| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: James Lucient On: January 02, 2006 23:04 EST
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My only complaint is that you misspelled "y'all". It's a big deal to me, because alot of people do, and it's a contraction of "you-all". And this is the funniest shit that they'd say it anyway. Not too fast, and not blue-ball restrictive. I love it. The first time I ever liked that song was when you put it in your work. I thought it was great, I was so into it, and then I realized, I thought I hated that song, and I didn't. You've got quite a way. ;) Sucks it's over, but I couldn't have asked for a better ending. :D
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 01:44 EST
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man u forced me to register cuz I wanted to leave a review. I'm so happy you did an epilogue because I was all sad the story was over, but dude the epilogues were so sad. there's hope though right? *hint hint update soon* pleeease
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! i am looking forward to the next chap. in the worst way. i hope you have it posted soon.
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Title: ch.83
Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 15:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a sad, but beautifully written chap. i feel so heartbroken for inuyasha and kag. i could almost feel my heartaching with hers while she was in the shower at the end of the page. i want things to be o.k. but, i know that sometimes it just feels too hopeless. things look like they can't get any better for sess and rin, though. i am glad for that. miro and sango, too. the advice that the girls have given kag is sound, but hard to swallow. i am going to read the next epilogue now. i don't know what to expect, but i know it's gonna be good. : )
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 02:47 EST
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2nd epilogue... very well written. You have to include Ryen in another fic. I love the commeraderie he has with the boys. You keep dragging out the inevitable, but I am sure I will perish as soon as this fic has ended. Sorry. heh.
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Title: Epilogue1
Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 19:46 EST
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Cannon in D minor is what all of baby's friends had at their weddings. When we get married, we're doing the deed to some awful 80's rap. heh. kidding, of course. Wow, this was such a mature chapter, the depth of the two souls together. It's painful to see people can split ways no matter how much they love eachother. I do believe love lasts forever, but it took me years to figure that out. Can't wait for the last epilogue, and I'll read the 2nd one soon. And by the way, I'm so glad you made it all mutual. I'm sick of all the damned unfairness and guy bashing. GIRLS HAVE A PART IN IT TOO. Thanks for showing that. :D
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Title: Kagome & Sango = Two fucking bakas!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 16:13 EST
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Ungh. I'm soooo not happy *pouts* Why is Kagome such a....GRRR and why is sango such a fucking bitch?! It's like, right after she told Inu that lie, i was like "Bitch, why are you playing god" then Sess said it, lol. I was like, WOOT! I am ultra pissed at Kagome and soooo sad for InuYasha. Ungh once again. I just wanna kick her ass! This is tsill one of the best fics ever done, but i am soooo mad!
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Title: I can't stop crying...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 15:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl, it is SO hard to get me to cry but you did it. I'm so torn up. You demolished me...especially at the end of ep 1. I can only pray taht you turn my sad tears to happy ones...
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Title: Omg
Reviewed By: Dawn0fthenite [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is just a freaking amazing story your such a good fucking author... amazing poor kagome and rin they have been through hell and back im glad tat bastards dead tho. Wow idk wat i would do if someone told me my relationship w my bf was just a high school one if i was head over heels in love with him, poor girl. Your story is so fucking amazing
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Title: What an end!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 06:42 EST
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I'm soooo worried for Kags & Inu, but soooo happy for Sess & Rin. I love that Sess asked InuYasha to be his best man. Finally! Love between the brothers!! I feel bad about the stuff with Bank...did he tell Inu what he saw in their future? man...it looked bad. I'm about to have the same breakfast they're having, lol. And thanks soooo much for the shout out! I was giddy :P It's funny because you're on my shout out list for Rebound! I LUUURVE this fic, you really outdid yourself!
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Title: Sesssssssss!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 06:15 EST
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You finally hit that Chi-Chi! I'm happy for Ryen too...even though I can't stand Kagome's mother. I never liked her, lol. But I never laughed so much...you write everyone so well! I'm off to read the last chap -you know i never got the notice for this (grrr) & missed it when it first came out! Off to read the second..
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Reviewed By: hulagurl_55 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 05:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story..i was so sad to find out that this was the ending chapter..omg..this is such a great story i kept reading it over and over..are you going to make some sort of sequel to this??..i think you should..ill bet that youll get voted for the best fanfic..but only if you want to..i cant wait to read whatever you put up next..excellent job
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Reviewed By: Kairi01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its finally finished omg i have been reading this story since this summer, and i loved it so much, but truth be told that was kind of a weak ending but it tied in very well with the title, will you write a continuation of what happens to Kagome and Inuyasha or no? if not thats ok umm well can't wait to read what you have next :) smiles Kairi
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. congratulations on the awards! you deserve all of them and then some. ryen is for sure one of my faves, if not my all time fav. original character. i like how you have left the story open regarding inu and kags relationship. your angst is the sh*t! so funny with bank being "psychic". ha. i liked that. i am looking forward to the epilogue(s). thank you so much for sharing your gift of writing with us. please continue. : )
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Title: aka Sad_soul
Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 09:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since its the end I figured, wth, let me log in for once. All good things must come to an end, but as the little sadist in me, I never wanted your story to ever end. (You sure you can't pop out 20 more chaps :) ) Your story had everything in it: comedy, drama, horror, romance. This story was an excellant showcase of your talents, and you have a fan for life. I look forward to your next story and (any sequels you might come up with... hint hint). Signing out.. sniffles.. sad soul = ladyrin_remix.
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