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Reviewed By: Glenda On: March 23, 2005 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've not reviewed your stories before, and I apologize for that. I just found your stories recently and had been following them on AFF.net - I'm glad I thought to check here for the update to Purity 3! You're one of the authors that keeps me reading fanfiction because you make it worth it, and I appreciate that. You have a very reader-friendly writing style. While I occasionally catch typos, they are rare and I realize that no matter how good you and your betas are, some will always slip through - I've beta'd for other people before and that in itself is a challenge. I don't know why you're getting nasty reviews based on your pairings considering you stick to canon pairings, but I have to wonder just how many underage readers aren't supervised well enough by their guardians. Please remember that there are many readers out there who do enjoy your work, even if we aren't always good about reviewing for you. I look forward to the rest of Purity 3 and hopefully any future work you post. If you do decide not to publish any further stories for the general public, would it be possible for you to post a list of other authors you would recommend? I for one have my favorites, but I certainly enjoy finding new ones! -Glenda
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 23, 2005 10:24 CST
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aww... cuddles and comfort.
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Title: I have decided you are a saint.
Reviewed By: AkuPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't reviewed in a while so I thought maybe a nice review would be something good for you to read (hopefully). Hands down you are my favorite author and your original work is absolutely wonderful. I could never understand why people would flame someone on their choices, it is utterly idiotic. Your writing style is amazing and I have cried at least once in every story I have read of yours. To evoke such emotions are sadness and that hitch in your chest when your two favorite characters are about to share an intimaate moment and a first kiss, it is pure talent that you possess. I just have one question though. Has anyone realized that Ryo's youkai has chosen Nezumi or am I wrong in speculating that? Once again, wonderful job and I will start reviewing all the time now so that you can at least have a few nice reviews prasing your name hehe. And I think that Desideratum was a great start off in that chapter. Maybe if you make a mailing list or a fan listing and post your work on a website that only certain people can access. Oh well. Thank you for continuing to write even if there are idiots and hypocrites out there.
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Title: Error correct....
Reviewed By: Love_Grows_83am I signed in?? On: March 23, 2005 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, this story is just amazing. Don't let the people who(not you) flame you get you down. They b*tch and moan and all but if they don't like the story.... STOP READING IT! I for one would love to see them write a story half as good as yours. Keep on writing, Sue! We love ya! ~Amber (posted again, to correct my own errors...was half asleep when I posted the first time)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how you do it, but in every fic that I've read of yours I've cried in; I'm pretty sure I cried in this story, and if not I know it's going to come.
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Reviewed By: Kidjade On: March 22, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit I am sad to see you chased off of AFF becacuse of a few idiots. Your a great writer one of the best fan fic writers Ive read in a while. Anyway, update often please.
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: fudge On: March 22, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have nothing more to say I love this story keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: sesshie'smaboy On: March 22, 2005 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS FIC!!!!! anyways... i love what you've done with this fic and how you did a perfect personality for one of inuyasha's pups! but ( not that i'm trying to be a nag or anything...) i've thought about it and i don't think sesshoumaru would be with kagura. for some reason it just doesn't seem like she's the one for him. but other than that, your fic rocks!
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Reviewed By: sileath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful and creative story so far. I adore Ryo and Deidre ^_^
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 22, 2005 19:22 CST
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Yeah, conversational progress. These two are so bittersweet. I love this story, I just wanted you to know that.
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Reviewed By: Jesachi/bradhadair On: March 22, 2005 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright... what happened? I can't find your fic on Ascom... did you disclose that account? Please tell me you didn't... but it's alright if you did... quick question... I just read a review concerning Shippou and Rin... where are they? Tell me they're not dead... and is Sierra human? I read the beginning of P2 and Sessh said that Toga can't have a human mate... confusing... maybe I should go read P2 the whole way through... and are you thinking of writing a P4 and writing about Gin? I think that would be amusing... anyway, i'll catch up with you later... either here as Jesachi or on Ascom as bradhadair!!!! Great chappie!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jaxomuth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Jaxomruth here. I couldn't access your fic on Adult FanFiction so I came here. Great Chapter. I feel kind of sorry for Ryo. Maybe he needs to explain to Nez what will happen to him if something happens to her. He just went off. I understand why he was upset but Nez doesn't. Relationships take a lot of work and it is going to take time. Still, there is a part of me that can't wait for them to get together. I think they make a really cute couple. Oh, I had a question from an early chapter. I know that Aiko married a youkai but was it an Inu or another type because you mentioned that her baby had a "fluffy"?
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 22, 2005 17:37 CST
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"Damn, Nez. If I say you should have cared, then I'm an idiot. If I say you shouldn't have, then I'm an ass." Love that!!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: March 22, 2005 17:31 CST
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I think I used up my wordy review quotient for the last chapter. So, this one's gonna be short! Motorcycles. MMMMmmmmmmMMMMMmmmmmmm. Love the continuing baby steps for Ryo and Nez. They're on the right track. P.S. Baka reviewers SUCK! >:(
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Title: Amazing story
Reviewed By: Love_Grows_83(am I logged in??) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, this story is just amazing. Don't let the people you flame you get you down. They b*tch and moan and all but if they don't like the story.... STOP READING IT! I for one would love to see them write a story half as good as yours. Keep on writing, Sue! We love ya! ~Amber
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