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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 › » ] | Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 18:35 PST
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He says he's not mad. Where does that leave him? I'm glad he's told someone, even if it is Miroku - hopefully Miroku will not risk his life with any out of place ribbing. It's gotta be the powder - but I wonder when Inuyasha will figure that out, and I wonder if there is a cure, and what would cure that sort of poison that lasts for at least 6 months - probably longer... hum. You always keep me guessing and looking forward to the next tidbit. Opening e-mail is always such a rush - the next chapter alert is there and I get all excited - so - yeah - I probably need a life - but I'll wait until your stories are finished.
| Reviewed By: Wandrer On: November 28, 2004 18:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those Sentai Jizo things...maybe those would be a cool idea to tell Sango about to let her put them in her garden? Cause u haven't mentioned it in a while and maybe that could be the sort of closing or goodbye to her sorrow and her lost babes. The flowers do represent her memory of them, but maybe each statue could be her goodbye. Well, just a thought and it was a nice add-in to this chappie. Well I've read each of u're other stories and I must say that I loved them and thought it wa a high time I left a review lol. Good luck on the future writing and love your stories! Gemini
| Reviewed By: Nicky ( easier to get to than ff.net) On: November 28, 2004 16:32 PST
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Some friends they are. If they were my friends and they'd said something like that to me...well let's just say that there'd be some head thunmping and possibly some black eyes being passed around. Good chappie. loved the little "man to man" talk between the two... too bad Inuyasha forgot about that freaky powder cause Miroku was right on with his guessing. Well g2g but I'll be back tomorrow.
| Reviewed By: Akihanah On: November 28, 2004 15:34 PST
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Wow, mediminer works much better than fanfiction. I suppose that would be really sweet, by Inuyasha standards. I'd probably have kicked his ass for swearing at my friends, but i'm not Kagome, am i? Excellent, and I thought you said you were taking a break over the holiday? Not that I'm not grateful...
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild ( still sneakin' around without a nametag) On: November 28, 2004 15:31 PST
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Oh wow, I am *so so so so* freaking right. Anway, before I spill over into complete joy over getting the big, bad secret, I must say you're keeping me on the bloody edge of my seat! That and what is really up with Hisadaicho. She's pulling a Norimitsu, totally. Except no one's really talking about her quite as much.
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 15:29 PST
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awwww, Inuyasha:1 Friends:0--- looks like he just made up a few points in Kagome's book. awww. Now all he has to do is tell her how he reaally feels and I will be happy, hehe. Loves it! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 15:24 PST
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I hope that Miroku helps InuYasha figure out what is going on ... poor guy! I loved the "rescue" in the market but I have to say that in those few sentences you have me totally turned me against Kag's friends! Especially Yuka. *twitch* Has the woman never heard of a thing called "tact"?!?
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (sneakin' around without a nametag) On: November 28, 2004 14:20 PST
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Wow...ohhh man! BakaYasha! He's gotta learn to control his inner dialogue, eh? Arrgh though, I must know if I'm right! All of Inu-Yasha's dreams and unravelling control, it *must* be because of the damned powder he picked up in Hisadaicho's cave. Yes? No? Am I barking up the wrong tree?
| Title: OWW OWW! BOW CHICKA BOW BOW.
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (not logged in) On: November 28, 2004 13:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My last review was fudged up for some reason, and I had no time to remedy it because a friend of mine from New York was visiting me, but now that I'm free, I have to just say HOORAAAAAAAAAY. You're right about the way your villains speak, because if Norimitsu from chronicles spoke in ebonics or even in modern grammar, I don't really think that we'd be convinced he was truly as sinister as we'd like. From the Bronx, maybe, but not sinister. Plus, think of any real comic book villain: all evil GENIUSES, aka smarter than you. They have to sound sort of aloof and stiff to pull off that "I'm smarter than you" spiel. Anyways, great update, very unexpected and a WELCOME surprise, mind you. And to all those people who are flaming you and being just plain rude with reviews, to you I say: "stuff it." I love going to this site solely to read her fictions, and a precious few others. Don't insult a great writer unless all you want to read is crap. Don't discourage someone who knows what they're doing just because you're bored and untalented. Tata! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
| Title: mostly for Sueric's entertainment ^_^
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate On: November 28, 2004 10:45 PST
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hmmmmm.... BakaYasha is in the doghouse now. I wonder, how long will he stay there? I love how Kagome was so, well, it was entertaining that she'd let him do anything he wanted and he doesn't quite see that. He does note that she would have let him continue, but didn't he notice that she (eventually) did know it was him, she was still participating, and was willing to continue? Now, when will Hisadaicho make her next move? She has some juicy tidbits of information and I don't think Kikyou is too hard to find-- so is the distruction of Kikyou the next step? An interesting thought. Oh, and does anyone else know about InuYasha's dreams yet? Kagome has snapped him out of them twice now, but what about the others? And (since I'm such a hentai) will we see how much worse those dreams are getting??
| Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 09:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, i love this story so far! :P
| Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter written by you! Though the ending was sad, I still love it... Inuyasha can be such a baka sometimes, though I do understand why he's doing it. Believing he is unworthy is a foolish reason, but wanting to protect her from some unprecievable threat is good enough. Still, he being a baka, letting her think that he was thinking of Kikyou during that! For the record I have nothing against Kikyou, I mean it's not her fault that she was brought back the way she was, that she died with betrayal and bitterness in her heart. Sides they say several times that she's not the real Kikyou, and also she claims that if she did not keep her hatred in her heart then she would not be alowed to stay in the world of the living. She wants her revenge against Naraku too. It is that hatred that dictates her not so great actions, but then the real Kikyou comes around somtimes. Anyway, guess I'll se you later ~Zonza
| Reviewed By: InuyashaGirl2610 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 09:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy, now that's a precarious situation. I was kind of expecting the 'Inuyasha making out with Kagome in his sleep' scenario, since his dreams seemed to be getting more vivid. But saying Kikyou's name...that's gonna cause big problems. Wonder how Inuyasha's gonna fix this. And way to go, for telling off that Jason guy a few chapters back. I've had similar comments made about my artwork, like 'You draw too much Inuyasha, you should do something else'. All I have to say is, "I draw what I want, when I want, however I want, because I draw for me. I just happen to share it with you, so if you don't like it, tough." That jerk deserved your wrath! Your stories are awesome!
| Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 08:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have seemed to captue the idea of Inuyasha and take it one step further. I believe that in continuing this path of events Metamorphosis will reach the same level of greatness that Chronicles was able to. I encourage you to continue in you great writings for I so enjoy reading such great work. On a side note, why is it that Inuyasha allways has so little faith in himself when it comes to his worth as a person, all be it a half-demon person. I hope that in the sequence of this story you come to incorperate a more confidant Inuyasha.
| Reviewed By: Nicky (ff.net is it still down?) On: November 28, 2004 08:12 PST
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OMG! Stupid stupid Inuyasha! You just had to say the name! God! What is wong with you?! Well guess it couldn't happen like that cause it kinda wouldn't be fair. Anywhoo i'd give a longer review but... my annoying family is hovering and bugging me for the computer. So suffice to say that i enjoyed this chapter and feel so bad for poor stupid Inuyasha.
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