| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: scorpia86 On: April 18, 2005 10:48 CDT
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This is a really intense fan fic .You write serious issues very beautifully and delicately. Your chapters capture lots of emotion that most fanfics generally lack,and I'm grateful for finding such an awesome writer that writes the kind of stories that keep you wanting more. I just want to say thank you,and God Bless.
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Title: coolness!
Reviewed By: Lady Mac On: April 18, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Great chapter!! Normally I'd review on ff.net, but I can't view the last 3 or 4 chapters, for some reason. Has anyone else had this problem? Any suggestions on how to get around it? Anyways, great chapter. What's this "new game" ryo is talking about? Sounds like fun, though I'm sure nezumi won't like it at first.. Awesome chapter, as usual! keep up the great work!
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Title: teh Sue is awesome
Reviewed By: rowan_lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 00:16 CDT
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Wonderful chapter again Sue. I'm going to start writing reviews for Chronicles right now....it might take me awhile but I'll get it done! ~ mackie
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Reviewed By: BakaBokken teh unsigned On: April 17, 2005 22:57 CDT
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NO MORE 666!!! XD Just so this isn't utterly pointless, I LOVE P3 so far - you truly outdo yourself! :3 Can't wait for more! ~ with Lurve, Baka. ^^
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 02:12 CDT
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such a lovely chapter Sue! It's fun to see both of them starting to give in and admit to themselves how they really feel. Yuki is just the cutest thing ever! Beast from hell... FEH! Who wouldn't want to play with his ears?!?! Oh, and their kiss was a beautiful moment. The amount of emotional punch you can get into 4 or 5 paragraphs amazes me everytime I read. Wonder who's on the phone? Family? And about that back... will Nez swallow her fears and wonder why he didn't ask her for help in the first place? It shall be interesting to see how they deal with this.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 16, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I like this 'her terms, his game' thing. That mught be very interesting...Excellent chapter, it was really sweet, with the kiss and all. Then Nez is finally making some headway, and she has to go and see Ryo's back...*sigh* I know you enjoy being evil, I just know it. And it makes for a very interesting stroy. So carry on!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 15, 2005 21:03 CDT
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My reviews may seem alittle off. It seems that most of the time ehen I put up a review it gets put up a day late. Anyway great chapter. Dont stop writing. and lemons fdont make a good story. The author does.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: April 15, 2005 20:41 CDT
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Wonderful writing - as always. I must share though - on the bottom of the page of your story on mediaminer they put adds ... and the ones displayed at the end of this chapter - cat training! *Amused* I don't know if those particular adds have been at the bottom of all/most the pages but their existance at the end of this chapter was simply perfect! *sigh*
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 19:52 CDT
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oooh great chapter can't wait for more. update asap, at your convenience, i don't like to rush the writers, it usually makes icky chapters but yours are really good, so... im babbling sorry great chapter, Zirra
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: April 15, 2005 19:49 CDT
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What an incredibley sweet chapter god sue no one writes fluff like you do. SO the baka now realises that he loves her eh?? So much like his father though in that he has a hard time putting it into words. Some of the lines in this chapter where so beautifully written. When Ryo realises his feelings for Nez... poetic is the term that comes to mind. And the angst!!!! lol Joo are teh QUEEN of teh FLUFF and teh ANGST!!!!!! Angst can sometimes kill a story 9 times out of 10 in fanfic angst is very poorly written but JOO!!!! Your angst is as good as JOOR Fluff!!! lol I love how you terroerize these charactors we have come to know and love. :) Another great chapter as always! I so adore this couple.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 19:25 CDT
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aww i wuz afraid it would take a while for those two to make up...aww at least nez made the move to kiss him in this chapter...that shows that shes accepting the relationship more? hmmm but i dont no whats going to happen now that she saw those scars on ryos back....
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Without making it the reason for my review (because your excellent writing, as always, is the true reason for it) I just want to say I am sorry about the trouble you've had with...well, with everything. From insensitive reviews to just plain craziness. I happen to love your style and your stories, and I look forward to your updates. I pay good money for books that sometimes aren't as intriguing as your stories are. Please continue for all of us readers who truly do appreciate you and the time and effort you put into your stories. You're a rock star!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: April 15, 2005 17:32 CDT
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ouch. tough that she has a problem w/ blood... otherwise she could clean them for him. how are they going to get over this problem? and how the heck is he gonna be able to protect her? she leaves the frikkin door UNLOCKED!!! Baka Nez... also, is anyone else having a problem w/ the 'spam protection code'??? guh!
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Title: Whoa. . . .
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. . . . . . I take that back. THIS one was your best chapter. . . . . . . It was just so. . . . . .I. . . . I don't even know hhwo to explain it it was so good. See ya Monday!! Have a good weekend!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 16:44 CDT
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Well, that was a really sweet chapter. Nez is finally starting to let him in, at least piece by piece. But, now I'm wondering what she's going to do about seeing those scratches.
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