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Reviewed By: blabble On: October 10, 2004 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wew... now it comes down to business... this plot-development is unexpected but very much appreciated. can't wait what happens next... ;) lg, blubb
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Reviewed By: blabble On: October 10, 2004 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wew... now it comes down to business... this plot-development is unexpected but very much appreciated. can't wait what happens next... ;) lg, blubb
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Reviewed By: Rei-kun On: October 08, 2004 21:00 EDT
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No! Cliff hanger. I've waited so very long for this update. I pray that you update again soon. This story has my full attention. :\ The writing in this chapter was wonderful. You particularly explained the seriichi very well. ^^ I'm constantly awaiting an update!
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Reviewed By: Laura J On: October 08, 2004 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was amazing!! I'm so excited!! ^_^ I absolutely love how you write this is such a great plot and i cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: dbz-fan jess On: October 08, 2004 18:36 EDT
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that is an awesome chapter and I can't wait to read more... this story rocks
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Title: Aww....
Reviewed By: Sandy02 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 18:22 EDT
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See? Now you've got me all excited for the next chapter >.< I need to know what happens! Whats Vegeta gonna do to Bulma?
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Reviewed By: Mely On: October 08, 2004 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to know what happens next!!!! You just love to torture us with with these cliffhangers. Great job with this chapter. I hope Vegeta doesn't do anything bad to Bulma.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 15:58 EDT
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Hooray! Vegeta has figured out the truth--but will be a good thing or a bad thing? Hopefully you won't make them suffer too much (as if! That's why we read!) Great chapter and I await your next update!
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Reviewed By: spini On: October 08, 2004 08:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah! He knows finally!! Excellent work! Can´t wait for the next chapter! lol love ya
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Reviewed By: Kendra On: October 08, 2004 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit this story is comming along pretty well. I was pleased to she Veggie figured it out by himself. Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: spini On: September 29, 2004 11:16 EDT
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Yeah i know you´re quite busy, but please update your stories unspoken and unwanted as soon as you can, okay?! We´re all addicted!!! love ya
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Title: Unspoken
Reviewed By: Kat 22 On: September 20, 2004 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story and I hope you updat soooon
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Reviewed By: Rachel Y On: September 20, 2004 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, but it'd be better if you updated more often (hint). Please! Pretty please with a cherry on top? >.
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Reviewed By: meek On: September 11, 2004 22:36 EDT
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awesome story so far!! i can't wait to see what you have planned next for bulma and vegeta! i really hope vegeta beats the living hell outta brolly! poor bulma i can't wait to see what happens when vegeta learns of who she really is! please update soon this is such a good fic i couldn't stop readin! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: marvenball On: September 11, 2004 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter is really good i can't wait for the next one you have to update soon please!!!
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