| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leomae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 01:12 EDT
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Ummm...I'm probably not the only one to notice this but what the hell is up with Ryen playing favorites? I mean he sure as hell is a alot nicer to Sess than to Inu and aside from the "moment" they had in Kyushu he hasn't said one nice thing to the boy. Plus he always gets beat up when something happens to Rin when most of the time it's her own damn fault and she needs to live up to it. He'll probably get beat up over this stunt of her's also. But seriously Ryen talks about having this long list of things he needs to apologize to Sess for and he's only said sorry to Inu twice!!! WTF??!!! man WTF???!!!! *sigh* otherwise the story is really good so keep up the good work and update soon ok ja!!!!
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Title: The Curse Of The Dragon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 15:54 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapter?
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Title: The Curse Of The Dragon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 15:50 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapter?
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uggh. finally i can review. wtf is wrong with m.m. so damn finicky! last time i checked i was a registered user. hmmm. anyhow, this chap was about the sweetest thing i've ever read. i loved the song. it was perfect. and what the hell, now rin is trying to take matters into her own hands. i am afraid of the next chap...in a good way! i truly hope that you decide to continue writing after this fic is finished. i wont know what to do with myself if you dont. ^_*
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 11:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew this time was coming. But I remember you telling me there was something else in the works, so I'm not that upset. :D You made my girlfriend cry, by the way, and then you got me in trouble because I laughed at her. She cried when Inuyasha sang to Kagome, and now I'm in trouble double because I don't do that kind of thing for her, lol. Women like chocolate, right? lol. This story is so much fun. You're causing my stomach to knot up. I knew it would, regretably, be over soon, but these last chapter cliffs are killing me! You're definitley the master. :D
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update you had. Hope another comes out soon. Or whenever you can. Your a great Author and you talents should be shown to the world.
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Title: The Curse Of The Dragon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 18:26 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: confused much?
Reviewed By: sexymama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2005 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was confused with the last chappy cause u made ryen sound like a badguy cause i thought he didnt want rin seein the doc but now he does? whats goin on? at first i thought it was someone else and not ryen but now im just confused! i still luv ur story... its kinda like a harrypotter book cause its soooo long... but i dont want it to end tee hee hee man u prop thank im crazy but ya buo bye
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Reviewed By: sad soul On: October 04, 2005 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nods her head..... you know I haven't called you this for a long time :)... the chapter before this one I thought oh my she is finally letting rin and sess be happy and everything is going to be fine. Then I read this chapter. I see you decided to become a sadist once again. WHY!?!?!??!? Jesum this chapter was just so good but so heart wrenching. Thats the sign of a talented writer when they can make you laugh and cry with every new chapter and you can never guess what is going to happen next. Sigh need I say be nice to rin poor girl is going to end up in a mental institute. Good twist on the drugs though. I never thought that might happen. I also love your OC Ryen. There so many things that have yet to be explored....jesum how many chapter are you going to shoot for 100, 150, 200??? Don't worry you can do no wrong.
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Reviewed By: Sex_Kitten On: October 04, 2005 15:45 EDT
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*growls* I think you arrre slacking in the lemon deparrrtment. Just mentioning sex and not showing it? Who arrre you and wherrre is the authorrr that wrrrote the firrrst 50 or 60 chapterrrs? *purrs* But I still love your storrrry. Keep up the lemony goodness.
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Reviewed By: LaLa13 (nsi) On: October 04, 2005 15:42 EDT
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Hey, it's me again. I got the last two new chapters, but I haven't actually read the newest one yet. The ferris wheel was nice, and the dancing in the rain was so sweet!! Can't stay long... a devoted fan, LaLa13
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Title: The Curse Of The Dragon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 10:55 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Lucient... now where is my damned logged in status?! On: October 04, 2005 02:44 EDT
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Mirth, a ruse, fear, a lesson... and EDUCATION! lol. This was, without a doubt, a wonderful chapter. exhilerating, smart, cool. Everything and more, you always put out the best. The detail, the wording, it was all so perfect. The images played on and on... Awesome.
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(nsi) On: October 04, 2005 01:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol loved that chapter girl thanx for the update, and coming from an english major i didnt know that lil lesson befor now thnx for that too and keep them chappies comin'
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Title: Awesom
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Inuyasha1026 On: October 02, 2005 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story i liked u when u warned us about certain parts of the story nice hope u keep it up.
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