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| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 › » ] | Reviewed By: kyonarai(NSI) On: February 02, 2005 06:30 CST
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Oh Ryo is such a baka! He is just making things worse! Maybe he should stop calling her Nezumi now...though I wouldn't mind being called that, I have four pet rats that I love to death, smart little buggers. Actually, my fellow highschoolers call me 'rat girl' or 'dog girl' rat girl cause I love rats, dog girl because I can growl, bark, and talk about inuyasha nonstop! Anyways, Great job, ignore my mindless blabber.
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 01, 2005 23:30 CST
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MM tells me Chapter 3 has been revised. I notice you frequently revise old chapters, even stuff that was written months ago. I haven't done a before/after side-by-side comparison but everything usually looks about the same (to me). What do you usually end up changing? Layout? I don't usually notice any spelling or punctuation errors in the original versions so it's probably not that.
| Title: gotta love them final thoughts
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 23:17 CST
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Ahhh, Ryo. Like a good majority of males, he seems to have inherited 'the idiot gene'. As much fun as it would be to watch Deirdre make Ryo jump through hoops, I think that they need to connect, not try to 'make up for something' if you will. Deirdre knows, I think, that all she had to do was say stop. And while she didn't have all the information she needed, I still think that 'they' would have happened eventually. Wow, that was kind of a lot of pointless babble. oh well. One more thing-- Gi cracks me up. I love her. Popcorn... rotflmao
| Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 22:39 CST
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Well......it could be worse...or not. Ouch. I'd probably kill a guy friend if he did that. Pobre Nezumi. At least Ryo is trying to make things better. He could be a complete jerk and just leave her completely. I think both his mother and father would kill him for it though. I like the idea behind the story, and think it will be great. (not that your others are shabby..) Well, until you update again..we bow in worship, Update Goddess.
| Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 22:17 CST
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Lovely surprise checking my e-mail and finding out there was a new chapter to Purity 3. Good chapter, it's going to be so much fun watching you torture Inu Yasha' son (and you do it so well). Since your've written this new chapter for P3 does that mean that your ready to write the conclusion for P2?
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 21:34 CST
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Sheesh! Ya did it again! LOL. Great chapter, though I must admit I'm having trouble liking Ryo like I adore Toga. Maybe he just has to grow on me. I guess i just can't believe one of Inu-Yasha's sons grew up so...hmm...well,maybe I do in some respects. You'd think you when it comes to a life parter.... Ehhh, sorry, just babbling.
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 01, 2005 21:28 CST
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=o! Another chapter, hehehehehe. All in all, that didn't go all that bad-- I thought there would be maybe a little sword shoving; or at least some hiding and cowering in fear, haha. I wonder what Inuyasha would do if Gin was in her brother's place instead? Most likely that would have been an entirely different chapter, filled with bloodshed and muder, lol. love, love looooooved it! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: iloveryo15 On: February 01, 2005 20:07 CST
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He seems to keep getting his foot deeper and deeper into the crap he got himself into!! He's never gonna find a way out, poor Deidre...stuck with the baka forever...and not even realizing exactly what the concequences of what they did are. Poor Poor girl...yet...if you're gonna have a one night stand to bind you to a guy forever....it better A. be your best friend B. Be Ryo....cause boy is he HOT!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: February 01, 2005 19:47 CST
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This story is great! Definitely, a new twist/angle on the tale about the son. I have visions that the inside of your brain looks like the computer moniters that one sees in the movie, The Matrix. You know, where thousands of little characters are being deciphered, monitered, intepreted, etc. LOL! No typical fanfic author could keep up with you. It amazes me, how you not only keep a great story going daily, you keep one to three stories going. I'm leaving now, to go and try to figure out how you can do all this unbelievable writing and churn out such emotions. Your devoted fan, Cynbad146.
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 19:43 CST
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Like father, like son... Ryo knows how to screw things up without even thinking before he lets open his trap! lol. Least Kagome didn't castrate him! Inuyasha so loved seeing Ryo squirm. I feel for Deirdre, Ryo has no tact and to admit (in front of her no less) that he couldn't even remember what happened, must have been so hard to take... he is so like Inuyasha, not even realising his best friend is in love with him! Doh!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 01, 2005 19:15 CST
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I absolutely love the track this story is taking! A collossal screw up of a lemon in the beginning and then dealing with the fall out. Totally different from anything I've read before. Very cool! Thanks.
| Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:44 CST
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Yay! You updated this story! Glad to see it! Heh, Ryo is indeed like his father when it comes to dumb things. I really like how you are portraying his character. The story itself is pleasantly angsty as well. Can't wait to see what happens next! -Doc
| Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well worth the wait. . . but you are still evil
| Title: I think mom & dad took that rather well...considering.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:04 CST
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As disappointed as InuYasha and Kagome are with their miscreant son and his philandering ways, and as remorsefull Ryo is, Deirdre is the one really hurting. Every time Ryo says something else (I didn't mean to, I don't remember...etc) her heart breaks a little more. She's loved him forever and to be told they will marry, not asked if she will, with a "it's a done deal, we might as well' attitude from him is just the cherry on top. Now all the little broken pieces of her heart are being smashed, one by one. Ryomaru has some serious damage control to do, right after he starts using his head and thinking about someone other than himself for a change. He's never considered how his actions may effect others, living so carefree. He's not bad, just spoiled. It's time to grow up.
| Title: men...snicker, snicker
Reviewed By: INUKAGLOVER, On: February 01, 2005 17:41 CST
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You did it!! You actually did it!! I am SO happy that you went and posted another chapter. Been waiting..and waiting.. but hey, I know your rules... Anywho, great chapter, and yep, that's definitley Inuyasha's boy there... Don't know when to shut up, do they?
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