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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: (Sulawesi)Nli On: October 29, 2004 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, only 4 chapters and you allready have 101 reviews. your doing something right! Keep up the good work! It would be nice if you updated more often but thats all the advice i have for you. heh. :D
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Reviewed By: DreamingAngelx On: October 26, 2004 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fiction story is absoutely wonderful. My attention was held since the very beginning. Such great writing style. The emotions are so clearly felt by the reader. Great story. Continue soon, I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Rock on.
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled upon this fic by pure accident and i am glad i did. It is wonderful. Please Promise to update soon.
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Reviewed By: serendy4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about 'major' anticipation! I can't wait to read the next installment! LGV, you are making this one of the best V/B fics ever! WOW! I love how it's progressing and am eager see what will happen now that Vegeta finally knows who Bulma really is. How do you do it girl? I'm extremely grateful that you continue to write such wonderful stories for us fans. Keep up the good work, and thanks a lot.
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Title: Chapter 4 review
Reviewed By: crazyhelga (not signed in) On: October 21, 2004 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh shit! Bulma's in for it now! I hope Vegeta goes easy on her, seeing that she did give him information on Brolli. Well, I absolutely loved it, and I hope to see another chapter soon! Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: bex-chan (bexj@pentrebont.fsnet.co.uk) On: October 20, 2004 11:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hello there!! I am actually a fanfiction author but i love your stories and thought i beta check if you had an account on this site as most authors do and there you were!! Very much love this story!! very original!!! PLEASE post it on Fanficion because i find it so much easier to r+r on fanfiction...also more people review on Fanfiction...!! Anyways...love your style of writing and love your creativity as it reflects that of a true author with a great deal of potential. It's a pleasure reading your story and i hope that you continue this with as much enthusiasm as you have started...it would be a shame not to ne? All the best and i promise to continue reviewing this beautiful tale Bex-Chan
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 21:48 EDT
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Another well-written installment! I thought maybe Vegeta would be just a little happier to acquire Bulma... but then again, it wouldn't be Vegeta if that happened, would it? ^_^ Thanks for the update, and I hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Jessica B. On: October 14, 2004 10:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter! please make it soon, i want to see what happened when he finally meets with Bulma!
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Reviewed By: Aozora19 On: October 13, 2004 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice chapter!! the plot moved a lot more quicker and with the identities now revealed, I really can't wait to see the confrontation between the two~
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Reviewed By: bobmeave On: October 13, 2004 11:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic you are really my favorite author. I can't wait for the next chap please update soon
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: October 12, 2004 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's it… this fic is now officially my #1 favorite B/V. I absolutely love it. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and please don't ever stop writing. You're just amazing. If at all possible, please update soon. Hugs ES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Bulma75* On: October 10, 2004 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omG, please lol update asap. I LOVE this story, as I love all of your stories and I cannot wait to see what happens!! lol Im actually giddy now ^_^ :D
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Reviewed By: blabble On: October 10, 2004 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wew... now it comes down to business... this plot-development is unexpected but very much appreciated. can't wait what happens next... ;) lg, blubb
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Reviewed By: blabble On: October 10, 2004 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wew... now it comes down to business... this plot-development is unexpected but very much appreciated. can't wait what happens next... ;) lg, blubb
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Reviewed By: Rei-kun On: October 08, 2004 21:00 EDT
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No! Cliff hanger. I've waited so very long for this update. I pray that you update again soon. This story has my full attention. :\ The writing in this chapter was wonderful. You particularly explained the seriichi very well. ^^ I'm constantly awaiting an update!
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