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 Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2005 09:26 CDT
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Woo-hoo; what a riotous chapter!!WTG Nez--you're working your cute posterior off yet Ryo's chewing your human ear off? I don' Think SO!! How authentic-my spouse used to do the same when I'd managed restaraunts. Awwwww, he 'cooked'--that alone should score points!! Ohhh,that Toga just *had* to comment, didn't he?? Congratulations to YOU, Signora Authoressa, on your impending youkai-grandmotherhood! Couldn't happen to a nicer person. :) Thanks for posting despite everyone so ill--what a nice birthday present for me, and just as I'd fielded a call my own offspring just...in school. Breathing's been extremely difficult lately, but glad to lose breath in laughter,rather than pain! :) T-H-A-N-K-S, and hope everyone recovers NOW! You germs, depart from Sue's house immediately! OSUWARI & Sayonara! HijinKESSOU!!
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: April 05, 2005 08:14 CDT
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Thanks for the chapter. I admire your dedication. You are far,far braver than me!!! Flu SUCKS. I absolutely LOVE this story. It's such a new way of approaching the becoming mates story line (my favorite story line BTW). I love the whole premise of the passionate initial encounter and then having to re-woo and build trust. Words can not adequately express how much I am enjoying watching this story unfold. Many thanks. Hope everyone feels better soon!!
 Reviewed By: LadyBlade (NSI)  On: April 05, 2005 07:50 CDT
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Belated condolences on the influx of sickies, LOL. I know how you feel. Got two boys myself and a baby on the way. Another great chapter btw. I can just see the look on Nez's face when she ate the rice. My sis can burn water, don't ask me how lol. Hope you all feel better soon and here's a few get well wishes from me ^_-
 Reviewed By: jadedlati [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2005 01:58 CDT
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I hope you and your family feel better soon/// i know what it's like... my family just got over being sick.
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: April 04, 2005 23:17 CDT
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Sorry to hear everyone's down with the flu! What a drag. Hope you all feel better soon!!!!
 Title: Sweet!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer  On: April 04, 2005 23:10 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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That was a really nice chapter, and all in the comforts of sleep. LOL!!! That was great...Hope your family gets better soon, It's a nasty strain going around and alot of people end up at the doctors or hospitol with it, so take care and see ya when your better....
 Title: Sickness
Reviewed By: Wlfhund  On: April 04, 2005 20:49 CDT
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Oh Sueric... Blessings go out from my home to yours. You will be in our blessings tonight and the nights to come. Get some rest and I will pray the children get rest too! Lots of hot cider or hot tea, a very warm mineral bath and a nice eucalyptus spray in your bedroom... you should sleep like a dream. Wlfhund
 Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2005 20:03 CDT
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Ewwww. Being sick sucks. Having to care of other sick people....ugh. i feel much sympathy for you. Feel better, Sueric. I'll send magical little elves who will kill the flu virus.....or not..
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: April 04, 2005 19:41 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hope the "flu" is not too hard on you. You definitely need rest and liquids. Taking care of children is time consuming when they are well, not to mention when they are sick, and you are sick also. I totally sympathize with you, so update when it is most convenient for you. I thought the chapter was great. Wondering when Nezumi will give Ryo more of a chance, and also when something will go Ryo's way. He has his father's luck, doesn't he. Ryo is such an interesting character. This story has really, really piqued my interest, so I will be checking in on a regular basis. Thank you so much for all of your hard work. Cynbad146
 Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in  On: April 04, 2005 19:12 CDT
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Yuck, I hope you all feel better =)
 Title: WOW
Reviewed By: lana  On: April 04, 2005 18:46 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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wow!! I love this story! I come home and check for updates everynight after work! I love your charaters, their all so real and Im so happy that your writing. Please Post more soon!
 Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: KagInu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2005 17:28 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This is really rachainu, but I can't log in right now. I'm sorry that you've all been hit with he flu. I hope that you all get better soon! I have to go now, but I hope that you feel beter as soon as possible. Bye!
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2005 17:13 CDT
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In Ryo's internal contemplation on how or when he'd tell Nez about his job, the danger to her if other renegade youkai found out about her was a good point. How can she be aware and take precautions if she doesn't know? Just like with the motorcycle incident, she didn't know that Sierra was in less danger of permenant damage if they had wrecked than Nez would have been...because Ryo hadn't told her so. Lack of communication can be lethal in Ryo's line of work. -- Um...did Nez just meet Ryo's youkai in person? *thinks about letting sleeping dog-hanyou lie* LoL!!!
 Title: awww poor you
Reviewed By: Queen of Hearts  On: April 04, 2005 17:10 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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O__O awww you and the munchkins have the flu? I am so sorry! *send cyber get well hugs and ice packs for fevers* Dont worry about updating, just concentrate on getting better! Big hugs and bags of pocky!
 Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic(not logined in)  On: April 04, 2005 17:05 CDT
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feel better soon, i hate the flu!! take 2 weeks if u need to!! *tosses a box of tissues to sue* tessie
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