| "Two Lives Turned Upside Down" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Title: title?
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 15:18 CDT
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You're so right, this was a really sad chapter :
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 08, 2004 13:23 CDT
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I have an idea, I have an idea....Pick me, Pick me!::raises hand and waves it like crazy:: this is just a prototype idea... You could suddenly inject kikyo it to the story... I don't know how.. and have her kidknapp Kagome or something, once again not sure how.... or pull Rin back into the story we havn't seen her in a while....Well good luck please keep updating... ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: Ra-Ra On: April 08, 2004 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good...and i was just suggesting that you have them (inu,Sess,Kag) go on with their lives like normal and such, and have sess continue his plan and have inu try to forget kag, while she is still feeling bad, but still goes on, like nothing happened.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: CrystalRaven44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! You have to update soon. This story is good.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is your first fanfic? wow! well i for one love this story! ^.^ hmm....story ideas...oh i kno!! rin can keep trying to get kagome to go over her house and...kagome keeps making up excuses and then finally has no use but to say yes and then well....i dont kno...lol ok well cant wait til you update again!! =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 02:00 CDT
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I really wanna cry for Sesshy-chan. Way to go to Kags for putting him in his place though. I also have to mention Inu-chan. His intentions seem good. I can't wait to read the next chappie. ^_^
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Reviewed By: *Nagasaki On: April 07, 2004 22:56 CDT
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NOW!NOW he figures it out!!!! well it is a little to late and she's a little to gone...sorry my mom is listening to country right now and it kind os fits the saying right now. she should forgive him...but she should also let him stir for awhile if i were her. but i'm not and this is your story...your welcome for the idea by the way. i can't wait until your next chapter and this one was great!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Soul bled dry On: April 07, 2004 18:44 CDT
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wow...this chapter is crazy, I really wouldn't have thought she would have screwed around with his brother! Crazyness man. and.... another cliffy..Grr..well keep the updates coming ~Jess
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: April 06, 2004 15:08 CDT
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I'm so addicted now. As much as I love Inu/Kag, this seems like having Sess-chan and InuYasha "fighting" (as it would seem ) over her is really cool!! PLeasep lease keep it up
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Title: brittanY
Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 05, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the chapter and i can't wait until your next one! sesshy deserves what he gets and so does inuyasha! inuyasha for taking advantage of kagome in her vulnerable state! and sesshy because he shouldn't have played with her heart and he has no fucking claim on her!!!!! what is kagome to do? hmmmmmm...beat the shit out of sesshy and say "You have no FUCKING CLAIM over me after what you did! I'm not yours and i can fuck whoever the fucking hell I want!!!! And you can't do shit about it!!!!" at least that's what i would say! but sesshy and kagome need to make up soon! please!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 20:17 CDT
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well those loops are working for me! and if they arent for anyone else then well...i dont know! again interesting chappy! i love this story, i was thinking about it earlier today wondering if i ever finished reading the chapters you had up. im so forgetfull sometimes! ^.^;; update again soon! oh and one more thing! i would be sooooooo embaressed if someone came into the room while i was doing it with someone! especially the if it was the older brother of the person i was doing it with.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 15:26 CDT
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I read all of this in one sitting and it seems a little werid to have a 32 w/ a 17 yr old, but it seems totally wacked out now. Not in a bad way but in a plot twisting way. It'll be crasy to see what happens next. Cant wait for it! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 22:58 CDT
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Ok, I hope I'm not the only one who wants to hurt Sesshy. As much as I love him and his emotionless ways, talk about mean to Kag-chan! I can't wait to read more soon!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 04, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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devilish kagome... I like that but please don't break sesshoumaru's heart... i know his an ass and a jerk but like you said in the story, for know particular reason your just drown to that cold hearted,fierce eyes demon. (drowling)... please update asap
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Title: ....I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Ariella On: April 04, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love the story!!How did you come up with the idea to write this?Very different from other fics i've read. Please continue with the great story!!
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