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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (too much studying to sign in) On: December 08, 2004 07:49 PST
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I'm impressed with InuYasha! From what we got to see of the birth the only time he really lost it was "Get it out of her, damn it!" Granted, not letting mirokuin might have bee a bit much since it's his child, but the monk (or former monk anyways) was informed of the terrible pains that would be inflicted upon him should anything inapporpriate (in InuYasha's mind) occur. Wow, lots of babble to say I'm impressed with InuYasha's behavior... can ya tell I don't want to study? I wonder how Kagome will hold up.... I'd be a mess at this point I think. Awww, now Kouga's gone and kissed her! In a word? Shit. Now "Kagome" is going to go prance in front of Inuyasha smelling like Kouga or Kouga's gonna come hunt InuYasha down smelling like Kagome... oi, what a web woman!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: December 08, 2004 07:25 PST
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Ouuu, what a place to leave off!! Poor Miroku; will Inuyasha even let him hold their own baby? haha And it looks as if Kouga will be up to no good sometime quite soon, te he. Can't wait to see how it all plays out! Hasta Luego! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine (still too lazy to sign in) On: December 08, 2004 07:08 PST
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Push, Kagome, push! Poor girl, did you *have* to give her back labor? That's always the worst... Enjoy your vacation. You've been married almost as long as I have, so you've definitely earned one :>D
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: December 08, 2004 06:16 PST
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Y'know, technically it's a virgin birth, too. I know most religions don't really believe sex is intrinsically evil like Christianity does (and it really bothers me when people write Shinto Japanese teenager Kagome like she's a catholic schoolgirl from the Midwest), but still...Super Miko baby?
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Title: TeeHee
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 05:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the new chappie and am still awed...*Stares at computer screen in trance like postition* You gotta keep writing I mean....this story is amazing!!!!Falsa Labor? why false labor when the real thing could be happening and the baby could pop out and go with Miroku and Sango? Then Inu and Kagome could be together!! And I swear! if Inuyasha doesn't lift the first favor because he's such a baka i'll....i'll...i donno what i'll do but he's so damn stubborn!!!! Lol...anyway's I still love your story and want u to continue!!!Please?!?!
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 05:09 PST
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Can I kill Miroku and Sango yet?
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Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: December 07, 2004 21:28 PST
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hey wonderful chapter, im glad she didnt really have the baby, but just to let ya know... so ya dont think i ditched you on the story... im going on a vacation for 3 days starting tomorrow. so i wont be able to write a review until friday night possibly. but dont cha worry, ill make sure to give a good review to the new chapters you put out when i get back. just please keep writing, and i'll be bak soon! well buhbyes!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: December 07, 2004 20:42 PST
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DUN DUN DUN!!! LOL I could just hear the dramatic music playing when Kouga shook the dust. But wait, if Hakkaku and Ginta were near him, wouldn't they be effected by the powder, too? Or were they just far away enough to not inhale it? I can't imagine how InuYasha is going to react when Kagome REALLY goes into labor. I can see her breaking his hand while she squeezes it. LOL!!
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 17:20 PST
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baths huh? yeah, those two probably need baths. And I really don't want to know what they'd dream...they did get hit with the powder too, right? AWWWWWWW, InuYasha is worried Hisa will get Kagome with the powder too??? How cute! I think it's great that he has to do all the kissing then.... heheh. Enjoy your vacation Sue, you deserve it! We'll be waiting patiently for your return! And an addition to Chronicles too? Wow, we're so loved! LoL
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (what? You thought I'd be signed in?) On: December 07, 2004 17:02 PST
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Uh-oh...Hisadaicho's going to be working on Kouga next. That might be rather ingtruiging, especially if she appears to him as Kagome. Damn that boy's gonna get mind-fucked to the next century. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Meiun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 15:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your style of writing, you have a smooth flow that has a somewhat logical progression and don't jump around alot. The fact that you can make paragraphs and sentences is a definate bonus along with the fact you can spell. I have enjoyed all your works and find you to be an enjoyable author. I look forward to reading more of your works. And now that it sounds like a very stuffy review...:-) Keep up the good work.
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 14:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg omg!!!! that was increadible!!!!absolutely astonishing.....I see sometimes in other fan fics that Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship move way to quickly, but you had the most perfect pace and had a slight tease to it! Lol....please continue!!! will he take Kagome as his mate??? Will Hisadiacho try to deceive them???
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 13:39 PST
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i loved it.. i can't wait to see what else you have for us
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Title: too lazy to sign in ha!
Reviewed By: Agent007 On: December 07, 2004 12:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoy your vacation! (just to clarify) I believe you will be posting til friday the 10th? or at least thurs 9th since you are going on vacation? So updates til then, sweet. =) read people read lol .... so Kouga has been powdered mwahahaha, only bad things can come of this
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Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (what did you expect? On: December 07, 2004 12:19 PST
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Vacation without updates? As in this is the last one until AFTER CHRISTMAS??? ::CRIES OUT IN DESPARATION:: I think I'll die if I have to wait that long. Way to drop the big bombshell right after the worst day of my life, Sueric. Grades are closing(NOT GOOD), I'm getting sick, AND no Metamorphosis FOR THE LONGEST TIME EVER!!! DAMMIT! PLUS NO KISS TO SUSTAIN ME UNTIL YOU GET BACK??! AND WHAT HAPPENED TO KOUGA?? I guess I'll just have to read each chapter of each fiction over and over and over again until you return. Until then, yours faithfully, I.I.C.M.I.I.W. Toodles! PS~ Have fun on VACATION!!! ::grumbles: 'Wish I could go on vacation.'
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