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Title: chapter 2 (friendship)
Reviewed By: BogusRed On: August 04, 2004 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really good chapter! One of your best pieces of work! I can't wait for the next chapter! I must read the next one now! Ugh! Don't keep me waiting too long >.< or I might explode!
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Title: Unspoken
Reviewed By: Bulma Storm On: August 04, 2004 17:26 EDT
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WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! more, please!
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Reviewed By: Exupery On: August 04, 2004 16:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is sooOooOoo yummy!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next chapter..vegeta's reaction when he finally discovers her secret should be really interesting.. Ganbatte!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: HotGirl1201 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I absolutely love it! There is nothing else I can say! You must be the best writer I have ever seen. And I mean that ive been reading fanfiction for about 3 years now!
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Reviewed By: Katrina_chan On: July 23, 2004 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic got even better in the first chapter. There is something so addicting about your stories and i just want to keep reading them. I didn't read the Surviving Together trilogy until after you competed it so I read all in a few days. I really want to read the next chapter of this so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kichigai17 On: July 22, 2004 11:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO glad this story is finally up! Its so interesting; i love the plot already! That was a clever twist how u made it so Bulma couldn't kill herself without having all the other staff killed. I am sooo excited to read this story!! Yay! ^_^ I LOVE all your works, you're my favorite author, chicky!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH! U HAVE DONE IT AGAIN!!!!!! YAY!!!!! Thank u KAMI!!! Im so glad u have this new story on I hate brolli damnd bastard Well Update sooN!!!!!! LATER!
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Reviewed By: crazyhelga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Ooh, I can't wait to see what Bulma and Vegeta conjure up to destroy Brolli. And I can't wait until Vegeta finds out what Bulma actually looks like, which I hope he does. Hehe.. Well, great chapter and I hope to see more soon. I need a fix. Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Title: Caralin Fury
Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 15:27 EDT
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Oh...I love a man who is comfortable in his birthday suit! No wonder Bulma can't seem to get him off of her mind...who could blame her? This is your best story yet...not that your other stories aren't wonderful...but this one has Bulma lusting after Vegeta out-right and I find that to very appealing! Caralin
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: July 18, 2004 13:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your stories, but this one is fast becoming one of my favourites! I'm so glad you decided to make Brolli a character. I love the way you write him and Vegeta's character is so wonderfully intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sawnya (Not signed in) On: July 18, 2004 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Poor Bulma! I can't wait to see how this story is going to turn out. You have them right in character, especially Vegeta. I felt almost, as if I were right there. Well done. =)
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Reviewed By: me On: July 18, 2004 02:02 EDT
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damn, off to another GREAT story!!! WOOT!! Wow, that was really really exciting! i can't wait for the next chapter to be posted! man, how is she going to explain this now? and will she ever be caught by brolli?
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Reviewed By: Melina On: July 18, 2004 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Things are already getting interesting. I was hooked since the first chapter! You are an amazing writer.
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Reviewed By: BogusRed On: July 17, 2004 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story. The plot is very engaging and interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter. Although I feel the dream at the end could have been done slower and with a little more care. Update soon!
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Title: ch1
Reviewed By: Bryony On: July 17, 2004 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's definitely interesting, thats for sure :) Looking forward to the next chapter. There's gonna be a bit of a power struggle, i reckon ;) ~bry
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