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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 › » ] | Title: oooh, Hisa!!!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 10:32 PST
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What is the she-devil up to now? LoL, maybe she's creating her own 'satin dance'... ^_~ and why do I have the sneaking suspision that Kikyou running straight to InuYasha from her encounter with Hisadaicho will turn out to be a really bad idea? What will Kagome say if she sees Kikyou? Oh, the angst!!
| Reviewed By: Prsnr24601-FFICsimon On: November 29, 2004 10:08 PST
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Your stories are a constant source of entertainment. However your reviews are what really keep me in stitches. Especially your responses to the flames. Human stupidity never ceases to make me laugh and I feel you must thank your children, because you are able to take their bloody childish comments, and throw it back in their faces with your clear stated and well deserved air of mental superiority, without sounding just as immature as them or any other writer who is berated. Your quips rival that of Denis Leary (only with less cursing) and that is one of my favorite traits that I look for when reading your reviews. Aside from the fact that you are correct in the age reqiurement for your stories because minds under 17, as well as a few over, have very limited comprehension levels, and should not try to damage what little intellegence they have. Arigato por la bueno cuento Sue-dono. Continue on your pathway and crush whatever chibi puta madre no bakas that get in your way.
| Reviewed By: Prsnr24601-FFICsimon On: November 29, 2004 09:53 PST
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WOW. That's about all I can say. There is nothing worse than that kind of slap in the face. I dont think our dear hero will be getting off the couch anytime soon. But at least he knows (I think)that she does want him too. I once read a fic that had this particular scenario as its conflict, however Inuyasha really WAS unaware of what he had done. Just so you're aware, this is NOT an accusation, merely a statement. The writer was a bit mediocre in the development but overall the story ended fairly adequately. I am more than sure your story will twist into an amazing piece as always, mainly because this is just a minor crisis event in the central plot. I am completely amazed on how your story is progressing, your talent never seems to depleat. One last thing, I know it will be a long eight months, but will it be a LONG eight months? Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: November 29, 2004 09:43 PST
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Hey. I just realized that Kagome's baby will be the biological child of two excessively powerful human er, mystics (holy powered people?)we know Miroku is more powerful than Kaede, and of course Kag is a super strong Miko like her presecessor. So does that mean we're gonna get to see super miko baby?
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You have to chuckle at Kagome's thoughts on how Goraishi on Kouga reminds her of Freddy Krueger, my thoughts went along the lines of "Edward Scissor Hands". 0.o; I wanted to comment before hand on how many disagreements and mixed feelings you've received on how you delivered the plot. I think this is original (Though I've never read another like this…), so my judgments aren't so clouded, but I think you've done an excellent job so far and I have enjoyed it thoroughly. Don't let the simpletons get to you! Your work, your story, your views, your writing. This belongs to no one else, but you! Thank you for sharing with us; we don't deserve your devotion! (Sorry for the lack of reviews on my behalf, I have been reading and keeping up with the updates, but my time is limited right now. Work is crazy now Christmas late night shopping has started, not to mention the amount of abandoned animals this time of year…So they need all hands on deck here at the animal shelter.) Oh, and why do I get the feeling that was meant to be a cliffhanger? Oh, now I can't wait for the follow up!
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 09:03 PST
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Inuyasha must be exhausted, all these months, and those dreams every night, I'm surprised he hasn't been even snappier than normal. Hisadaicho is real evil, how can she deny that she's evil to Kikyou? I trust that Kikyou is just going to warn Inuyasha and maybe even Kagome, but I imagine that something will be misunderstood, as it always seems to be because they refuse to tell each other exactly how they feel about anything - and Kagome will jump to some wrong conclusion… agghh… see now, I'm over thinking all that foreshadowing that you are doing… ***sigh***
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 07:25 PST
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wowo.it's getting really interesting now.. till next time.
| Title: Metamorphosis
Reviewed By: Queen of Hearts On: November 29, 2004 06:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! I just about died when I Kag pounced Inu with her mood swings! *wipes tears of laughter* Poor Inuyasha... eight more months of madness... stupid Kouga too... I agree with Inuyasha on that one ^___^ love your writing as always Sue!
| Reviewed By: laptawenzell (not logged in) On: November 29, 2004 05:51 PST
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Ah ha! Many chapters of angst for my post Thanksgiving reading pleasure. Thank you. I don't usually read so much angst but I have complete faith in your ability to make everything wonderful in the end. Oooh the suffering in the meantime though. Ouch. Love your writing. Feel sorry for your characters, heh (though I'm pretty sure they'll end up happy). Thanks for the great chapters!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (big Inu fan & 37 yrs old) not signed in On: November 29, 2004 02:11 PST
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Wow, InuYasha's dreams are getting worse, (six months worth of build-up) and then he did the proverbial 'foot in mouth' - totally alienating Kagome. What was that dust in the cave anyway, a powdered form of Pheromones? That would explain a lot. Mix that with his strong attraction to Kagome and the whole situation and it's not surprising that it's getting the better of him. Even for a Hanyou, all that lack of sleep is gonna catch up to him. His control was always scetchy. ---- As for Sesshoumaru letting someone 'think' that he is clueless...yes, what better or quicker way to find out what is going on? OOooh, you're good! - - As for that 'mature' flamer a few chapters back...he's out of his mind! Your portrayal of the characters is always spot on (he's probably an 'Adult Swim' victim, lord help us) and his comment of Kagome 'Prostituting' herself...does he even know the meaning of the word? Grrrr, I have no tolerence for stupidity. ----I would like to add that, as a spelling and punctuation nazi myself, I have nothing but praise for your efforts that show in your wonderfully written stories. (I still get typos, don't sweat it!) --- Hmm...will InuYasha confess to Kagome what really happened or not? I'm sure you're cackling behind your hand right now...aren't you? Go ahead, you earned it. Just keep dangling your 'carrot' and I'll keep on reading.
| Reviewed By: Ramona Grimalkit On: November 29, 2004 01:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tonight was the first time I've seen this fic, not surprising, since I haven't been reading as much as I'd like. You've weaved a masterful tale that I can't seem to stop reading. Even now, knowing that I have school in the morning, it's maybe three or four in the AM, and I'm just finishing. I love what you've done with the characters, and I have to say that Sango's plight is heart-wrenching (I have an aunt who had so much trouble having children that her second child was born twenty years after the first.) Inu's posessiveness and Kouga's denseness (sorry if you're a Kouga fan) stick very close to the manga, I appreciate that, and even though the story was set in the future, the characters are still true to themselves and their respective timelines. Please post soon, and meanwhile, I'll be on the lookout for more of your work.
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 23:55 PST
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okay, i just finished reading the second to last chapter and suddenly there was another one. its like christmas. i just had to comment on one things. "Every time you open your fucking mouth, you're sticking something in it that don't belong there!" is there a freudian slip somwhere in that sentence linking to his 'dreams' of Kagome? ...wow...thats really random to say about food, only reason i'm asking. hehe. bakayasha! i was so glad though the way he stood up to her friends. great job.
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 23:41 PST
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"Will you knock that off? You'll get all fat, then I won't be able to carry you. I'll have to roll you around . . . ." let me tell you, i have been working in new york city since thursday...and for anyone who has never been there, its hell on earth at most points (no offense to those who live there, but its hella nasty to commute to). THIS was so LONG NEEDED!!! i have not laughed that hard in soooo long. absolutly wonderful additions as always. baka yasha!!! grr...damn him and that mouth. someone needs to tape it shut and save us all the hassle!!!! kikyo? kikyo!!! of all the things....oi. great rendition with Kouga as well, gotta love the wolf's Perseverance. oh, the wonderful workings of sue's writting. keep it up!!!
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 28, 2004 20:19 PST
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Three new chapters and I wasn't even here to read them! Stupid job gets in the way of everything! So, this was the first appearance of Kikyou, right? I can't remember. But yea, that does suck ass especially when they were getting all hot and sweaty. LOL. My mind is in the gutter at the moment. Can't wait till she has the baby!
| Reviewed By: bLuBeRRi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 18:46 PST
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omg! this is sooooo good of a story! keep writing. U keep me on the edge of my seat. but no offense that love scene w/ that bad girl creeped me out. Maybe it's b/c she's bad...iono, not to say it wasn't a good lemon, juss creeped me out. The story is amazing, i love it, and i love u for being a great writer! keep on truckin~
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