| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 15, 2005 09:01 CST
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Ryo should get the Vampire piercings - he'd look hot! (then again, he already does) It's not like the piercing would stay if he takes out the stud or ring anyway... he heals to well.
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Reviewed By: notzathros aka laptawenzell On: March 15, 2005 08:20 CST
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"the way his fuzzy little ears wilted" Awww! Too cute. Makes me want to be in the apartment to see it. I am absolutely loving this story!! Please feel better soon. I wish there was a way I could help you not feel so bad when you get thoughtless reviews. For every person who whines, there are a thousand others who are quietly enjoying your work (plus those of us who are vocally enjoying your work). Courage, brave author. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: oh, and secondly
Reviewed By: Barachan22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 05:41 CST
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Gosh don't you hate it when you forget everything you wanna rave about before you click submit. I also muct concur...crawling men very sexy...crawling inuhanyos....uber sexy...off the charts...I sooooo need a real boyfriend ;) Oh, on question I did have...is it the lawful or the righteous (??) fang that came from yasha?
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Title: The Hidden Inu in Ryo
Reviewed By: Barachan22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I know I've told you before, but I loooove your stories. Big Fatty FLAME to the jerk who thinks sleeping with your best firend when you've had one too many is "glorified rape". Loser. What I do find very intriguing is how much Ryo is like Yasha. A lot of fics like to PWP Kags & Inu into sex right away without ever looking at the reality of transitioning from friends to lovers when there is such a huge sense of doubt and infieroity felt by each partner. Way to tackle the tuff hurdles in real relationships! I can't wait to see jsut WHAT Ryo gets pierced. :)
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Reviewed By: Suze (still too lazy to sign in) On: March 15, 2005 02:59 CST
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0.o My little brain just overloaded thinking of the possible places that Ryo could pierce. OUCH! Nez is such an awesome match for Ryo. She's not one of those vapid b*tches that he had been fooling around with. I love that she butts heads with him and challenges him, and gets frustrated with him, but still cares very much about him. Just what he needs. :) I'm sorry that the idiots have been out in full force. Reading your stories is the highlight of my day. Thank you so much for sharing with us!!!
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Title: thank you sue
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for a uniquely funny and very creative story. I just love how these two won't admit their feelings for one another. Really Sue, it is such an enjoyable story and it seems like although they tend to rub each other like sandpaper, underneath it all they both truly care for one another. What does the name Ryo mean again? Also Sue your answer to me about Metamorphosis really touched me deeply and I am sorry that you were hurt. For years I have stopped doing things I enjoy due to critical hurtful remarks made by people. Sometimes its like losing part of your soul. Sue, your determination to perservere has made me rethink about what I have given up and loss due people's remarks. Maybe I will try again to find the pieces of my soul that I have loss. Thank you Sue cause you made me rethink things. You truly are a good influence. Also, I know this is long and I will keep my reviews short next time but just needed to say what I did. thanks again . J
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Title: Keep on a truckin'!
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 02:12 CST
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Just so you know, I've been following you for quite some time. And I DO have to say that I really enjoyed "Metamorphosis." I could definitely tell that you had a really difficult time with it, not in as it was a bad story, but with the general concept and how people reviewed it. I thought it was brilliant, and those people who are too narrow-minded to understand it should go find a children's book to read, preferably "See Spot Run". Anywho, nuff of my ranting. I'm glad to see you slogging through your stories no matter how stupid some people get. You ARE my top author and I eagerly absorb ALL of your stories. Thanks for making my reading worthwhile. And oh, yeah, this story has an AWESOME plot line and twists... You have GREAT character concept and a person can tell that you put ACTUAL thought into what you write. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (thought I signed in...) On: March 15, 2005 02:05 CST
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Chapter 6: I found Ryo's watching over Nez as she slept to be a beautiful and poignant moment. It's alwasy good to let out the inner softie! Chapter 7: LOL, such a womanizer, ne? "`Stupid bitch,' he thought with a snort. `Just what the fuck was she doing?' Somehow, I don't think Nez has too much to worry about--too bad she can't hear some of his thoughts, ne? And body piercing huh?? OOOOOOH MY. Sorry today was such a bad day Sue. To quote you words do have power. And the power you have over so many always astounds me. The fact that this power comes straight from the depths of you heart is even more amazing to me than the number of people who are there for you.
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryo isn't getting a break, is he? ;) Misunderstood all around...even by a reader?! Grrrrr...Nezumi's crazy about Ryo, she was indeed willing! Angry, a very,very strong character rightfully (IMHO) incensed at his lack of recall of their momentous joining--!! Hnh, I know all too well what that "r" word is, what it reads like, and their joining was the farthest from it!!!!! LOLROTF, he blurting out in an echoing stairwell he can't *smell* if she's wearing undergarments?! That is Classic, a literary Kodak Moment, Sue!!!! Fine form as usual. :) Thanks for Chapters 1-7, and leaving strawberry pocky boxes offering on your doorstep!
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Reviewed By: Kitcat99 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I admit it I've been reading this whole time and have not reviewed once...Heh heh...^^;; Not that I wasn't going to I just haven't had much time. Anyway, like the rest of this series for lack of a better discription I can't wait for the next chapter. I completely agree with your response to that review, calling the beginning a "rape" is just wrong and has no basis to it at all. I would suggest that the person look up the meaning of a word before using it. If you don't know what it means don't use it! I would also just like to say that Nezumi is one of my favorite characters so far. Well her, Gin, and Toga in Purity 2...so much for fluffy-sama getting his way. I can see Gin giving Inuyasha a really hard time in the future. Bawahahahaha! If you keep writing I will keep reading. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 14, 2005 22:09 CST
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Two Words. . .Body Piercing?!!!!! I about LMFAO trying to think of what body part Ryomaru might consider for such. I am too afraid to guess. Looks to me like Ryomaru has his hands filled with plenty of woman in Nezumi. Good match in characters. You were really having a good time when you wrote this chapter and I had a hoot-laughing at the ending. Great job Sueric! I am going to snigger at this all night and following day until I get to read the next chapter. Can't wait! Thank You, Cynbad146 P.S. Why do reviewers leave nonconstructive, negative, and unappreciative reviews. No one makes them read these stories. Sounds like immaturity to me.
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Title: Hmmmm
Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Body piercing? LOL That is not at all what I was expecting! As for the "glorified rape" comment, please don't let people's ignorance hurt you and make you mad. Your stories are wonderful and you're extremely talented. Don't let a few bad (and totally uncalled for) reviews get you down. People tend to write things without thinking about how it might affect the author. Please don't wait too long to update because I just might die. :o) *hugz*
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 21:07 CST
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Okay let me first say that I too am with Ryomaru on "Body piercing?" *amused!* and I thought the sword idea was absolutely fantastic ... now on to the more serious stuff - I want you to know that I adore all of your fics and I admire you as a writer. I hope that none of the comments I have ever left have ever discouraged you in the past and if you ever feel put out by the wording of a question I put then feel free to email me for clarification or to deliver a firm reprimand. I really don't know why people must nip at your heels and I wish they wouldn't because I don't want you to stop writing because I need my semi-daily dose of Inu Fic! I know (or at least I hope I know) that your comment wasn't meant for the likes of me really but I still wanted to make sure you have never felt hurt by my questions/opinions/observations. I really don't comment on other peoples writings as much as I do on yours. I try to comment on your writing mainly because I think you deserve some sort of validation for the hard work you put into your fictions ... I think because you put the effort into writing everyday that I can put the effort into a comment. Anywho - I am rambling - the jist of this is you are well loved and admired. Try to focus on all the fans rather then the jealous/odd few.
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Title: ur kidding?!
Reviewed By: tessiefanfic(not signed in) On: March 14, 2005 20:59 CST
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someone said that?! how could they? that is just the most horried thing. some people just dont' understand. i have read and loved each and everyone of ur stories. that makes me sick that someone would say that. i hope this doesn't make u stop writing. one of my other fave authers stopped and i dont' know why. please don't stop. no matter what, i will always read ur stories. i love all of them. tessie_fanfic(as stated above, not signed in)
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: March 14, 2005 20:52 CST
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Well now...that is a very interesting turn of events. Body piercing makes me pale..unless in the ears. And I'll admit, piercing on the eybrow nose, or anywhere else causes me to cringe more then...well I don't know what...but istill! Poor Ryo...:P
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