| "Unspoken" Reviews/Comments [ 253 ] |
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Reviewed By: hinagiku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 14:05 EDT
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What does that mean "the end" ??? Wonderful chapter, but not at all a good end :-( . I don't know, I guess I just prefer happy endings or at least no open endings. Will there be a sequerel?
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Ekly [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is as great as all your others, I knew you could do it, (I instant messaged you during my winter break to encourage you to continue, and I'm SO glad you did.) I can't wait to see where this story goes.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 15:48 EDT
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I'm glad you updated!! Very powerful chapter. I feel so sorry for bulma, but knowing her the way i do i know she'll bounce right back. please update!!!
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Title: starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 02:39 EDT
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Sorrie it took me so long to comment but i wish i had a chance to read this wayyyy before now. you did an excellent job in writing this chapter. i've been looking forward to it for a while! i just wanted to tell you that you did a great job and for you to update SOON! i can't wait to find out what happens to bulma and what she's thinking after what vegeta said to her. lol~~ update soon!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 16:04 EDT
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You know, AK is the earthquake capital of the US, and I was certain we had one the other day---but then I checked my email and realized it was all the B/V fans jumping for joy at this update! Very good chapter. Loved the added political element. Gives the story much more depth than just "I hate my enemy." Brava!
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Title: so happy!
Reviewed By: bax0wee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 02:19 EDT
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ahh what a surprise ! finally after almost 2 years i see from you again !! ahh i love this fic ! :D actually i love both of unwanted and unspoken.. i must say that the plot you wrote for each story is wonderful and sinfully addictive .. ahh great now i can't wait for the next updated. i reread the story and i still feel so engulf in it..lol finished the new chap in 20 minutes and now i regret it so much because i gotta way for your next update ! please take your time for the next chapter but just don't leave the story abandon.. i'd hate to see such a wonderful storyline not come to a conclusion because the author stops updating. =] well it's a very interesting change of attitude you've left the chapter ending. now it looks like bulma is going to treat vegeta emotionless for a while .. stupid vegeta finally got her to open up and become herself and now he has to go ruin it with his stupid mouth.. hehe oh well that just leaves for a better compensation later on! mm this change of attitude should be fun to read.. hmm.. i suspect jicama to be up to something.. i dunno.. either with brolli's death or with her husband but i don't like her ! she seems fishy and too smart for perhaps vegeta's own good.. anyways, i can't wait to read the next chap from you.. great job !
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Reviewed By: Kichigai17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally another chapter!! This story is awesome! Thats such a cool idea about the third-class finding mates on other planets. And im glad they're just not immediately falling in love, its much more real this way. Good job!
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Title: Youve come back
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! I can't believe that you hve come back to writing after soo long. i loved this chapter; it is just tragic that their relationship is falling apart. but its going to come back again!!!! Can't wait for more updates!!! ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: Katrina_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for finally updating, and please don't let the next one take so long! I thought the turn of events was exciting and I can't wait to find out what happens next, and to see how Bulma handles the situation. It would be amazing to see her start using her computer skills to program an escape.
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Reviewed By: hinagiku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O you are so amazing! I`m glad you updated again :) Oh, Vegeta ist soooo stupid, and yet he's so unbelievable in character ... well, I hope he's realising what he's doing before things go beyond repair... i'm so curious what Bulma will do next, plotting her excape? I can't wait to find out :)
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Reviewed By: tin797 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 11:42 EDT
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How did it come to this?? stupid vegeta, makes me so angry!
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 22:51 EDT
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WOW ya back! That's so great. I love this story, andi was surden you had given up on it. I am glad to say i was wrong. Still love it! please, update a bit sooner this time..!
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Title: Catreena
Reviewed By: Catreena [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Back!!! I am so happy to see you have returned to writing, please keep it up. I love your stories.
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Reviewed By: ZOLA22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 19:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you updated I thought you'd given up on this story. I hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA! I'm so glad you are still writing! I loved this story, and am glad to see an update. Can't wait to see more.
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