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 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2005 11:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I love Robbie! The whole duel with Keith was wicked cool!! The poor chibi though, I wanna cry over his predicament. I know Aten will say yes, I just know it. Ryou won't care, but... Foursomes are wonderful, but, for Robbie, do what you will. That's your own call.
 Reviewed By: high priestess of sephiroth  On: January 19, 2005 09:17 CST
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wah! there are no paragraphs in ur newest chapter. what happened???? i went cross-eyed reading it but it was worth it. u should fix that chap thou. its sooooooo kawaii that robbie wants to marry aten! kawaii chibis!!!! and maybe the pharoah will die soon ne???? that would be a good chap when or IF that ever happens. Love the story though keep it up and good luck on finishing this story. i can't wait for the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: Nanx [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2005 15:56 CST
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Finally, I've read through all the stories. Tt took a while, but it was really worth it. Too bad I now have to wait until you update again. I really love this story, hope you go on for a long long long while :-)
 Reviewed By: Sakiyama (not logged in)  On: January 16, 2005 14:51 CST
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Oh my god no! Not Malik! He better be okay! I've been so busy I hardly had time to read all these chapters but it's my favorite story so I made time. Poor Marik though...I hope he gets away from Yami. Someone should permanently kill that guy. Like Yugi! And I thought it was so cute when Aten and Robbie confessed to each other. I'm so happy for them! Well I can't wait for the update..this is keeping me in suspense and I wanna know what happens!
 Reviewed By: Broken Time (NLI... again -_-)  On: January 16, 2005 12:46 CST
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Ohn oooo, Malik! Poor tanned bishie!
 Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2005 01:34 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Evilness, such a bad cliffie once again. Lol. I love the suspense it's drawing from so much drama. Malik trapped, that's not good, can't wait to see what happens. And hope Marik's ok too. Robbie's going to beat Kieth's sorry butt, yay! Go Robbie! Stupid b******s, Yami and Kieth and well, the other losers. You left us hanging in all those spots, so much suspense. It's an awesome ch though! ^_^ Can't wait for more. See ya. ^_~
 Title: dethrone the machine king!!
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2005 13:04 CST
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yeah you go robbie!! kick his ass!! man if keith really was a king he and yami would go down in history as the most pathetic, sorriest, worse examples of nnot only kings not only men but as the worse example of human beings (next to several others) for all time!! no one can top of fucked up they are. and when umi gets ahold of eric and jason, i hope he makes them pay. makes me wish they had jsut a tiny bit of shadow magic to bring their own decks to life and really tecah them a lesson. and i wish the monsters would jsut realize 'ehy our king is a fucked up asshole!! i mean how soon will it take to use his own monsters as fuck toys??!' *squeezes eyes shut* ooh bad mental image!! get out get out get out!!! *hits head over and over* but wait, last time yami got bakura i thought the poor thing would never be the same again. least marik is kinda okay but eee malik!! you aren't bullet-proof!! waiting anxiously for the next update!
 Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!)  On: January 15, 2005 12:07 CST
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Wow, that was quite the cliffie! Malik is being fired on, Marik is stuck in the shadow realm, and Robbie is about to kick Keith's butt... Go Robbie, I'm in your cheering squad! Update soon... *dies in anticipation*
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2005 11:50 CST
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Ahhh!! More soon would be a good way to make it up!! I like this!! GO ROBBIE!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Drazaria [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2005 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
umm...you should do it so that marik can wake up during the middle of it....just my opinion. Then he has more incentive to kick yami's ass. Unless, you keep it so that he's still unconscious, but Yami taunts him with that fact. *growles at Eric* you f***ing bastard. *eyes Millenium fork* you'd better stay away from Aten or else i'll...i'll....uhhh...poke you ! Aha! Yes! Fear my pokes!!! *poke poke poke*
 Title: It's miracle I can review again
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in)  On: January 12, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
No, I don't want an NCS w/ Yami/Marik, that's just sadistically evil to Marik and he already has a lot of stuff to worry about. But if you do end up writing it, which I think you will, based upon the amount of votes currently, then have Marik wake up in the middle of it. At least then, Marik could try to rebel, which would be better than him being asleep. *whines* I want to kill Yami again, your story always makes me want to kill him. lol. Stupid Yami. Dramatic ch, very dramatic and very intriguing. Wished Asher could've burned that guy, and he should probably burn all of the Barnes family. Can't believe that bastard tried to hurt Aten. You are worse then Marik in evilness, you made Aten have a heart attack and almost die, now you have someone come try to suffocate him? lol. Poor guy. *huggles* Can't wait til you write more. See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: DragonMistress [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love your fic, um, i like the implied idea better then the NCS, does it count as a vote?
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: January 12, 2005 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Ugh! Robbie came in at the perfect time! I dont know what I would do with out the precious Aten! *teary eyes* I can't beelieve Yami why must he be so persistant! And why couldnt they have caught up with Eric so his ass coulda been killed. I hope the whole family goes off on his ass and kills him and that cult. It makes me so sad! Never a time for peace in the life of the Ishtars and the Itermi's! Anywho, i will be waiting impatiently for the update! I was Asher to go on a burning spreewith the Barnes family! MUWHAHAHAHA! yay!
 Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!)  On: January 12, 2005 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
*blinks* Damn, Marik caught again? That poor man... if you decide to do an ncs, make it a good one... awake from the beginning or half way through, ok? It would be very "Yami-like" to have Marik awake to enjoy, so to speak, the torture he would be about to go through... mind you, Marik is heavily into kink... Oh, and Aten needs at least a couple of chapters of peace, ok? Poor boy... you give him a heart attack, then suffocate him? *shakes head* and I thought Marik was a sadist... Update soon please!
 Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
When do we get to see Barnes go up in flames? I don`t mean to sound sick, but I think Marik should wake up. I think he has the right to want even more revenge, however, in retrospect he would be even more pissed if he slept through it. I mean that would be worse, because he would not have been able to fight back. For Marik that would be a blow to his ego and give him even more reason to want Yami dead. Let`s face it, Marik and Bakura both have big egos, however where Bakura would be the one to crack, I believe it would only spam even more vengence in Marik. I can see him losing it for his kid or Malik and Ryou, even Bakura, but not over himself. It would make more sense. Please take good care of Aten and Robbie. Don`t let anything happen to Malik. I don`t think he could handle jail.
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