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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 › » ] | Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko (can't log in dammit all to hell) On: December 09, 2004 09:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm trying not to be overzealous (whoo, ego-stroking!) by rewarding you will all those tens, but DAMN! This is THE best piece of Inu-Yasha fanfiction that I've ever read. I'm not just saying that. I truly mean it. You are up to date with what is going on in the manga (got to love Ear Tweak), no one is out of character (as in, Inu-Yasha is acting shy about his dreams instead of humping Kagome's leg), and you have a truly despicable villian (a la Naraku). This is what I would write if I could find the damn time (I have 3 kids...just had my daughter, Kagome, in January, so I understand the needing time away thing, lol). This is really, really amazing. And this reminds me that I never got to finish Chronicles (another damn good story), so I have more reading to do. I definitely look forward to more of your pleasant writing!
| Title: wonderful, touching and angsty
Reviewed By: kalaong On: December 09, 2004 08:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best chapter yet. A while back I remarked that it wasn't like Miroku and Sango were just going to pull the kid out of Kagome and kick her out, and I was right in a sense. And also completely wrong. In this chapter you showed how much it hurt her to help those she loved start a family-they would never dream of doing such a horrible thing to her-instead, after nine months of feeling this child move right under her heart, she would have to push it out of her body and mentally sever as many ties with it as she could-not even allow herself to touch it. All her instincts as a woman had to have been saying(babyminefeedholdlove), and she had to sit and watch a a trusted elder to immediately take the baby, still wet with her own fluids, and give it to the one she promised would be its mother. She might have said it was Sango and Miroku's baby for the past nine months, but as you said, it just wasn't real to her until she watched Kaede take the girl from her body and put it in Sango's hands. Now she's hurting, and I bet it will last quite a while. She may be happy at making her friends happy, but it still hurts. Biology can't tell the difference between Mom and mother, and she just got a good strong taste of the latter and what it might have meant to be the former. I bet she's wondering what it would have been like for it to have been InuYasha's baby in her womb, and for it to have been put directly in her hands. But we all know you'll give Kagome just that very soon!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: December 09, 2004 08:37 PST
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Yea Inuyasha! He's is being so swwet about Kagome and the baby. Makes me happy. Hmmm, so Kagome could be her own great-great-great grandmother? Yikes! I'd like to take a moment to submit a pathetic plea. Between your vacation and my travel schedule, I won't get back to this fiction until January. If the last chapter before vacation is going to be an angst-fest-cliffie please put a warning in the beginning like you do for lemons. I really enjoy this story and want to end for the year on a fluffy, happy note. Thank you! Hope you have a great time! As always, thanks for sharing your work with us!!
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 07:17 PST
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wow.. such a hard choice.. now to see what happens when kouga comes
| Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 06:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*twitches* You know what I find really odd about this person who constantly leaves reviews telling you he hates this story? WHY is he still reading it? It's a conundrum, eh? *sighs* Poor Kagome, I feel for her. I can't imagine how hard it must be, but in the end I think she knows it was all worth it to see her friends so happy. *shakes her head* Kouga, Kouga, Kouga. You're just a tad bit dense, aren't you? Kagome so obviously loves Inuyasha and no other. *laughs* This should get interesting! I can't wait to see what happens!
| Title: ::Sobs!::
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 04:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Again, your skill with words amazes me. I think this has to be one of the most haunting and visually stunning chapters you've written, an I'm in awe! The way you present Kagome's feelings is excellent and heartwrenching. Inuyasha was just being an absolute angel to her, and in this situation, i think you nailed him dead-on. Beautiful with a very high 'wow' factor. I literally sobbed while reading the flashback to just after the birth, it was that realistically done. i don't have kids but i can imagine that this was a painfully accurate representation. as far as the reviewer who was rude enough to say that they don't like the fic repeatedly? grow up! just because you don't care for something doesn't mean you have to drive it into the ground, do you? This is one of the most unbelievably well-written pieces, and after something as encompassing as Chronicles it amazes me that you were able to head off in another different direction and still be able to rise to and exceed the already high standard of your work! i know i'm not the only one who wishes you well on your vacation and though i'll miss your daily updates, i'm also sure that it is needed! don't we all need to get away every now and then? thanks for such a breathtaking chapter! Can't wait till tomorrow's update... or the sueric withdrawal we'll be suffering afterward! With all the luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurve of da fluff, =Diane=
| Title: purely in jest
Reviewed By: kalaong On: December 09, 2004 00:57 PST
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Intense! You're not actually gonna leave Kagome in the middle of intense back labor, are you? Give the girl a break! Let her finish, see Sango go nuts over her child, have her wild-beau give her a massage and get some sleep in his arms, then leave that crazy wolf-lord hanging from that spider-youkai's fangs for the duration. You've obviously had kids yourself-would YOU forgive someone for somehow keeping YOU in labor for a week? If you leave off here before going on vacation, Kagome's gonna hunt you down and sic her boyfriend on you!
| Reviewed By: mageofthebooks On: December 08, 2004 21:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay its just not very original to say wow... but... wow ^_^ I really love this story and am just dieing for more. Thank you so so much for working so hard on this for us fans I know I love you for it
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: December 08, 2004 19:27 PST
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YAY! Baby time! This reminds me of my sis giving birth which was unbelievable to watch, but we're not talking about my sister, we're talking about Kagome! LoL I can't believe I'm about to suggest this, but since you're going on vacation soon, I think you should leave us with a HUGE cliffhanger. I know people are going to hate me for saying it, but I think it would be so awesome! I like cliffhangers! I can't help it! Hehehe
| Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 17:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"...have I told you that I think what you're doing for your friends is a beautiful thing?" Have I told you that I think what you're writing is a beautiful thing? It's one of the most original ideas I've ever seen, and I love every second of it! Poor Kouga, what's he gonna do when he realizes it's not Kagome he's been kissing? Of course, he's not the brightest bulb in the lamp so it'll probably take him quite some time to figure it out. *giggles* Anyway, I'm so happy that Kagome's having the baby! Have fun on your vacation, you've earned it! *huggles*
| Title: InuYasha!
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 16:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can't get over this story. Such heartwrenching emotion, and InuYasha! He's just being absolutely the hero, isn't he? Too sweet! Why do I have the feeling that you're going to be completely evil and leave us on a huge cliffie, dangling above a deep, deep ravine? You are, aren't you? Oh… evil, evil, evil… and I love it! Keep it up! have a great vacation! =Diane=
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 15:07 PST
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Nice chapter name. LoL Aha, notice 'Kagome' calls him Kouga not Kouga-kun. (Or do you do that? I forget...too many stories, soo little brain) ---Oh, goodness! Hakkaku and Ginta exposed too. I wondered. Maybe they'll see each other, wouldn't that be a scream? I am sooo evil. Mwaahaaahaaa!!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild(gigglingwith glee) On: December 08, 2004 12:53 PST
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Am I truly demented for enjoying the beginning of Kouga's mind-fuck? Yeah, I am. Anyway, gonna miss you while you're on vacation, but I suppose now I'll get more work done on my own fanfics. (LOL)
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 10:38 PST
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Baby, baby, baby!! Ugh - so glad it's not me! Is she going to have it before you leave for your vacation?? I guess I'll know one way or the other in the next day or two eh? hum.. Kouga is going to be so confused.
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 09:34 PST
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wow.. it's almost time.. yay
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