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Title: Absolutely great!
Reviewed By: redhaze03 On: July 06, 2005 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read all this in one go! I started and it sucked me right in! The sotry is well thought out and captivating. I'm dying to find out what happens next! Oh please say you'll continue it soon! *begs* Oooh... I wonder what Eiri-san thougth about that phone call. *rolls around in the drama* Keep up the great work! ~
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Title: chapter 17
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 23:58 EDT
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What?!? Who the hell wants shorter chapters?!?! I'll beat their ass!! One of the reasons I love your story is because the long chapters totally make the wait more than worthwhile! Gah! Well, another great chapter as usual. One thing confused me tho. Considering their age difference, I though Yuki would be shorter than Tohma around the time Nittle Grasper first started, but in the story, you mentioned Yuki lowering his head when kissing Tohma. Maybe I jest have the dates wrong in my head...oh well. I can't wait for the next chapter tho!!
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Title: What next?
Reviewed By: oneechan On: July 05, 2005 06:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's great. I love the pairing Tohma/Hiro and Yuki/Shuichi. But I want know when could I read the sequel? And what happened next? Did Yuki and Shuichi could be together again? Did Mikka discovered it? ...
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Reviewed By: devotee#1 On: July 04, 2005 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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get off your lazy butt, and write some more. J/K. But in all serousness you really should update more often, you devoted reader would love you for it.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 23:12 EDT
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Well at least Hiro and Tohma can breathe a sigh of relief. Kind of. I still feel sorry for Mika though. However, she's a big girl and knows what's going on and what she should do. Mikka, on the other hand... She should just get the heck out of Dodge.
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Reviewed By: Fadingstar On: June 22, 2005 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Can't wait until the end, so keep writing... And do you want me to tell you to get off your lazy butt? Cause I can if you want, but I'm just happy you update and plan on finishing this story, nothing breaks my heart more than a good story that is never finished.
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 23:21 EDT
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O_O There's a Shuichi Vocal Collection?? Where can I find one?!?! I'm assuming all the random blue marks were beta corrections. LoL. I feel bad for Shuichi. He seems to be stuck in one giant misunderstanding all by himself with no one to really turn to. Him and Hiro need to have a heart to heart. oo! Can I be a beta for a future chapter??
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Title: loving it
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. I'm riveted and want to see what happens next. All the lemons were tasty in the last few chapters. I love the intrigue and all the suspicions. Ahh Tatsua, what a catalyst! Yay! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Nishi Imaidegawa On: May 24, 2005 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a unique story line. The tangled webs of love and denial are crossing all over the place. I hope you write a lot more of this, and soon. You really do have a talent that should be heavily exploited. Not to mention the fact that cliffes are EVIL. so PLEASE, for the love of God and everything that is holy, UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: Spicy Marmalade
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 17:27 EDT
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Far East of Edan? wah! That's not a Gravi song title! You're breaking the pattern! I'll have you know that I'm cutting into my schedule for today to read this. LoL. I love the story that much. I saw it in my email yesterday, and since then I've been itching to read it, despite my lack of time. There was one spot where I got a little confused while reading. I don't remember where exactly, but I think it was during the limo scene...somewhere between Tatsuha and Tohma...LoL. I really don't remember. I'm tired. I feel bad for everyone right now. But the way your playing it off is so awesome that I don't want you to end the angst. I wonder if Shuichi will be mad at Hiro for hiding his little affair. He should be. Especially after Hiro went around 'hating' Tohma to the point where they almost missed their opportunity to join NG. oh! And great job to the new beta! I only spotted one mistake this time. LoL. ^_^
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Title: More?
Reviewed By: ”¼•ª On: May 11, 2005 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope we see more soon! ^.^ I absolutely loved it so far and am an absolute junkie for angst-ridden stories. I keep wondering if possessive!Yuki is going to come out of the woodwork (I'm a junkie for that too ^.^) I have to admit, I was a bit hesitant to read this at first but after the first few chapters, all my worries were washed away! You're doing a wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: Fadingstar On: May 09, 2005 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic and can't wait to read the next chapter. Gotta wonder though, what Shu did to make the Gods hate him so much. Finally gets the man he had been lusting over only to have him taken away. And Hiro as well, gotta feel for him. I can't even imagine how it must be to be so confused about your own sexuality. Great story keep it up!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 11:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was supposed to be overall rating of 10 of 10! Darn puter!!
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Title: Juicy!
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm really enjoying this. I'm loving how you brought all the characters into the picture, and all the little intrigues going on. This almost feels like hearing good gossip -- it is that juicy. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. I can't wait to see the reunion between Yuki and Shuichi, and I'm dying, just dying for Hiro and Tohman... that scene between them when Hiro said that thing about being Seguchi's lap dog was just fabulous.. Tohmas pain! Hiro's beginning realization about himself in relation to Tohman, and TOHMA'S SPITEFULNESS!!! Wouldn't ever want to cross him any time soon. Wonderful job. And thank you for letting me relive this story vicariously through the fic -- I can't afford the boxed set to Gravitation any time soon, so I'm just going to have to make due with fanfic.. and this is superb! Love it!! Jana (Dharmasereinty)
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Reviewed By: el blah blah On: May 05, 2005 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE...!!! i love this storrryyy!
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