| "Unspoken" Reviews/Comments [ 253 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! It is so wonderful to see this story updated! :) Very excellent chapter indeed. Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: 1andonlyLonna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 15:37 EST
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This was highly well written with an inticing elaborate plot.
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Title: J.J.
Reviewed By: bonedaddy224 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 18:21 EDT
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Okay. Get your butt in gear. That is all. Hahaha come oooooooon! Why the year long absence? Its just plain annoying, WHERE ARE YOU? man oh man.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, you really should think about returning to continue writing it, it's a shame to let it go to waste
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Title: Please update :D pretty please with sugar on top
Reviewed By: snoopy99eb [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL it's been almost a years since my last rating! *pokes other post. Please update, this story is great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 00:48 EST
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This is such a good story. I love the way you've developed it so far, and I love the relationship between bulma and vegeta you've created... good job, I just reread the story and thought to compliment you again on it.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 12:52 EST
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PLEASE UPDATE
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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: snoopy99eb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 05:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAH! What happens next?!! I'm on the edge of my seat! LOL Great story, I can't wait 'till your next posting!
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Reviewed By: lolloba On: September 26, 2005 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow an other great chapter i can't wait to read the next one. Hope you will update soon.
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Title: Unspoken.
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 17:15 EDT
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LG, you have got me at the edge of my seat! What a another delicious fic, you cooked up--I love it! Great writing and the cliffies--not to mention the suspense. I can't wait to see what happens next especially when Bulma finds out she's pregnant and Vegeta ordered her "abortion". *chews nails* Update when you can, I will be waiting. *grins* Bura-chan
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Reviewed By: Pudgoose On: September 05, 2005 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic. I didn't know you were still writing. This chapter was good, though. I like how you're weaving in the whole political debates and abortion rights and junk. In fact, I think I like that even more than the Bulma/Vegeta drama. o.O Gosh I've become such a nerd... Keep it up. I'll definately be checking up on the story from time to time. And keep talking to whoever convinced you to start writing again. He/She wins my sweet-talker-award of the day, hehehe. And very little criticism, but if you can afford to slow the story down a bit and still get chapters out, please do. It felt like everything was flying by in this chapter... Anyway, that's all. It was still brilliant. Loving it, Puddy
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Reviewed By: LauraJean On: August 23, 2005 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is so cool, I'm so glad you finally updated! But aaahh that sucks that Bulmas pregnant and they're going to kill her baby! Its not the babys' fault it had a psycho father!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged on) On: August 21, 2005 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that chapter was absolutely thrilling, the sudden turn in events is unbelievable. I liked the way you incorporated the perspective of the masses into this chapter, as it deepened my understanding of the political and social implications of the seriichi on saiyan culture. For instance, the sharp devide evident in the shouting of the masses in the seating area during the fight, but more importantly I enjoyed the women's perspective given at the end of the fight for up until then we only saw it from the mens point of view. The interjection of the women provided a refeshing alternative, and I am thoroughly intrigued with the role that Brolli's mother may play in the future. It seems such a cruel punishment that Bulma is pregnant but at the same time I don't think i would agree with Vegeta's decision to terminate the child, especially without consulting Bulma. Although the baby, if kept alive, may be seen as a constant reminder of Bulma's subservience to Brolli, having the child terminated without her knowledge also demonstrates her subservience, her lack of freedom over her own life. During the fight Vegeta said that Brolli only owned Bulma's body yet in making the decision for Bulma's baby to be killed he is doing the exact same thing, ironically it is the ultimate show of his power over her, I only hope he changes his mind for it will be detrimental to their relationship.
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Reviewed By: bouch On: August 18, 2005 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! It's the only think i can say I just adore your fic. Hope you'll update soon!!!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 01:28 EDT
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Wow! I hope he tells her. I mean I agree with the decision and I'm sure she would too, but the least they can do is tell her! How will you have her react? HMMMMMM? I want to know!
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