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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 › » ] | Reviewed By: Silent Sky On: November 22, 2004 17:29 PST
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wowzers, it sure is more complicated to leave a review on mediaminer than it is on ff.net...i hope i didn't screw this up... as you may have guessed, ff.net is not working (and here i was, waiting desperately for another chapter, day after day, hope flaring every time i checked only to be dashed to pieces in a surge of disappointment, and you were writing chappies all along. ::sigh:: well, i know now, thanks to angelica incarnate. ^^) so i'm using mediaminer for the time being. hmmm...will kagome really become a surrogate mom? and what will inuyasha do? (lol, i'm picturing kagome six months pregnant and inuyasha still clueless.) and how will sesshy deal with this lavender-eyed vixen? somehow, i can't picture sesshy falling for her charms... that powder is worrying me...and inu got some on his hand...oh dear oh dear oh dear... well, awesome two chappies. you got me guessing (and i love it. predictableness (is that a word? i doubt it...) is one of my major pet peeves when it comes to writing/reading. thank goodness you're immune to the cliche-syndrome. ~.^) i have no clue what's to come. ~Sky
| Title: Okay that's just mean of me. Sorry i promise to update next time.
Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (I'll log in if you update) On: November 22, 2004 17:24 PST
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Inuyasha's so impudent! (I had to look that up) I know what you were talking about a couple chapters ago with the Mother/Mommy thing (though mine is Father/Dad)My father left me and my mother and my mother met my Dad3 years later and I love him and he has always been there fo0r me so i consider him my Dad. Enough about me, That Hidasaicho(?)is evil!!!! Kidnapping Rin! Lord Fluffy isn't going to be very happy!! Andwho is her koishii? (Not expecting an answer) Good luck to Kagome!
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 16:04 PST
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I like the story, but you seem to be repeating yourself alot. Sometimes repetition is good. It adds to the severity of feelings and the importants of events, but it can get out of hand. You do not have to address every problem in every chapter. Repetition is good, but it does get tedious to read.
| Reviewed By: GranolaBar - Not signed in On: November 22, 2004 15:24 PST
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It's been awhile since I've written a review... Well... this story is really good! It's sad that Sango keeps having miscarrages... don't think I spelt that right... oh well. I can't wait for an update!
| Reviewed By: angelica incarnate On: November 22, 2004 14:28 PST
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Your review, oh-creative-one~ Why is poor little Rin always Sesshy-bait? Granted, I'm sure it won't be all that straight forward... Hisa sucks out souls, what could she do to a harmless child? Or to a delicious, cold, seemingly passionless inu youkia...hmmm... InuYasha, you baka. If he can smell that this 'evil force' was born there, why the hell would he go touch it and sniff it at closer range?? Are we sure he's not being possesed by some neko-spirit? Leave the curiousity to the cats. That powder again, eh? What exactly did it do to Oro? Ya know, the problem with powder is that it's tiny and can stick everywhere... Tears Sueric, tears over Sango's garden in the future. Just so you're aware... tears. If anyone has a problem with Kagome being a surrogate after the way she reached such a difficult decision... well, they're just heartless. Beautiful as ever Sueric... I can't wait to see what kind of explosion will go on when InuYasha returns to Kagome. And when will Hisa rear her lovely, yet evil little head again?
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (not signed in) On: November 22, 2004 14:03 PST
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Okay, I was a bit confused by the end of this chapter (as I was probably meant to be....). Did Kagome just decide to be Sango and Miroku's surrogate or what? Dear gods...but if she can't take them through the well...eeeekkk! Please please, let there be another option, because as good a person that Kagome is i just can't see her giving it up (hyman intact or not, she's still a virgin) to Miroku for a good cause. *sweat drop* But I faith in you...I know you'll think of another way.
| Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (nsi) On: November 22, 2004 12:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sueric, Thanks for clearing that up for me, I was just confused, and now I'm all set. Great addition to the plot once again. It makes me sad, though, when Inuyasha is apart from Kagome for a long time, but it was really cute how you brought Kagome's thought to him to try and connect the two. I liked the order you did it in as well, with him thinking it first. Do they have some sort of telepathy thing going on, really? Anyway, great update. Keep it coming!~I.I.C.M.I.I.W. P.S. Is there going to be a kiss anytime soon, because I remember waiting for it with bated breath in Chronicles? Thanks! ~J.
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 22, 2004 12:07 PST
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I had a feeling she would make her decision while InuYasha was gone. Wait till he gets back and finds out now. LOL That'll be an interesting chapter. I don't remember, but did you ever explain how Hisadaicho was born? Or how her army of zombies or whatever they are were born? Because when you described the cave and the cacoons, it reminded me of Aliens and how those things just opened up. *shudder* Blah, I hate that movie. LOL
| Title: ch10
Reviewed By: Flames101 On: November 22, 2004 11:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. Update soon!
| Title: still loving it
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 10:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting hard for me to read, I know that in the end it will work out perfectly, like a well built puzzle but the middle, or more sightly the begining is killing me. It's so well thought out, even if you haven't plotted it, it seems to be. Every detail of Kagome's dilemma entices me to read more, and at the same time makes me want to stop. Since for some reason I can't bare the thought of Kagome going through with this. I can't wait to see how this will work out. Poor Sango and miroku I wonder how they will deal with this. it seems to me that they wouldn't want Kagome to do it, but that brings you back to the whole 'mommy' and 'mother' deal. Which leads me to my question. Sango keeps saying that she wants to have a baby, and wants to everything 'herself' so maybe if you look at it, will Sango be able to see the baby as hers even with the 'mommy' and 'mother' thing in mind? For some reason I can't see her being able to except that ot Kagome for that matter being able to watch the child grow in Sango and Miroku arms knowing that it is technicolly hers and Miroku *shudders* Anyway, i can't wait for you to clear this up for me in the amazing twist of your writting. i kind of just had to get the idea's building in my head out of it so tahts why I write the question under full knowledge that most likely I won't get the straight answer I want. Please keep up the fasinating writing!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: November 22, 2004 10:24 PST
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I thought that the flower garden was a nice touch. It made a connection for Kagome and helped her make her decision. I knew she would. I love how her mother quietly supports Kagome. It shows a lot of trust. ----It's still InuYasha that's going to be the wrench in the works. I don't think his response will change Kagome's mind and I'm not sure how long it will take him to get over the initial shock of it and understand why. He's in for some heavy thinking and soul searching. I hope he doesn't take too long to figure it out, but I have faith in his sense of right and wrong and in how much all his friends mean to him (even if he isn't ready to admit it) that he will eventually come around. Great chapter.
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 09:09 PST
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wow.. this is going to be an emotional story huh...
| Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: November 22, 2004 07:41 PST
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I totally understand about the adopting. I take it further though - I have a "biological father" and a father. My Dad adopted me when I was five. He proposed to my Mother and then came home and spoke with my brother and I and asked if we wanted him to be our father because he wanted us to be a family. It is funny because I look like my Dad and have a lot of his traits - people are really surprised if/when they find out he adopted me. When I got older and started to think about it I really was in awe of what he did - my mother was a house wife throughout my childhood so he basically took on three dependants that day. I said as much to him one time and he assured me that he got the better end of the deal. Yes ... there is much more to being a parent then donating sperm/eggs.
| Reviewed By: Nicky (ff.net sucks) On: November 22, 2004 07:20 PST
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So Sango's garden made it 500 years. Wow! So Kagome's gonna do it. Good. I think it's good.Also good that she realizes that it would be her body and her egg, but not her baby. Will make the process a little easier. Now if only she can tell Inuyasha what she's gonna do. So question that weird powder he touched it's not the same powder that Hid...forgot how to spell her name, anyway it's not the same power that she used on the Oro,is it? Cause i get the feeling that it's not some body powder.And she better not go after Rin or Sesshomaru is gonna kick her butt. Playing with fire that woman is.
| Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 07:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm curious to see what happens next, very curious... Since Kagome said that she would go through with it, and Inuyasha's not coming back for at least a month and it's only been ten days. I wonder what he'll say when he comes back to find Kagome pregnate? I know she wouldn't be that far along to actually tell, but I mean wouldn't he be able to smell it? That's considering, though, if she were to ask them about it before he returns... Such a great story you have going on here! I like it so much so that I'm going to read your other too... though it will take some times, dang don't you like to write such long stories! It'll probably take a couple of days, but I get it done! They'd be great to read on one of the days that I can't sleep... I just had one of those nights a couple days ago... up three days with only two hours of sleep... I hate when that happens, but I don't trust medicenes that are meant to help you sleep... anyways great fic, hope you have a wonderful day and I shall keep you in my prayers ~Zonza
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