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Title: comments and suggestions ^_^
Reviewed By: elusive_dreamer On: March 25, 2005 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, the last 2 chapters were really worth the wait! finally, aten got to do it with robbie although i think it would've been more romantic if robbie isn't suffering from amnesia. also, it's just too bad that bakura didn't get to join the ishtars and ryou for a foursome...oh well. anyway, i was just wondering how bakura got back into to the ring to stack his cookies because as i remembered, he can't get back to it last time when yami stabbed him...just wondering... for future chapters, i hope that we would get an update(?) on yami's plot especially those regarding bakura since he'd stripped him of his shadow powers.will ryou be involved in yami's evil plot against the ishtars and itemris? because in my opinion, he's really a good target for yami's revenge since all yamis within the itemri-ishtar family are really attached to him(sorry, i can't help it...he's really my most favorite character here^_^) and especially now that aria and bakura are practically vulnerable too. anyway, i hope you'd let me know of what you think on these, okay? see you next chappie!^_^ note: (1)is this the story wherein aria and aten finally get to duel yami?(2)will diabound be in this story?(sorry about this but i'm really curious since i've read on some yugioh sites that diabound is actually bakura's "weapon of choice" back in ancient egypt. i think it's considered to be really powerful...hey, maybe he can help in dealing with yami! teehee!):p
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Reviewed By: anbuiset (too lazy to log in) On: March 24, 2005 13:15 CST
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Sorry about not reviewing for a while. Being sick sucked. So, how are doing? Hope you are well. I loved the lemons and can`t wait for Robbie to be okay again. The weddingis coming the wedding is coming. I can`t wait. *squels in delight* You need to have everyone send something for the lucky couple. They need prezzies.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: March 23, 2005 20:54 CST
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Question, around how old is Jaimen now? I compeltley forgot, and dude how cool is it that they got together to make love, yay! That is so much happiness! *claps* And it was a lemon and Gilam is now dead and there can be super hapines to that and whoot whoot! Aten wont get caught will he? He's a minor, they dont ahve his finger prints and yeah...!anywho it was super good
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Draza(too lazy to log in) On: March 23, 2005 19:36 CST
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*snickers* i didn't think ppl where capable of "twisting their hips" or whatever Robbie said. Well, we've got a lemon on Aten and Robbie now!! *throws confetti in air and hands Bakurasgirl 3 cans of cookies* as your reward!!!! And GO ATEN FOR KILLING THAT BASTARD!!!
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: lissete ( to lazy) On: March 23, 2005 15:21 CST
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yay! they finally did it! yay Mr. Gilliams dead! hmmmm, i think Tristan and Otoogi should adopt a kid, being adopted myslef and all, but maybe they could foster an older kid. there are alot of great kids that need good homes.
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in) On: March 23, 2005 12:03 CST
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WOOHOO!! A RobbiexAten lemon! I've been waiting forever for that, and I know that everyone else was too! That moment between them was so sweet, and hopefully Aten realizes that his past is just that: his past. I know that the two of them can get through their hardships. And Yami will get his ass kicked and Aria won't lose Kailani. Great chapter! Can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: ......hi On: March 23, 2005 11:34 CST
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I looked away -- then I looked back at you You tried to say -- things that you can't undo If I had my way -- I'd never get over you Today's the day -- I pray that we make it through Making through the fall -- Making through it all And I don't wanna fall to pieces -- I just wanna sit and stare at you I don't wanna talk about it -- And I don't want a conversation -- I just wanna cry in front of you I don't wanna talk about it -- 'cause I'm in love with you You're the only one -- I'd be with till the end When I come undone -- You bring me back again Back under the stars -- Back into your arms And I don't wanna fall to pieces -- I just wanna sit and stare at you I don't wanna talk about it -- And I don't want a conversation -- I just wanna cry in front of you I don't wanna talk about it -- 'cause I'm in love with you *~Kawaii Kit-Chan~*
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) On: March 23, 2005 10:35 CST
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ooh the lemon was sweet! yami aten is growing on me and aria,heh i don't blame her but really. i know she's bakura's daughter but try to have a tiny bitof self-control ^^ so love this story :)
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye (nli) On: March 23, 2005 10:30 CST
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Wonderful! Just wonderful! So many emotions, so much feeling. Wow, just... wow!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: March 20, 2005 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmmmmmmm, that was one delcious lemon! ^_^ Lovely chapters, glad to see Robbie starting to remember a little. Kailani is such a pretty name, Aria's going to have a handful though. Hope they can break the spell soon, the baby must lives, it's too cute! ^^ Even though I missed one ch, it seems like I missed a lot, ah the awesomeness of the story. ^_^ Can't wait to read more. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: mammon On: March 19, 2005 21:04 CST
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Marik: leche moi et saire me renier. je me demande s'il a medomalacuphobia. un chapitre de plaisant, il l'a rendu heureux. j'ai apprécié la scène de citron. le ryou pauvre,soupir. Ne peut pas attendre jusqu'à mercredi, j'attends avec intérêt lui. :)
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Reviewed By: Broken TIme (Don't even ask) On: March 19, 2005 19:40 CST
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Yaaaaaaaay, the man-love was so lovely this time... And yet all I could think of was that time when Seto and Joey caught Marik and Bakura... so classic ^_^
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Reviewed By: I IS ME On: March 19, 2005 19:07 CST
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.... *takes a BIGGG drink of water and passes out*
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Reviewed By: Valea On: March 19, 2005 16:18 CST
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What a wonderfuly sweet chapter and oh how wonderful it was to have the lemon! It was great times. And how sure I am that Aria will have her hands full*sighs* and im pround that she'll be able to complete school! Yay!
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito (not logged in) On: March 19, 2005 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wonderful lemon! ^_^
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