| "Unspoken" Reviews/Comments [ 253 ] |
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Title: Veggiegirl101
Reviewed By: Veggiegirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! This fanfic is one of the best I've ever read. Actually I like all of your stories. I've been reading them ever since your days at ff.net. But I was always to lazy to review...but I just wanted to say I luv your fics and I hope you contiue to update them. ~VG101~
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Title: Review of Chapter Five
Reviewed By: Crazyhelga (not signed in) On: November 22, 2004 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was simply amazing! I cannot wait to see another chapter and see what Bulma and Vegeta conspire together this time... stupid Brolli deserves everything that's comin' to him. Hmm... well, I loved it, and I can't wait to see another chapter (a little repetitive, aren't I? hehe...) Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint(not logged in) On: November 21, 2004 15:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whenever I get an update notice for this fic I get that little-kid-at-Christmas feeling, wondering what Santa put in my stocking this time. I know that probably sounds a tad silly, but this really is my #1 favourite fic. Even the waiting for new chapters is kinda cool, 'cause if this was a novel I'd have finished it on the first day and missed out on all the anticipation, lol. I can honestly tell you there's nothing I don't like about this story. It's awesome and this chapter was no exception. I guess I'll have to go back to waiting eagerly for the next instalment, so in the meantime, I hope you have a good Thanks Giving - assuming you're American ^_~ -- and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 12:31 EST
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Yay! An update! Well, I knew it wasn't going to be quick and painless. I can't wait to see how these reluctant allies work together!
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Title: Amazing chapter
Reviewed By: Bulma/Storm On: November 21, 2004 05:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More, please! [ ]´s, Bulma.
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Reviewed By: Sorceressfujin On: November 21, 2004 02:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: November 20, 2004 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!!!! I hope you can update every week. What is he going to have poor Bulma do next?
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 22:03 EST
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This was such an exciting read! I was eager to see what how Vegeta would react to seeing her. Excellent work! I especially liked the pact Bulma and Vegeta had made... but! I would hope that she will choose not to leave Vegeta behind (wink wink ^_^). Thank you for updating, and I eagerly await the next installment!
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Title: unspoken
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 20, 2004 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they have chemistry so why is she fighting it...oh how i wanted them together..no for sex but for her to feel love from him...but i can't wait for more so update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: November 20, 2004 20:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, things are certainly getting interesting. Vegeta might have a hard time keeping his hands off Bulma, but I think Bulma will have a harder time warming up to him. Great chapter.
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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: SorceressFujin On: November 18, 2004 06:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!! MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: reiketsukan On: November 17, 2004 10:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please post the next chapter soon;)
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Reviewed By: Paula A. On: November 03, 2004 07:25 EST
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Uau, this story is starting to sound very good. In fact it awesome -_- I had already know your work on fanfiction.net, but when you said that you "transferred" your work to here, i came here immediately, mostly because i wanted to read more about "UNWANTED", but my surprise that you already had another story rolling, and it's absolutely amazing. I specially like the way that you make Vegeta acts the same like in the series, the way that you make Bulma feel superior to others, and mostly because you always make them a couple in the end, and i love that, especially the tribulations that you make them pass to achieve happiness in the end. Keep going ^_^
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Title: Lady Goldmoon
Reviewed By: Lady Goldmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 03:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I hope you finish this story... definitely one of the best DBZ fics I've read in a long while; the story moves at a good pace, and the plot is great... please continue!
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Title: Aww
Reviewed By: Sandy02 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I need to know what happened in the cariage! >.< Gr... Why do you end it so abruptly? :( Keep the chapters coming! -KittyKatRascal-
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