| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 17:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, kouga got it good! XD he should have just taken the criticism and well, moved outta the way. ha. the "coming together" of rin and sess was beautiful. very very sexy, too. wow. and the implied getting it on between ryen and kauai was Funny as hell. i bet nothing will be able to wipe that smile off of his face for good while. also, i considered it a treat that the chap was longer than normal. when i got to the end of it, i was left with a very satisfied, contented feeling. finally, all was right in their world. : )good work.
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Reviewed By: LiLlAdY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 15:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Lets all give it up for Sessh because finally got some. The chapter was beautifully written, and I don't care that it was long. It was very enjoyable and so good it didnt even seem that long it just sucked me in like most of your chapters.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 03:02 EST
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Wow. You've done it again. And yes, let's all clap for Sessh and Ryen, who both finally got some. The chapter was beautifully written, and I don't care that it was long. It was very enjoyable. But god only knows how many fucking pages it was in MS word.I usually write 6 pages before I post, and it comes out to 2-3, so... 18*2 or 3... good god. I wish I could write that much! Your descriptions on everything were inspiring. They really lit up the scenes. What great timing for Inu's "period". lol. That's what baby calls it. The Kouga thing was so fucking funny... 'What the hell did I eat?!' ROFL! Damn... we're getting closer to the end, aren't we? I suppose all good things come to an end. :( You're so incredibly talented. We're lucky you use that talent here, and we can read it all for free, cause I'm a cheap bastard. But I already told you, I'd buy your book, lol.
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Reviewed By: Shrikant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 00:08 EST
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Great story. And a very funny chapter. Specially Bank and Koga. Ryen and Sess finally getting some action, while Inu goes without. Lol! Wonder if Kagome is just gonna up and leave come her 18th birthday if her mom continues like this. And this chapter was not overlong, either that or I'm getting way too used to reading books on my computer. Please do update soon.
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Title: Grease
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:04 EST
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Is my favorite movie of all time. It always has been. I watch it at least once a month like religion, lol. I never giggled so much when InuYasha did Danny & Rin is the prefct Rizzo. That lemon at the end...hold cow. Rug burns? That girl was well fucked. Dayum. Wish is twas me! :snort: Loved this, just awesome. So i take it there's more to come?
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Title: Life just sucks, doesn't it?
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 18:18 EST
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WOOT! Ding Dong the warlock's dead! This was a great chap. I was irritated with Rin, but I had a seven mile grin when Ryen confirmed Naraku's fate with InuYasha. YES! I went nuts when Bank & Miroku came back & i loved Bank's icebreaker with Inu. Very sweet! Now on to the last chap!
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Title: OMG! YOU KILLED BANK!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 17:41 EST
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As you can see, i'm still catching up. Sweet Jesus, you killed Bank gurl!!! Poor InuYasha! Let's hope Sesshy-Sama is feeling generous...
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Title: Fuck me sideways!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 04:13 EST
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OMG, freaking hilarious!! I loved how you used that Staind song! It's one of my faves & it fits InuYasha puuuurfectly! Just an amazing story!!
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Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 02:37 EST
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I'm finally getting a chance to catch up on some reading & i came here right away! Congrats on your wins at the IYFG. I can't think of any fiction more deserving. Curse is an EXCELLENT fic and I love it! It's funny, deadly & really original. But best of all, it's drop-dead sexxxxxy! Rock on! ^_^
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 13:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the naraku standoff was so intense! i am so glad that ryen was able to swing around more than his own sword. it makes sense that he could. wait, doesn't he just have a gun!? ^__^ wow, for a second there, i wasn't sure how you would end chapter 79. ohhh, it was so good! i wonder if the inuyasha-tachi will end up going to the states for school or not. it seems that you still have a bit to cover before the end, right. i hope. i don't wan't it to be over. : ( but since you're writing another fic, i'll pull through. ; )
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 05:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story, this chapter was so awesome. Truly, great story. I can't wait for the next chappie! Great work!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 04:12 EST
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Wow wendy. I'd forgotten all about the play. It's funny how these kids have to pretend everything is normal and okay so they can finish school. They have this unspoken, unbreakable bond. I've said it for a couple weeks now. I really don't want this one to end, but you can't hold on forever. It will be nice to see everything start anew in a different time with different circumstances. Until then, I suppose... James
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 20:56 EST
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ok, I finally cought up lol. Pay attention, cuz I got things to say. First, your expressions. you use the same ones over and over again. I suggest you try a little diversity. Second, I realize that the entire story doesn't spread over that much time, but it was really hard for me to follow the actions. Perhaps you could revise, and maybe find ways to make it more precise? Well that's it.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because i am still freakin' over the last chap, i guess i'll have to put all of my trust in that you know what you're doing. : ( *sniffs* you definitely conjure up feelings of disgust in me where naraku is concerned. you make him so EVIL! uh, what a nightmare. great chap!! i'm counting on that next update being posted soon! i need resolution. *__^
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 03:56 EST
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Ah hell... thank goodness Sesshiles has tokijinn... You can't kill Miro off. She loves him. :( And yes, I did laugh at Rin jumping on home-dude's back, but when you left that AN about family guy, I like to have died I laughed so hard. :D I love Ryen, I told ya that. :D I can't wait until you start writing the new story, although I will miss this one. I still say you've far surpassed your "mentor". I guess I'd say. :D And you'd better give sesshiles a lemon before this fic is over. Poor guy needs some ass, no wonder he's such a prig.
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