| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Title: WONDERFUL!!
Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, this one of the best stories that i have seen and read in a while-even though its two chapters, its two chapters thats enough to draw the reader in. I love this story and i'm glad i found it. i was rocking in my chair wondering how the two of them would react when they woke up. in my opinion, they took it better than i thought. i predicted much more screaming and some crying. i wonder how Inuysha and Kagome will react when they find out their son has a mate. even more...how will they found out how exactly they became mates...oo! i just cant wait. please update soon...!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 18:08 CST
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Okay, now you're just being mean! LOL. Okay...ummm...Wow, is Ryo is deep shit. Sake, hormones, and hanyou *really* don't mix. Inu-Yasha's gonna neuter him, I'll bet. (Now whether we're talkin' literally or metaphorically, well that's all up to you. LOL.)
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Title: Good Grief
Reviewed By: firetrixs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 11:46 CST
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No pun for poor Ryo and Nezumi. I am entirely waiting for the next chapter, pretty please make as soon as you possibly can. I was wondering if something like this could happen or what would happen if a inu-youkai mated someone that just wanted a one-night-stand.
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Title: Oh Boy!
Reviewed By: Kadaede(Not SI) On: January 16, 2005 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just getting better. And that is so interesting how they got together. I did the same thing with my hubby, got drunk met him...uh...loved him and then dum dum da dum....together forever! LOL, maybe that is why I am loving this story so much!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 03:09 CST
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I must say, that I am SO glad that you went ahead an posted this "second half" of the first chapter of your story! I just took a major head dive into it, now I gotta wait for you to finish the other one. sighs.. oh, well, at least I got you down as a fav author... hopefully it won't be TOO long :)
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Reviewed By: Aitu- not signed in On: January 16, 2005 00:51 CST
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hahahahahahahhahaha. "shit" indeed, Ryo. Ohhh, I can't wait to see everyone's reaction. Hopefully you will tease us later by adding even more chapter. Does reverse psychology work? If so: No matter what you do-- do not add more chapters. ;)If no, pretend that I never wrote that last sentence. loves it, loves it, loves it! I can't get enough, hehehe. Fabulous job! Can't wait for more. bye! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: January 16, 2005 00:50 CST
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Toga had told him that he'd wake up mated one day and not know her name.. So at least he knows her. what a baka
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Title: TASK-- better review than sari-15
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 00:11 CST
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::grumbles:: There was no ignoring going on... no DELIBERATE ignoring anyhow... my little sister called and she was upset about something at home so =P She gets attention too. And another =P as I already finish Rakehell. And you weren't supposed to post this yet anyways, lol. What a shocker! Ryo! The better behaved of the two (IMO anyways) has accidentally mated his best friend... goooood job pup. Leave Japan with her while you can still breathe and walk, rotflmao, cause when your parents get a hold of you...
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:35 CST
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IGNORING you.....This beta resents that remark (but doesn't stop her reading) I EVEN took a break from Rakehell to reread this AGAIN....I mean....it IS a lemon and all. But I was at SUCH a BAD spot to stop and switch stories at....I mean Adam and Jericho just met and fought....and now they started to make out....and you updated P3.........YOU ARE EVAAAAAAAAL!!!!!! So......how the hell are Yasha and Gome gonna take this 'mating'???? MUHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA I have a feeling poor Ryo has a LONG road ahead of him...with NO help from his parents....since he got his baka self into this situation. MUAHAHHAHAHAHAH brilliant!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 15, 2005 22:34 CST
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Wow, a lemon so early. I was prepared to wait a good long time for one. I was wondering about the whole mating thing during the first chapter. Yikes! This is a really nice setup for what promises to be an interesting story! What a great way to complicate a relationship! I loved when Ryo was hoping maybe his brother had robbed a bank. Heh, been there - well sorta. Ugh, my brother was always too smart to get caught. Great sibling but absolutely useless as a distraction.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:34 CST
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YES!!!!
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Title: Me again....
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:34 CST
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Just one more thing... something tells me this is going to be one big oops and a helluva hangover in the morning! Just had to add that! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, I just love your summary! And I can't wait to see how you continue to torture Inu's naughty bad twins! Something tells me that someone is going to get what's coming to him. Can't wait!!!! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 15, 2005 20:35 CST
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Good start. Looking forward to more. Sorry about your computer!!! How frustrating!
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Title: mmmm, the hentai betas favourite bad boys
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 12:26 CST
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I agree with sari-15 in that our discussions involving Ryo and Kich are always beyond entertaining if unrealistic, lol. I can't believe Ryo is doing this and doesn't even realize he's drunk. ::sigh:: The old man will NOT like this and Kagome...... well, I'd run away and never come out of hiding personally. Good to know Toga and Sierra get to return to Japan--at least for a visit, lol who knows if it's permenant. I know all will end well with them, but I wondered where they'd end up. Even knowing what's coming, I can't wait to read it because the edits are sooooo fun =)
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