gonna do eh? alright well, update again soon! and i promise ill be there to review! ;) ~*~*~*Suteki~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: July 19, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! Kikyo's her mom! I wasn't expecting that. I love how you put twist and turns in your story. That just makes me like the story even more!!! I can't wait til you write again. Keep going! You rock! ^__________^
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 19:50 CDT
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Oh no, the story spark is winding down for you? That's awful. You wouldn't know it from the wasy you write tho ;). I'll be sad to see this story end, but until then, yeehaw! lol Kikyo and Naraku? That's scary. I thought for sure Naraku was going to do something to RIn in her sleep the way you descibed him. I feel so bad for Sessho and Kagome. I can't wait till you have a chance to update again.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: July 18, 2004 14:01 CDT
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Was there a reason why Kikyo put Rin up for adoption? Reasons such as, drug, alcohol or gambling addiction? 'Cause that's what it seems like, since she did want to have Rin back with her. I thought Kikyo was going to be a single mother, I never expected her to be married to Naraku. But since Sesshomaru and InuYasha are demons or rather demon and half demon, does that include Naraku as well? Yeah, it was me who suggested that Kikyo be Rin's mother.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK still on writers block for Different Dimensions, but i took it down...i think...well i kno i did on ff.net anyways. and while im having that writers block i get another idea for a story, but its for fictionpress.com! so i'm also working on that...ummm...yea...great chapter! and a couple days ago i was thinking about jaken and wondering if he was going to show up or not, but there he is being sesshy-sama assistant! ok yea, update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: July 17, 2004 21:03 CDT
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i loved this chapter...great twist too. kikyou being rin's mom....i have a feeling she won't be staying there for long because i think naraku will do something to her and she'll run away from them....but that's just a feeling because naraku is pure evil. i relly hope that rin comes to terms with sesshomaru and kagome's relationship soon. but wouldn't it be weird for kagome to be rin's stepmom? i just got that...i'm kind of slow sometimes. i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: July 09, 2004 15:40 CDT
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hmmmm....i wonder who rin's mother is....maybe....Kagura? that would be funny. i loved this chapter and the last one.....kagome's mom is evil!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 13:34 CDT
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I knew Kagome was going to try and back out of their relationship again, but I'm glad Sesshomaru stopped her. I think I would've done the exact same thing as Kagome too, I wouldn't want to get in between a father and daughter relationship. Even if they weren't close. I wonder what Rin is going to say to her mother and what her mother will do. I bet her mother (Kikyo, right?) will cause trouble for Sesshomaru and Kagome. Try to break them apart, that way she can try and get Sesshomaru. Please don't tell me you're going to make Kagome and Kikyo look alike, cause that would cause more trouble. Beside I don't think they even look alike. Oh, how does Rin know who her biological mother is?
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: July 09, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh lala, I do wonder who Rin's birth mother is!! Great chapter! Kagome's mom is scandelous!!! To do that to her own daughter!! I bet she wasn't thinking about how this would affect Kagome!! That was insane! And writer's block sucks! But I know you'll keep putting out kick ass chapters! It doesn't matter how long it takes, just as long as you continue! ^____^
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 11:25 CDT
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it only takes you more than a couple of hours to write a chapter! lucky...it takes me about 3 to 4 days..maybe less if i know exactly wat is going to happen and that only happened to me once! *sighs* oh well...great chapter! and my uncle is gone so i can work on my fanfics! but im having a major writers block on Different Dimensions, plus i am working on my new one and me and my friend are working on a fic together but i put that on hold because she is now in China..shes so lucky...so yea! great chapter! cant wait til the next one! ok now mm.org is really bothering me...ive signed in twice, i submit the review and it says im not signed in...grrr...
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: July 09, 2004 11:22 CDT
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Oh no not writer block! That's terrible, I hope you don't get put to down badly with it. THis was a great chater regardless, when Rin called her mom it reminded me of Cruel Intentions, when Sabastians therapists daughter called about her picture being on the internet. Poor Sessho and Kagome, what are they going to do?
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: July 06, 2004 11:42 CDT
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yay rin found out!!! Well not that its a good thing, but that its a milestone for the story you know? that was quite the way to find out. i could see the holw thing play out in my mind, the look on kag's mom's face? ooooo it made me mad lol. i like the idea of more updates tho lol. i'm scared to know what happens next.
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Title: I'm in awe
Reviewed By: Soul Bled dry On: July 06, 2004 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just Beatiful chapters and I'm glad Rin finally found out but putting Cliffies in is a exclent way to get your readers to come back. I can't express enough how wonderful of a writer you are you bring such a life to the charcters. You story flows wonderfully and I'm glad you continue to write it... Oh and I just had to add my small conquest I finally got my boyfriend to watch InuYasha... Go me!! any way keep on writing ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 14:12 CDT
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aww yay more chapter. i'm really behind on the updates, but hopefully i'll be able to catch up soon. that was a prety scary dream. i mean the fight thing was cool, and i was kind of expecting more of a freak out form rin, but i bet if kagome had've slept longer that would have happened. i cant wit to read the other chapter you posted but i have no time now :
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: July 03, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry my computer crashed. But I just read the last three chaps!! wow!!!! ooh lala!! Inuyasha! that's sweet. I love the whole romantic beach idea. Brilliant. Kagome's mom is so sadistic! that was sooooooo wrong! I feel bad for Rin! but I love the cliffy on the last chapter!!! Oh and the cat fight was great!!! I can't wait till you write more. Great chaps!!! ^___^
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