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 Title: nice
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too tired to log in)  On: April 10, 2005 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice lemon. evil yami. brainwashed ryou. worried family. sorry can't say much. i just ate some beyond hotter than hell hot sauce and i don't feel so great. nice chapter and lord i hope thy find ryou soon.
 Reviewed By: Broken TIme (...)  On: April 08, 2005 19:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eek! Yami, you are evil, I say! Eeeeeeeeeeeevil! *sighs and grabs mallet* I hate hitting someone who looks like Yuugi... But her deserves it!!*whack whack whack*
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in)  On: April 08, 2005 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gah, damn it Yami! So malicious, must be stopped! Oh no, Ryou! Yami must burn, Yami must die, Yami must be tortured!!! Die DIe dIe!!! *huggles everyone currently residng in the Ishtar/Itemri household* Well, there goes the drama again, lol. That Anzu part was... very...disturbing. *twitches* Was she lying or *twitches* did Yami actually stooped that low to even go near her? :P Anyways, awesome ch. Is is just me or is it that this story more dramatic than all the ones I've read so far? lol. See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in)  On: April 08, 2005 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gah, damn it Yami! So malicious, must be stopped! Oh no, Ryou! Yami must burn, Yami must die, Yami must be tortured!!! Die DIe dIe!!! *huggles everyone currently residng in the Ishtar/Itemri household* Well, there goes the drama again, lol. That Anzu part was... very...disturbing. *twitches* Was she lying or *twitches* did Yami actually stooped that low to even go near her? :P Anyways, awesome ch. Is is just me or is it that this story more dramatic than all the ones I've read so far? lol. See ya. ^_~
 Title: --_--
Reviewed By: Draza(too lazy to log in)  On: April 07, 2005 17:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
*growles* glade that Malik got away...pissed that yami took controle of Ryou...pissed even more because i have a cold...
 Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2005 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This makes me so sad, I wrote a whole reviuew and it died but whatever! It was so sad, a chapter sull of plot thickening! It goes to show that in the local police system, theyre all in on everything together I swear! So no one can get any justice, poor robbie and poor everyone for getting a scare like that! But still it was a wonderful chapter and also there was happiness for robbie and aten kissing and for miranda and her cookies
 Title: Policemen
Reviewed By: oferia (formerly lissete)  On: April 06, 2005 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
ya know not all cops are bad. have you ever FAKE?
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye @_@  On: April 06, 2005 12:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
ACKK!!!!!OMG!! No way.. *slams squeakymalletofDOOM on Yami**sporks him* Take that Yami!! *hugs everyone* *Sporks Barnes* Man oh, man... this is good stuff here! Mega good stuff! Dang girl! Heart attack central! *sits on hands waiting for more!*
 Title: no!
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too tired to log in)  On: April 06, 2005 09:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
ack no! nonono!!! ooh i cannot wait for yami to finally die and suffer for all the hell he's caused!! *multilates rags that used to be yami* nononononononononon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Broke TIme (.... Yeah)  On: April 04, 2005 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwww, that chapter was an agnst fest... Poor Aria ;_;. 50 hour work week? HOLY POO ON A STICK! O.o I'd be EXHAUSTED!!
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in)  On: April 03, 2005 03:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww, poor Aria. *hugs* Glad that Kailani is in good hands though. A much clamer ch than the one before, lol. I liked that cuddle in the end, sweet and cute. ^^
 Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 03, 2005 00:24 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniff* Poor Aria and Kailani. I'm glad Kailani ended up in the best of hands in the end with Rhea. I hope Aria will be okay. And I hope Yami will soon get what's coming to him for cursing her like that! Evil pharaoh!! Anyway, great last few chapters, by the way. Hopefully, I shall return soon. Keep up the good work! See ya next review!
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye (nli)  On: April 02, 2005 13:25 CST
Comment/Review:
wow.. so sad. I'm glad Reah is watching over Aria's baby. *hugs Aria* Poor girl. To have gone through so much. Too young.
 Title: babies
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in)  On: April 02, 2005 12:27 CST
Comment/Review:
i think rhea has to be my most favorite character next to aten and aria, then robbie and umi. so keith was infected... *shakes head* i want to curse and scream but i have to tell myself this is jsut a story (although it happens in the real world more times then we want to admit). the nightmare was jsut, harsh. guilt is one helluva powerful emotion and i agree wiht umi. maybe it's best they wait jsut a little longer. i can't wait to see yami suffer for abusing his power and position. oh, and i may regret this later, but what happened to anzu?
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in)  On: April 02, 2005 03:47 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy crap! The drama, the suspense, the rush, then the lemon, then a cliffie and a probable death? That's a major head spin. @_@ lol. Evil people ruining the reception and causing much damage. Thank god for Asher's idea that killed them, I like how he did that with the dynamites. *cheers* Hope everyone will be alright, esp. Lanie. See ya. ^_~
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