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Reviewed By: bloomz-baby On: March 15, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT!!!! I KNEW HE'D GET PIERCED THERE!!! Love the story! ;)
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: March 15, 2005 22:36 CST
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ahahahhaa. man...good stuff..
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious. I can't believe Nez didn't think Ryo wouldn't pierce something. Like he could really back down from a challenge like that. As if... Glad to see that you didn't decide to wait a couple days to update. Thank you! :o)
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Reviewed By: notzathros aka laptawenzell On: March 15, 2005 21:19 CST
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Oh no! Cast out! That's generally a bad sign when you sepwrate a hanyo from his mate. Toga almost died. Surely Kagome knows this. This is all going to end in tears. Of course in previous stories, after the tears comes the fluff. Look at me, waiting so patiently(drooling like Pavlov's dog).
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Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy to see that you put this chapter up, you must of been really upset about that comment that person left you, I'd probly be to if someone did that to me @.@! Metamorphosis was a great story and it >:^( sucks to see people being asses to you because you're an wonderful author. :) I enjoy sitting down and reading your stories :) So far I'm hooked on Purity 3..something about the '2 friends that care about each other but wont admit it' stories I love the most and the nipple peircing is hilarious lol. Awesome story :)
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Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 19:35 CST
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This one was definately very funny. I loved how he continued to play with his nipple ring. I'm still laughing. And hmm now that Mommy says that they shouldn't stay together anymore that should make things really interesting!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-nsi On: March 15, 2005 19:29 CST
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OMG, I couldn't stop laughing with this chapter. I could just picture Ryo flicking his nipple ring in front of Inuyasha. I could just see the face Inuyasha was making. I wonder what Kagome said to "help" the situation. Can't wait till the next update. Please keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: rowan_lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:56 CST
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I sooooo called it! Ryo getting his nipple pierced....now he is forever engrained in my mind as "nipple ring boy" just like one of my guy friends, who also contanstly played with his nipple piercing as well. (psst...this is kamackie from the board if you haven't figured it out yet). Awesome chapter Sue! Ryo and Nez are so entertaining!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:40 CST
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I am glad. I worry sometimes that the wording of what I write could be taken the wrong way. But please make sure to tell me if I ever do overstep my bounds or if I can ever help in any way (because I eternally owe you one for including that wizard of Oz reference!). I love the way that you have set up the plot - Ryo can't be with anyone else because he is mated but he can't remember mating ... so he really is getting a punishment without remembering the crime! I hadn't thought about how clever this plot set up was until this chapter. And as for Kagome and Yasha's impromtu visit - I loved that whole scene! I can totally visualize them - "stop playing with it" *snickers*
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:39 CST
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Hmmmm...Because I really like your writing I'm reading this. It's an excellent comedy of errors (or perhaps tradgrdy, i haven't figured it out), but I still find Ryo abrasive at times. Maybe that's the point, I dunno. I have a feeling that this entire story is to teach im to grow up and take responsibility for the feelings and people he hurts. Urg. Perhaps that's too much of an extreme. In any case,I like this story on the concetpual level (and because Nez hits bit too close to home), not nessessarily for Ryo. (No, I'm not trying to mean, but I suppose honesty is just as bad as cruelty)
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Reviewed By: Deirdre On: March 15, 2005 18:23 CST
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Are you stalking me? Honestly! There are so many elements in this story that remind me of myself or people in my life. This is an addicting read and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Suze (really, really lazy) On: March 15, 2005 18:17 CST
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"For kami's sake, will you stop *playing* with it!!" - I think I have my new sig line. ;) Super ouch. I can't believe Ryo went through with it (and the nip of all places!). Then again...I suppose he's not really one to turn down a challenge, huh? Oh man...my side hurts from laughing. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: JaskoLefey [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love the whole purity series. I really love forever. I like the whole mix match that nez and Ryo are. It gives them a sense of realism that most author have lost. Thank you for writing This series
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Title: *ba-link*
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not signed in On: March 15, 2005 18:12 CST
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You tease! Ryo not stay with her anymore?! Grrr... lol I love this story. So great!
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 15, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm LMAO!!! Body piercing,Eeeewwwwww!! LOL!! An Awesome chapter as always...Can't wait for tomorrow...Will he do it? Gotta know, LOL!! Well I'll see ya next time!!!
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