| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: someone... On: March 30, 2005 15:24 CST
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Nezumi is being torn up from the inside. You can't take too much of that. I know...personal experience. I don't think she's gonna last very long. Then again, she's lasted for a long time, up until the present. At some point Ryo's gotta figure out whats going on in her head. Even he can't be that dumb.
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:17 CST
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So, when will Nez ask Kagome for her own little kotodama rosary? ^_^ And the tension at the end... ouf... But Nez do have some valide issues concerning Ryo. He didn't prove to her with his past relationships that he can remain faithful to one girl without dumping her after a few nights. So, what are you planning for them... Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 14:16 CST
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Ya know, reading your fan fics makes me wish MY boyfriend had fangs... *sighs* Awesome chapter as always. Have to admit, I am a little suprised Nez forgave Ryo so easily. Maybe she is getting a little more tolerant in her old age... lol
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 30, 2005 14:06 CST
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Wow. Intense. Poor Ryo, this has been so tough on him. It's making him grow up though. I think Nez is starting to come around. Thanks for the chapter.
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Title: Damn it wench!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: March 30, 2005 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the Queen/Empresses/Ruler/Mistress/Goddess/whatever of Sexual tension. Hell Ryo's dripping it so badly that I can feel it, and Nez isn't much better. I'm not asking you to rush anything, that would be stupid, like paying your credit card bills with credit cards stupid, I just thought you should know that we bow before you're mighty angst army and tremble at your ray of sexual frustration. Don't hurt me! I'll be good ::whimper:: (Great chapter, flamers being good? My offer still stands)
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: March 30, 2005 12:52 CST
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KISSYFACE!!!! There is not a single dull chapter in this story I love every last chapter I have read. Poor Nez and Ryo he may be a baka but I actually feel sorry for him. And catching the crackers in his mouth lol thats too funny so remanisant of Inuyasha chasing the stick when kagome threw it. Great chappie can't wait for tomarrow. :) Chapter 20 WOO HOO!!
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Title: AHH desire
Reviewed By: Deep Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well chap 19, so glad that she's reasonable and realized that he being hanyou that fighting is natural to him and his family. and the sexual tension is great!
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Reviewed By: AkuPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryo is such a baka hehe. You would never relly expect Nez to be quesy around blood since she was such a tomboy, which makes the sequence of events even more amusing and interesting. We shall see how this will play into her really becoming his mate. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was GREAT!!! Brothers just can't get along, can they? And Gin's "defeat" of Toga was awesome!
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Reviewed By: WRKagomePK On: March 29, 2005 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, and though I have tried to contact you on yahoo msngr to tell you how much, I am sure you are quite busy and haven't really had the chance to read my messages! Very funny chapter, I love the family's "play time". Great stuff! I am sorry that people are such baka's and got on your nerves so much that you don't post on aff.net, because I loved your fics on there, but none-the-less. Just as long as they are somewhere and I can read them, because you are great! Keep up the amazing work, and I can't wait til' tomorrow. Baka Ryo and his forgetful-ness, poor Nez hates blood and Shippou had to go and mention it! Love your work!! PK
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Reviewed By: InternetlessSuze On: March 29, 2005 19:47 CST
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I haven't had any time to play with my internet being down at home, but I'm bound and determined to stay caught up with P3! (thank you, work internet) Anyhew...loved this chapter! "Dumb. Ass." pretty much sums it up, doesn't it? LMAO! Methinks BakaRyo has a lot of sucking up to do...
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 29, 2005 19:20 CST
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Okay, sorry about the lack of reviews here. I must say that these two are the ultimate baka couple. I enjoyed the little Inuyasha interludes in the last two chapters. I just want to know one thing - is Nez ever going to be able to be completely honest with Ryo? I swear with these two it's like one step forward and two steps back. I do love this story no matter what anyone says. Thank you for writing it, for all of your stories.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:25 CST
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O.o AHAHAHAHA! the rivalry in that family is hilarious!! the fights were soo funny lol and the classic fights with sesshoumaru and inuyasha haha WOW but it must've sucked that kich noticed that way nez wuz feelin b4 ryo did [HER MATE!] i wonder how ryo will get away with that one...mayb he wont? hmm...and wut do u no...me and nez's [deirdre] names are the same but i spell my name differently haha
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: yasha 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the funiest chapter ever!!!!! Way to bring the seshy / Inu rivelry into the story I can definetly imagine inu puting hias bare feet up and seshy swiping at them to funny. The Gen getting Toga thing was awsome I actualy think inu and her brothers keeping the boys away from her is a good thing for thier safety I can just imajine what she'll do to them if they piss her off especialy with the way she easily beat Toga. The ryo kich thing was just clasic. = )Your best chapter yet sueric. jane yasha
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Title: Kick ass!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!!! Kick ass!!!!!!! This time I was rolling on the floor because I was alughin so hard!!!!
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