| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 01, 2005 19:15 CST
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I absolutely love the track this story is taking! A collossal screw up of a lemon in the beginning and then dealing with the fall out. Totally different from anything I've read before. Very cool! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:44 CST
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Yay! You updated this story! Glad to see it! Heh, Ryo is indeed like his father when it comes to dumb things. I really like how you are portraying his character. The story itself is pleasantly angsty as well. Can't wait to see what happens next! -Doc
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Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well worth the wait. . . but you are still evil
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Title: I think mom & dad took that rather well...considering.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:04 CST
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As disappointed as InuYasha and Kagome are with their miscreant son and his philandering ways, and as remorsefull Ryo is, Deirdre is the one really hurting. Every time Ryo says something else (I didn't mean to, I don't remember...etc) her heart breaks a little more. She's loved him forever and to be told they will marry, not asked if she will, with a "it's a done deal, we might as well' attitude from him is just the cherry on top. Now all the little broken pieces of her heart are being smashed, one by one. Ryomaru has some serious damage control to do, right after he starts using his head and thinking about someone other than himself for a change. He's never considered how his actions may effect others, living so carefree. He's not bad, just spoiled. It's time to grow up.
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Title: men...snicker, snicker
Reviewed By: INUKAGLOVER, On: February 01, 2005 17:41 CST
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You did it!! You actually did it!! I am SO happy that you went and posted another chapter. Been waiting..and waiting.. but hey, I know your rules... Anywho, great chapter, and yep, that's definitley Inuyasha's boy there... Don't know when to shut up, do they?
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Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 10:11 CST
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heh, that was funny. Born before 1977? You bet yor ass he was! :D I also think I figured out how they didn't act out his dreams. It's either that they need to do it up the tree, or have oral (or both). Had a hard time remembering what happened in the dream, so it agrivated me a bit. Anywho, great chapter again. Keep up the good work, and just ignore those detractors who only want the lemons.
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Reviewed By: tdgtink85 On: January 26, 2005 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your writing...Ryo is in a heap of trouble already...please update this asap! I can't stand the angst!! haha!
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Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 00:33 CST
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Aw come on! You have to update this one! It's shaping up to be really good! You can't just leave us hanging like that. Please? *bats eyelashes* . Seriously though, good start to this story. I like the idea that InuYasha's son's are less than perfect, and the idea of an accidental mate is kinda interesting (ok, so I'm a little new at IY fanfics since I normally prefer Ranma fics, and this idea has probably been done before, but I still like it). Hope you decide to quit torturing us soon! -Doc
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Reviewed By: Cloud Shadows On: January 21, 2005 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wowie... I have read practically every single inuficcie you have posted.. but i must admit.. THIS IS THE BEST!!!just keep up the good work! hm. im not too good with review.. never done it b4...
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Title: thefaeryofpurejoy
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 21:39 CST
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YOU ARE EVIL. Evil evil evil. I thought leaving us with the toxins in Metamorphasis for a couple days was bad, this takes the cake. I should stop reading. . . well I would but you are too evil to let me. Now I HAVE to know. OMG I hate you! Keep it up
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!! I can't wait for the twists and turns in this one before they realise they belong together! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: January 18, 2005 12:11 CST
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One word....WOW! I can't believe that this was the angst that you set up in this one. Hope it works out alright, cause Ryo is definately SOL in this one. Poor Nezumi....
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 20:51 CST
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Ok, now you're confusing me: normally, you wait a couple of chapters - at least 45, 50 or more chapters with Inu & Kag lol - before you do a major lemon with them. I can understand it if you keep them in character. But in this story, are you sure that Ryo is really Inu & Kag's son??? I know that the story is in this day and age but was it time for Ryo youkai's blood to be a major factor (opposite of his human night?). But it does explain the title of this fic though. Ryo will maybe have to take forever to explain to Nezumi what are the consequences of is lack of control and it might be fun to read and imagine ~_^ Oh, wait, another thought here... If it was is youkai's night, is Nezumi pregnant??? Oh indeed, Forever is the right title. Muah ha ha! LoL MouF
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 05:55 CST
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AAAAGGGGGGG no fair!!! no fair no fair MORE MAS Mucho MAS grrrrr i don't know the word for more in Japanese (looks it up) motto...:D get the idea i like this? "Orion
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you'd leave us with such a cliffhanger!?! That was just mean... lol Ryo was so mean to poor Nezumi; she's madly in love with him and he's all like Damn, I wish my youkai would tell me before it picks his mate ='[ Hell, that's an Inuyasha trait if I ever heard of one! Mean! I felt liking crying for poor Nezumi. Still I'm in love with this soooooo much! Inuyasha's boyz seem to be living life great at the moment; Ryo needs a kick in the gut lol! Maybe Nezumi can help break his defenses down just like our Kagome did for his father. I love Kich, he's seems to be more like Kagome... Can't wait for this one to continue!
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