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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 › » ] | Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 10:35 PST
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That's not how I expected Kogua to act, but it makes since because it supports the 'pack'. I love how Sango and Miroku are way to over protective, they are going to drive Kagome nuts, and Inuyasha is already dealing with her being mental with food cravings and mood swings. As I recall, the pregnant state makes the sex drive more like an overdrive... to many rpms.. every single touch, brush, sigh... Oh and the Dreams!! Yikes!!! It could make for some interesting encounters for the early parts of the 2nd trimester...
| Reviewed By: Morly On: November 27, 2004 09:51 PST
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Inu is a baka what a waste of a favor.
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 09:46 PST
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Huzzah! I am so amused that you said that to him (Jason)! I was talking to a friend about his post and I mentioned that I could barely contain myself from going into the grammar of "im 27"! Yes, we shall all bask in the glories that are his typos - *bask* ... Anywho, I LOVE that you are capitalizing on the "pregnant-mood-swings" thing this time! I don't think you did that in previous stories - it's great! I wonder how InuYasha will take it if Kagome starts to get morning sickness ... heh, Miroku better go into some serious hiding! And for the record, I might have let InuYasha scare Sango and Miroku a bit more - it is going to be a LONG nine months with the way that they are carrying on! I can sympathize with them but it would drive me INSANE. Thank you for the pre-Monday update!
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 27, 2004 09:25 PST
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ouuu, yey! It's before Monday and you're writing! Me so happy, hehehe. I have a feeling that the promise Inuyasha made Kagome abide to will come back and bite him in the ass sometime soon? heheheh. Poor Inuyasha. very cute, very funny; I loved it! Who the hell would dare flame YOU of all people. Fucking ridiculous if you ask me..I have a few more comments on that matter my self but I best keep my mouth shut, haha. Just so you know-- you have my support 100% on what ever matter, hehe. Keep up the amazingly good, super-duper, really really really ridiculously great story because I love it, you mom loves it, every one loves it! hehe Bye now! ---Aitu
| Title: good work!!
Reviewed By: kagz On: November 26, 2004 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I know how much trouble you've been having with all your fics, but I'd like to say that I've read pretty much all of your fics, and I can say I'm a fan. You have an excellent writing style thats not too dragged out and keeps attention well, while still being detailed and colorful. ^_^ I'd like to give you some encouragement because I completely disagree with the people who go against your work. I also have to say that this fic is the best that you've portrayed Inuyasha's "interesting" character, and I'm loving it!! You have a very real comprehension of his actions and the reasons behind them. Don't listen to those heavy-weights, they're just trying to get you down. Keep it up for the true fans, because I devour fics faster than cotton candy can melt. hahah. I appreciate how fast you used to get them up, believe me when I say that. I used to wait sometimes one week for one episode. Its great when you get two or more up in one day! Please don't get disheartened, I'm still cheering for you, and I know theres others who agree. Keep up the excellent work! You really are a good author.
| Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:10 PST
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Wow.... I don't know what else to say. This is a great story!!!
| Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (No time to log in!) On: November 26, 2004 15:22 PST
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Ahh! I'm so busy with Turkeyday! I barely had time to read your last couple chapters! Thanksgiving is like a 5 day event with my family and a new turkey for EVERY SINGLE MEAL! LOTS of cooking and little sleeping time let alone internet time! But it was excellent! Now i gotta go before tonights turkey burns!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 15:17 PST
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I'm back to reading Metamorphosis (I didn't want to confuse the story lines because I was also reading Chronicles). ---- I'm glad that InuYasha's tirade was nipped in the bud by Kagome's mother (I believe I said that already) and now he's thinking it over, (again...not his strong point) finally realizing Kagome's reasoning about "why" she's doing this. No, he's still not happy, but at least he's not murderous, (does killing looks count?) ---- Sango seeking out the pouting hanyou to talk things out was a good move on her part. She is kinda in the same place as InuYasha is, only with Miroku as her connnecting point in all this. Not being able to carry a child is a very painful thing to deal with, and her feelings of gratitude will understandably be shadowed by her feelings of guilt. ----Well...what's done is done. "Deal with it!" - - - - Now, Sesshoumaru...hmm...what a sneaky plot to gain his *cough* gratitude. I'm surprised he agreed to spend the night in Hisadaicho's domicile, let alone the offer of a meal. Sess doesn't trust anyone and this is a strange thing for him to do...unless he knows she's up to something and is trying to ferret it out. "Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer." What better way to find information than to be right under the culprit's nose. Sess is no fool, nor is he a pushover (in spite of Rin). - - - - That plot just keeps twisting and twisting...good thing I don't get motion sickness! LoL!! ----Oh, FFnet has been real pissy lately.
| Reviewed By: carelove120 On: November 26, 2004 13:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story this was such a cute chapter inu is so cute when hes protective i can't wait for the next chapter
| Title: Awesome Fic
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic. (have I said that about all of yours?) Anyway, the point is, your fics give me a break from a long day of work... followed by more work. I am constantly amazed by your ability to take two characters, throw them into different situations, and see how it plays out. You are a wonderful writer, and I admire your skills. Now, that I am done fawning... I am really intrigued by this dust. It renders the staff of heads useless... or maybe just their bearer? Jaken always was a pain... I'm not giving him the benefit of the doubt. Silly... ugly turtle lizard thing... Anyway, keep up your amazing work! And snaps for updating over the holidays.
| Title: Hisss!
Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:33 PST
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I know you don't like us using your comment area as a message board - so I will refrain giving "Jason(im 27)" a piece of my mind even though it is obvious that he lacks one of his own ... I am restraining myself in respect to you but if Jason reads this and wants to email me for said piece of mind feel free to follow my profile back and do so *yeah I sign in* (... sorry, Sueric, just had to get that out of my system.)
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:21 PST
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People are flaming you? *rolls eyes* Why don't people realize that the point of fiction is to try out new plots and stories? Hearing the same fluff over and over again is only so amusing. The fact that people actually take the time to post a negative comment to a (fabulous, talented, hard working) author - just shows that they really need to get a life. Your characters are more IN character in all of your fictions then any I have read online. I don't mind stories where Inu or Kag are OC - but the fact that you can change them so much but still keep them "in character" astonishes me (for example the Chronicles InuYasha and this InuYasha both make sense to me … but they are very different). Ignore the teeny boppers and revel in your own greatness - be assured that you have a following and we hang on your every word. (And Happy Thanksgiving by the way!)
| Reviewed By: Lena17 On: November 25, 2004 08:46 PST
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Needless to say..I love what you have written so far. You can feel what the characters are going through. Sango's pain, Miroku's hesitation....Inuyahsa's Anger. I'm just amazed that you are able to feel all of that in order to write it. Impressive.
| Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: November 25, 2004 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should not listen to flames that is not constructive. Write because you are happy writing the story. I am not use to this story but I applaud your ideas & your daring to be different. I once face this problem too. A good friend of mine couldn't conceive & asked if I am willing to be surrogate mother. Its a big decision but she's my friend & I was willing to do for her. But it didn't pan out as age was a factor to it. But your story is real & it does happen in real life. I am slowly getting the hang of your story. So keep it up. All of us who loves your stories are rooting for you.
| Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 23:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story keep up the great job> :D
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