| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: DawnIllusion On: March 05, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yey!!! You have up-dated Purity 3 I am so happy!!! Please keep writing this story it is SOOO good.
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 05, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLROTF, gomen, forgot to mention how hysterical them inu-table manners are!!!! Your depictions propel these Yasha-line boys to stratospheric levels o' yumminess!! Doesn't Ryo realize Nezumi's earthiness is such a good fit for him? :)
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 14:18 CST
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aww poor Ryo, he's so sad. They'll be good together - You'll get them there - after some serious wonderfully emotion filled chapters.. I'm looking forward to the ride!!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 05, 2005 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG,the son assuredly surpasses the father in stubborness!!!!! Then again, both of them do, LOL. What a MESS--does she yet feel the mates' 'pull' yet? Despite the current sitrep, they *do* make an endearing couple. :) Is Ryo going to unbend at least a bit, exhibit some softness to coax his understandably furious mate back?? :)Ohhhhh Sue, you have SO done it again, breathing such life into these marvelous people-er,*characters*, and their setting. I sooooo enjoyed Kagome's interaction--you've written her so incredibly wise; I've always appreciated how your female characters are strong, how they evolve; you're most certainly an asset to your gender!!!! Nezumi/Deidre is another fascinating character who's enjoyable to become acquainted with. :) And as always, arigatou gosemaisu for yet another compelling masterpiece. :)
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 03, 2005 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhhh...Ryo,Ryo--don't you realize *why* you'd *mated* her?!? Can't you even hug your incensed, traumatized mate?? Poor Nezumi...she has an incredible amount to assimilate in *zero* time. Being careful what one wishes for is ever the wise adage...in hindsight. Yet, he may turn out to be the biggest marshmallow in the family!!! As wild as he is, he's nevertheless compelling. Ohhhh, when had Inuyasha become so wise?? I absolutely melted in my chair upon reading his reactions, words. Kagome, to paraphrase Shippou, "she's SCARY when she's mad!!" Please update this FANTASTIC Saga...yep; once again you've heaved me up and over the cliffie precipice awaiting the next, *Sob* ;)
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Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 04:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh geez....Ryo, Ryo, Ryo...you poor stupid baka... I don't know if this is exactly how it works, but it seems to me that Ryo's youkai wouldn't have claimed/chosen Nezumi if they weren't meant to be together. I mean, he didn't have too much trouble keeping things under control with the other ladies. And he seems to honestly care for her (even if young and ignorant enough not to really understand what his heart was telling him). Hmmm. Anyway, it's a really interesting set up! I'm looking forward to seeing where things go from here (I'd say that they couldn't get worse, but that's just NEVER true... LOL!).
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Reviewed By: Pyth On: February 24, 2005 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this fanfic.... seriously, it's such a cool idea dn just amzing and wonderful and fantastic and.... yes. But you have to write more. Now. STOP TORTURING ME. D: Or hurry up and finish Purity 2 so you can write this. I mean, I'm seriously in love with this story. It's such a cool idea, and I love poor Nezumi. :3
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 23, 2005 17:26 CST
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Oi, did that boy get himself into a mess this time. i got to say, i love the family constructed out of purity, much like how i commented in Purity 2, its wondeful. each of the characters being so much like their parents and yet their own person, its great. Ryomaru is definatly InuYasha's child though, no question in my mind about that. i loved InuYasha's reaction though, that was great! hoenstly, woman, i am sincerely awestruck at your talent in writing and creativity. got a question for ya though, just cause i can't seem to figure this one out, how are you phonetically sounding out Ryomaru's name...just cause i can't seem to get a right sound to a Y and O being next to each other. its werid to get out. i dont' know....anywho's, great story and i'm excited to see where you take this after defiance is done! Ja.
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Reviewed By: Deirdre On: February 21, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! She has my name! Yay! I've been reading your stories for awhile now and I hope you know I'm completely addicted. And this one has just sealed it! I love you! I can't wait until you finish Defiance, both for the fact that it rocks and so you can continue this one! Once again, excellent, excellent, excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 14:13 CST
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you know,m its evil to do this to us. i can't wait til you finish up defiance so you can update this one, love to see what happens to that baka
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666::nsi:: On: February 14, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so.. uh... when are you gonna update? Where's kich in all this??
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Reviewed By: Cloud Shadows On: February 08, 2005 21:14 CST
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I LOVE this story! nuff said... good job! please purty please post more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Tenacious D On: February 04, 2005 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA Ha! Truly an original situation. Although it isnt entirely Ryomarus fault. All Nezumi had to say was "stop" and the situation would never have degenerated. But I must say having to worry about being permanantly "mated" to the first person you sleep with would be the worst thing in the world. I would never survive with that kind of limitation on life.
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 02, 2005 11:32 CST
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Hmm..can you say that Ryo is a moron?..Yea, I can. So can, it seems, Yasha and everyone else. Then again, most of the time, it seems like people are ingorant of others feelings till they get hurt. So you know, I think this drama is working out nicely!! :D t ni
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Reviewed By: Kadaede(NSI) On: February 02, 2005 07:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so what I expected from him! I absolutely love this story! Please keep up the good work.
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