| "Unspoken" Reviews/Comments [ 253 ] |
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Reviewed By: Laura J On: October 08, 2004 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was amazing!! I'm so excited!! ^_^ I absolutely love how you write this is such a great plot and i cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: dbz-fan jess On: October 08, 2004 18:36 EDT
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that is an awesome chapter and I can't wait to read more... this story rocks
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Title: Aww....
Reviewed By: Sandy02 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 18:22 EDT
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See? Now you've got me all excited for the next chapter >.< I need to know what happens! Whats Vegeta gonna do to Bulma?
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Reviewed By: Mely On: October 08, 2004 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to know what happens next!!!! You just love to torture us with with these cliffhangers. Great job with this chapter. I hope Vegeta doesn't do anything bad to Bulma.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 15:58 EDT
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Hooray! Vegeta has figured out the truth--but will be a good thing or a bad thing? Hopefully you won't make them suffer too much (as if! That's why we read!) Great chapter and I await your next update!
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Reviewed By: spini On: October 08, 2004 08:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah! He knows finally!! Excellent work! Can´t wait for the next chapter! lol love ya
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Reviewed By: Kendra On: October 08, 2004 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit this story is comming along pretty well. I was pleased to she Veggie figured it out by himself. Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: spini On: September 29, 2004 11:16 EDT
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Yeah i know you´re quite busy, but please update your stories unspoken and unwanted as soon as you can, okay?! We´re all addicted!!! love ya
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Title: Unspoken
Reviewed By: Kat 22 On: September 20, 2004 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story and I hope you updat soooon
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Reviewed By: Rachel Y On: September 20, 2004 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, but it'd be better if you updated more often (hint). Please! Pretty please with a cherry on top? >.
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Reviewed By: meek On: September 11, 2004 22:36 EDT
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awesome story so far!! i can't wait to see what you have planned next for bulma and vegeta! i really hope vegeta beats the living hell outta brolly! poor bulma i can't wait to see what happens when vegeta learns of who she really is! please update soon this is such a good fic i couldn't stop readin! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: marvenball On: September 11, 2004 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter is really good i can't wait for the next one you have to update soon please!!!
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Title: Heh
Reviewed By: Sandy02 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, what a situation Bulma is going to be in, wonder how Vegeta is going to take it... As always, I love your work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Katrina_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderfully thought out. I loved how you planned their meeting so well. I feel sorry for Bulma and I hope she shows up to meet Vegeta. I'm trying to think of anything I was unhappy with and nothing comes to mind. Keep up the fantastic work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: September 03, 2004 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fantastic, especially the last chapter where i was left hanging off the edge of my seat wondering if Vegeta will realise that Bulma is a ningen. I liked the way you developed Vegetas character the way the love and bond he felt towards his mother shaped his views on women. I'm not sure whether he has a respect for women unique in the saiyajin culture as he abhors the buying and selling of women. Or if he is discusted at the women sold into slavery as sex slaves, for when he says ' Have my father's women either relocated or killed. It's time this whorehouse returns to a place of political power." He seems to not value the life of these women one bit whereas before i thought he abhored slavery because he felt that the life of a living being is too expensive to put a price on. When you added that statement of vegeta it made me realise that this is not the case for he seems to have a superior and condescending attitude towards women in the Harem which stems from the hatred he felt for his father for placing these women above his mother. Does that mean that Vegeta does not despise the act of slavery itself? If so how will he react to Bulma when he realises she is Brolli's favourite whore? I can't wait for the next update to see whether Vegeta will expose Bulma and see what she really looks like. However i have a feeling that Bulma might not show up to their next meeting for as she mentioned earlier he has no way of tracking her down.
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