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Title: LisaB (not logged in)
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 12:56 EDT
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Interesting start. It seems similar to so many other stories at this point, but I'm sure you're going to put your own stamp on it! Looking forward to the first chapter!
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Reviewed By: Crazyhelga (won't let me log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 02:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! I absolutly love it so far, and I hope to see more soon. I love that you brought Brolli into the picture because no one really uses him anymore and I think he's such an interesting character in the series even though he was only mentioned in the movies. Well, great chapter and keep up the great work! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: meavebob On: July 07, 2004 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Realy nice story I can't wait too read the next chapter. Update soon please!!!
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Title: Captain of the elite
Reviewed By: NamoiandVegela On: July 06, 2004 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm happy you made another fic. Kakkabrat sent it to me I had no idea that it was up already
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Reviewed By: Katrina_chan On: July 02, 2004 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my favorite fanfic writter and I am so excited about reading this fic. Please update soon. I have never been this interested in reading a fic after the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: aozora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Mikala On: June 25, 2004 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start. I love all your stories.
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Reviewed By: Jessica B. On: June 23, 2004 11:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is going to turn out very interesting i think. I can't wait to see more :).
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Reviewed By: kl On: June 22, 2004 10:26 EDT
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i loved it! please get the next chapter out soon!
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Reviewed By: Vejitagurl On: June 22, 2004 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! A new fic!!! I love all your fics! Your such an amazing writer and i wish that i could write fics that could amount to half of what you get. In due time. Havent wrote a fic yet, but planing to later on. All your fics are original or different in different ways. You have really evolved your writing over the past fics. I really enjoy everything you write and hope to see updates coming soon hopefully XD. I an lookin forward to this new story and cant wait untill the plot forms. Im such a sap for VB stories. Hope you update unwanted soon to. Your one of a good few authors who updatea dn finish their stories like some others that abandon it, keeps me in so much suspence!!! Its fun to write really long reviews cause its fun XD!! I like write very long reviews. i dont really think this is long enough so let me go on... Yes i found a site that is actually gona make an episode on surviving together OMG i can hardly wait!!! I just saw the teaser and nearly jumped in anticipation! The drawings are so cool and i give her major props on her talent. The voices are cool too!! I cant hardly wait!!!! I just keep babling and babling anf babling!!! Im trying to finish the chracters on this thing yay 291 to go!!!! yea!!! Yes your one of those great authors out there and fanfiction would be really different with you not there. You have so much originality and creativity it makes me enjoy your fics. Well i hope you update soon i am looking forward to your updates!! ~^vejitagurl^~ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: DarkPrincess (didn't feel like signing in) On: June 21, 2004 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dark.........This story has a very dark start. I like it alot. This is very sad on Bulma's part and very...evil on Vegeta...but then again it seems that he has a spot for him mother...hummm I wonder what could have happened to her. Only till next time! I LOVE IT, but very DARK! I LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: thoughts On: June 21, 2004 18:51 EDT
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An excellent opening. I look forward to your other chapters.
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Title: unspoken
Reviewed By: mlf On: June 21, 2004 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow how sad for her.i hope that she will soon find what she is looking for...please update soon maria
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Reviewed By: Bulma75* On: June 21, 2004 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! You're such a talented writer, I feel honored that I get to read your stories. As always, keep up the great work ^_~ You have a wonderful gift with the written word.
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Reviewed By: me On: June 21, 2004 00:32 EDT
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GAH!! yes! another fic out!!! woot! how exciting! and damn are you off to a great start! not that you never were! your stories are freakin' awsome!!!!!
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