| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: DemonicCatGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read all the purity fics so far, and they've all been wonderful. I find myself anxiously waiting for you to update everyday. I just wanted to thank you for your dedication and for continuing this story. You're the best!
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Title: Don't listen to stupid people
Reviewed By: tdgtink85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't listen to those stupid people who are flaming you. There are so many of us who love your work and can't wait for your next chapter. Even if we don't review each chapter. The people who are flaming you have nothing else to do with their life and they thrive on making others suffer. I agree that if they don't like it they can just stop reading it. Please don't stop posting and please repost desideratum (hope i spelled it right) my computer was broken so I never got a chance to read it. What are people's problem with and inu/kag fic? Who do they think he should be with, kikyo? kami i hate her!! Please I beg of you to keep posting, we love you sue!! If all else fails just post them on your site and then nobody can review unless they know ur email or something!!
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Reviewed By: rowan_lynn(nsi) On: March 25, 2005 22:45 CST
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Awesome chapters Sue! Great reading for me since I just got back from Mexico. Looks like I missed some drama....I'll have to go read your new story now!
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Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: March 25, 2005 22:06 CST
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Oh my god... Sueric. I am sitting here with tears streaming down my face. I know this is a fanfic... but, for the love of god, I am sitting here and in my mind's eye, I am so seeing Ryo holding Nez with her telling that story. That was one of the more painful chappies I have read. It was truly beautiful to see Nez open up to Ryo. GEEZ... I'm sorry. but, you really shouldn't give any credit to the a$$h@!es that criticize you. I am not the easiest cry, but, that one hit me. You do that to me... that tells me just how beautiful you are. Thanks Sueric! Devoted follower, Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: March 25, 2005 21:04 CST
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Ahh, I'm loving this so far Sue, though that's no surprise! I adore Ryo. He's like his father...tough on the outside but soft on the inside with a good heart. I also love that Nez is not the typical 'damsel in distress' that so many stories have. She's tough and she has spunk, and that's always so refreshing. I have to say, too, that I love the flashbacks. We know that they're best friends and have known each other for so long, but we haven't had a good look into their past. The flashbacks help with that and allow us a chance to see how deep their friendship goes. I loved the chapter where she fell into the river. Ryo was so worried about her and I loved how he broke up with his girlfriends b/c they didn't like Nez. And dangit, 16 still made me cry the second time through! Probably because this time I know the characters better and am more attached to them. I also love how Ryo is going at Nez's pace with this whole thing. When they were in the forest and he kissed her...that was so sweet and he was so gentle about it *happy sigh* Yay for fluffage!! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for these two! Even though I get no chapters! =p Anyway, I'm loving it so far Sue
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 25, 2005 20:43 CST
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What a horrific event in Nezumi's life!!!! No wonder it's so difficult for her to release the emotions effectively barriered for her to function in life strongly. Arrgghhh!!! Yet...she allowed Ryo to offer comfort, of that which she obviously feels she doesna deserve...yet. :(:( You too have a happy, healthy, Blessed Easter!!
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 19:58 CST
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Sweet chapter I enjoy reading this fic multiple times it's very well written all of your stuff is but the characters Nez and Ryo are just so incredibly well developed. Really well thought out stuff. This chapter was just light and fluffy and incredibly sweet. It even had teh KISSYFACE!!!! Gotta luv that! And I am glad so many people responded to your A/N your an incredible author and deserve the praise you receive. JOO ROCK MEH SOCKS!
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Reviewed By: Akihana... On: March 25, 2005 19:46 CST
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Happy Easter to you too! Wow, that would have been hard. Poor Nez, and only eight too..... no one should have to go throught something like that. Though, nice save on Ryo's part. He sleeps au naturale? Somehow, I expected nothing less. Really great job, and see ya monday, or tuesday, or whenever you update again.
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Title: sigh!
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sigh really beautiful chapter Sue. and YES!!! I love how you connected the: 1. baggy clothes, 2. the hair being pulled back, 3. adversion to blood, 4. dislike of cooking, and her liking wrenches better than dolls. But W0W! WOW! WOW! SUE !! I LOVED HOW YOU TIED IT ALL TOGETHER. ( yup, only you could write it so good). But you know sue I always wondered how she got to be the way she was and man oh man oh man the way you described her feelings of being alone. I really could feel nez's emotions in that part in the pit of my stomach. Great chapter. Well have a happy Easter and Sue I hope I didnt offend you when I asked you to consider drawing the twins and gin. I like your drawings to the stories and I wasnt trying to tell you what to do it was just a request and consideration. So please dont be mad that I asked. Okay thats all so enjoy your weekend and thanks again. J
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Reviewed By: yasha 101 On: March 25, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang that was the most bautiful and sadest chapter yet. This dosen't describe it good enough but this is the best way I could come up with. It was just awsome! keep it up! yasha ps glad your feeling better!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I just bawled my eyes out!!!
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Title: Purity 3: Forever
Reviewed By: GgBg [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Sueric, Go and check your email at gmail I sent you something to cheer you up after reading your reason for removing your stories off of AFF.NET. I'm sorry about what happened to you and I don't get to read or review the stories too often and I really hope I didn't hurt your feelings or make you sad in any way. I really liked this chapter and I felt so bad for Nez. I hope Ryo can bring her some happiness in the next chapter and pooh on her dad for not taking the time to really explain to her what was going on or for being there for each other! Every one deserves the chance to say goodbye or it leaves them wanting for more or feeling unfinished in some way. Until next time keep up the marvelous work. GgBg
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so sad! You made me cry again, Sue! Now my eyes are all red and puffy and I have to go to work! lol Ryo is so sweet, he knew exactly what to do and say. Hope you have a wonderful Easter. God Bless!
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Title: Purity 3
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, unexpected depths, just like his dad. Just Maybe Ogres aren't the only ones like onions and parfaits. Damn, I'm falling as hard for these kids as I did for Ryo's parants. It makes me want to put my arms around them and hold them tight, although if I did, I'm sure my arms would be in bloody ribbons cause they don't know me, but damn, I wish I could. Chapters like this make me feel so good, is it suprising that I want more? Happy Easter to you and your family, Sue, and Happy Easter to all those in your wonderful Purity Universe.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: March 25, 2005 15:12 CST
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hey great chapter! man i feel so sorry for Nez shes been through alot. thanks for the great chapter. i hope you and your family has a happy Easter. Laura
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