| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 17:00 CST
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Wow...bad-bad little boys. By the gods, I can't *believe* they're Inu-Yasha's boys! I mean, sure the attitude is there but where the hell did they pick up that womanizing? Hmm...Miroku's revenge from across time, i suppose....LOL.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:25 CST
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Well, i think that gives away what happens with Toga and Sierra...Oh well. I don't really mind. Poor Nezumi. Baka Ryo. I love the story though. Out of curiosity, how were Toga and Sierra there? Well, happy birthday, and I wish you happinness. I think i misspelled that, but, whatever.
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Reviewed By: Jaxomruth@aol.com On: January 14, 2005 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always amazed by your writing skills. This is the third story that you have going right now. How are you going to keep them all straight? I can't wait to read the next chapter. You did give us a little spoiler when you referred to Sierra as Toga's mate. I guess that means that they are going to get together in the end. I can't wait to see what Fluffy will say. I read about your computer breaking down last night. Bummer. Mine is in the shop right now too so I am having to rely on school computers to keep up with your posting. I am sorry you won't be able to post as often (you have really spoiled your readers by posting so often). I look forward to your next posting.
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Reviewed By: GgBg (Not Signed In) On: January 14, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though you've sucked me in with this story, I can wait seeing as I love P2 and have been waiting on pins and needles for you to add more to it. I actually think that you enjoy torturing us your poor readers by deliberately writing amazingly fantastic stories for us to fall pray too while putting your others on hold. Bad, bad authoress, don't make us come after you (ha, ha). Great story Sueric, I will add this to my favorites and keep my eyes peeled for it.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far. I'm guessing that somethings going to happen between the two but then Ryo might forget? Just guessing. Sorry you had a crummy birthday, but it might seem silly but Happy Birthday (Is your birthday January 13th? Because if it is, its the same day as mine) So happy Birthday. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: January 14, 2005 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh know! I have now also become addicted to this story as well. Pretty sure you could make stories up to Purity:48938293, and I would love it none-the-less. This looks like it's going to be good-- and I mean really good. HEY EVERYONE, COME SEE HOW GOOD THIS STORY LOOKS! I have already fallen in love with the new characters, as well as the old. Also loved the final thought, hahaha. And yey-- Toga and his mate Sierra! It's not like seeing that really gave anything away-- I mean come on--we all know that Sierra and Toga are going to get together eventually--- it all remains a matter of time and angst cutting throughness like stuff, hehehe. (I guess you could always pull a fast one on us a have Purity:2 end up not happily ever after, and this could be a new Sierra-- But I'm not going to lie to you-- I don't forsee that happening. hehehe. Well, what else can I say? All praise Sue, the mighty mighty writer? hehe. Yes, I could say that-- oh, I just did. Cheers to another great start to another great story, as well as cheers to you on your birthday. ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Rinicat (NSI) On: January 13, 2005 23:55 CST
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Reading and her eyes opening wide....oh boy....oh boy.... Whimpers....I wanna be her...have one of the twins in my lap...whimpers....
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: tduke1999 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can see how this story would brighten your day!! it certainly brightened mine, i can't wait to read the rest!!
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Title: yeh!
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 23:18 CST
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I'm sorry to hear that your birthday was so horrible...don't worry mine is going to be i have 2 exams i have to do on my birthday....stupid exams...well anywho this is great i want to read more but i'm sad that your not updating it till your done purity 2...but actually it's very reasonalble cuz i don't think that you have that much time to do 3 stories at once....so i'll be waiting....update purity 2 then as soon as you can...sayounara
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 22:34 CST
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OH a wonderful start to a very entertaining joyride for us readers. RYO RYO RYO....you didn't happen to get this idea from a chat with a certain hentai beta did you?? NO....no....if I remember correctly.....that was a stripper....so it's not this story. Darn those hentai betas!!
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 22:26 CST
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I LOVE IT!! I absolutely ADORE this!! It's your Birthday and you give US a present!! The *gasp* Twins!! Wow...a childhood friend with the secret crush on Ryo...awww! I know how she feels, always being one of the 'guys' and never a 'girl'...Yea verily, it sucketh!! Poor Nezumi...and then to have her 'one and only' literally dropped into her lap...her naked lap! --- Sue, Oh Brilliant Goddess of the Mighty Word and Radient Queen of Updating, you sure know how to set someone up! LMAO!! --- Deirdre, if you don't go for it, I'll never forgive you. The worst thing to live with is regret...which is all you will have if you let that hunk get away! ---- I don't care if Purity 2 has to be finished first, I think I'd wait until doomsday for the rest of this...just don't do that...onegai??
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 21:48 CST
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Oh Sueric!! You're at it again you wonderful woman!!! I'm adding to my list of favs and will wait for more - LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: January 13, 2005 21:46 CST
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Well this looks like it's gonna be fun. I can wait for the updates, your stories are always worth it. Is Nezumi a hanyou or not?
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Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 21:34 CST
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I'm alreayd loving this sotry! It'll be nice to get to know the twins better :) yay! Toga and sieraa..his 'mate' :)
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kadaede( Not SI) On: January 13, 2005 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome start to what promises to be a great story. But if you said that they came upon Toga and his "mate" didn't you just kill part of the plot for Purity 2? And just as something that jumped out at me, who gave you my tomboy mechanic description?? She sounds just like me in real life! It was so creepy to read about "myself" lol! Well anyway keep up the wonderful work.
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