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Reviewed By: Yuki_ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I much enjoyed this one, It's darker than some of your others right off the bat but that could easily be part of my enjoyment. I look forward to the next installment to see which way the storyline will travel.
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Reviewed By: serendy4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very promising start; and seeing as how you've yet to dissapoint me as I continue reading one of your creations to the very end, I have to say that I'm very excited! As everyone knows, "never say never" Bulma. Vegeta has a hard task ahead and I can't wait to see it unfold through your great creativity LGV. This is a B/V after all and even though Bulma hates Saiyans for obvious reasons, Vegeta seems to want to change the ways of his predecessors and that should help him out with her, right? But will that be enough? I don't think so! I can't wait to read their upcoming trials and tribulations as they embark on this new journey of true love! V/B= true love in my book!!! 'Can't wait 'till you update!
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Title: LIke it
Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far, I usually dont like the first person point of views but i didnt realize that was what it was before I was done. :) Good start. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: hinagiku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the "bulma is taken to Vegetasei" pattern, and I like especially dark stories. Quite intresting start, I'm quite curious to what will happen when Bulma and Vegeta collide... (don't make me wait too long, please)
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 01:14 EDT
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And we're smack dab in the story--intense start! The juxtaposition of victim and victimizer as our fated pair had a very dramatic, new feel this time. I have a strong suspicion this isn't going to be just any ole B/V! One of the best prologues I've read--you nailed both characters at the height of their passions. Just wait until these passions collide--woooo! debbiechan
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Title: GREAT prologue
Reviewed By: Bulma/Storm On: June 19, 2004 22:36 EDT
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Great! I can´t wait to read more! [ ]´s, Bulma
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful start. Poor Bulma, you showed us her emotions, her despair and humiliation so vividly, proving once again why you are one of the best B/V writers in fandom.
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Reviewed By: pucca253 On: June 19, 2004 19:38 EDT
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This story is good mang.your a hella good writer
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Reviewed By: Mely On: June 19, 2004 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am speechless! Wow! Everytime you write a story I am always amazed by your talent.
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Reviewed By: CrypticMaia On: June 19, 2004 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have not failed to amaze me again LavenderGoddess! I'm definitely going to be waiting on pins and needles for more of this fic. Thank you for bringing some enjoyment to my day.
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: June 19, 2004 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn… that's an intense start! I'm hooked after only reading the first chapter ^_^ Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: BogusRed On: June 19, 2004 14:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always loved your writing LavenderGoddessV and this story is no acception. I especially like how you've jumped right into it making it interesting from the very begining instead of boring us with background info. I can't wait for the first chapter.
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